Huge sprite comic

[Genesis]

'Allo. I've made a sprite comic and I was looking for some feedback on my design. You see, this thing is huge. I basically have several different stories going on at the same time. Let me know what you think. It may take some time to load considering its size. Trust me, this is nothing like you've seen before.

Click Here (http://www.animearsenals.com/AA_Halloween_Special1.jpg)


--EDIT--

Comic #2: Click Here (http://www.animated-associations.com/aahs2.htm)

This one's been separated into pages unlike the first.

[Loyal]

Trust me, this is nothing like you've seen before.False. I've seen it before. Several months ago. On GameFAQs. :p

As for feedback, I found the humor in it to be rather meh-ish on the whole. Perhaps my tastes in humor have changed, but either way, the way you set it up is just... ick. If you're gonna make it that big, it's probably better off either Animated or put into several different comics. Dial-up users will hate you for an eternity otherwise. <_<

[EDIT]: Okay... So High-speed users will hate you too. =\

[Nikose Tyris]

I hate you. I have high speed. it took my 6 minutes to load and read. split it into multiple comics, work on the humor, and possibly edit out some of the randomness.

[ElfLad]

You know what they say about men with huge sprite comics? They're compensating...

[Kikuichimonji]

I thought some parts were pretty funny, with the grandmother and the flying offscreen and the finding and the running away from her and stuff. I liked it.

[The SSB Intern]

i thought it was ok, but it is a pain to scroll down that much. keep em seperate next time

[Psrdirector]

I couldnt read the bloody thing, my internet shrunk it down to fight in one screen, it is a tiny bar along the side...

[Genesis]

Yar, sorry took it me so long to reply. Hard drive crashed...

Anywho, thanks for the opinions. I'm going to try an break the panels up to fit one on each page. That should work tons better. I'll do that for Part II of the comic.

[Kikuichimonji]

move your cursor over it. You can zoom in. This happens when images are so big that they are larger than your screen.

[Genesis]

This should be much better. I cut the comic up into pages.

Click Here (http://www.animated-associations.com/aahs2.htm)

[Admiral_Kelly]

I read both parts...

I had to save the first part on my computer to read it...

This comic could have been done Sooo much better.

The style was good though; 5 differant things could be happening at once!

But the jokes really arn't that funny.

[Genesis]

This comic could have been done Sooo much better.




I'm always open to suggestions. How could it be better? Anything in particular that didn't pertain to your interest?