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ElfLad
08-21-2005, 07:10 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v488/Obi2/comic.png

A little one-shot sprite comic I made. I feel like continuing it now, though.
Admiral_Kelly
08-21-2005, 07:18 PM
That's funny! So, everyone first goes to Quest High and study both magic and fighting yet everyone is assigned a class and a quest to graduate.

Nicely done.
gurusloth
08-22-2005, 02:19 AM
Well, even I must admit that it wasn't horrible. Waiting to see the next few before a final verdict is rendered.
Meister
08-22-2005, 04:02 AM
Very good! It's put together well, consistently funny, and I wouldn't mind seeing more. :)
Skyshot
08-22-2005, 07:55 PM
I found it funny. My main recommendation, if you plan to continue it, is to update your sprites beyond basic recolors. Also, the two panels showing towards-facing views of the grads in the chairs kinda bug me. You probably would have done well to keep the view of the side-view panels.

Besides that, you might want to do three panels a row rather than two. I give you a before (http://www.freewebs.com/fenrisw/Comic00.html) and after (http://www.freewebs.com/fenrisw/Comic01.html).

Favorite line: "Bartholomew fight good." And I look forward to team-related antics a la Naruto.

Also, do those two dwarves have Thief hair? The horror. :)
Fenris
08-22-2005, 08:03 PM
That should be continued. It is very humorous, and I think you set it up nicely for a sequel.

Somehow, even before I clicked the link, I KNEW my comic would be the example.

Thanks, Skyshot. :) Jackass. =P
ElfLad
08-27-2005, 11:53 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v488/Obi2/comic2.png

Thanks for the feedback, everybody.
gurusloth
08-27-2005, 01:14 PM
Second episode = teh funny. Keep it up, this is actually good stuff!
Admiral_Kelly
08-27-2005, 04:20 PM
Worthy of 8-bit Theater!
Sky Warrior Bob
08-28-2005, 08:32 AM
Didn't care much for the first comic, the second was however far better. You really could do with cleaning up your sprites. In addition, make sure you've got at least all of the regular FF3j poses for your main characters.

Feel free to check out this thread for good spriting examples:
http://forum.nuklearpower.com/showthread.php?t=328

Of course, while this is a good comic & all, I am somewhat disappointed. When I jumped into this thread, I really was expecting a sprite comic that used sprites from the old Space Quest, Police Quest, and King's Quest games.

SWK
Skyshot
08-28-2005, 08:59 AM
What does that staff joke remind of of? Oh, right (http://forum.nuklearpower.com/showpost.php?p=298093&postcount=558). And that fantasy (http://forum.nuklearpower.com/showpost.php?p=302177&postcount=581)...

Seriously, though, not accusing you of copying or anything. I see you're using three panels a row now; that's good. Also, your sprites are picking up. And any advice on that from SWKC should be taken.