A Short Story by Me!

[Crodevillian Team]

Slightly altered to not include the short story, which has passed its prime. I like to keep things "fresh." If, for some reason, you want to read it, PM me. But that's being egotistical and assuming anyone would want to read it. And now I feel like I'm fishing for sympathy, but I'm not. At any rate, I've deleted the story. :-)

[BlackMageGirl!]

Heh, this is definitely your style Croteam, I can tell you that much.

How you added that both mediums are needed to make things work, instead of the pretty princess being dumb and the younger sister being correct in everything. Makes it more real, actually.

Great job. ^^

[Meister]

An excellent story, Croteam. I bow to your writing.

[RickZarber]

That was fantastic. Utterly fantastic. Can this man do no wrong in his creative endeavours? :D

[Gorefiend]

Nice job. Very entertaining. I love the way you get little jokes in every now and then, like:
I wish I got as many reviews as you...
"A few even argued that it was entirely up to the Queen herself to make a decision that would best suit her wants and needs, but everyone laughed at them, so they went home."

Great work.

[CheshireThief]

I give this story the coveted "Applause-worthy" rating.

AW+

[Admiral_Kelly]

I give this a 5/5 rateing.

Good job.

[Dragonsbane]

Croteam...you, sir, have made a really great thing (RGT) in this. I am utterly awed. My mouth hangs open in respect.

[Azisien]

That was pretty good. The structure and lack of errors impress me more than the story itself. It was decent, but the fact that I didn't spot a single problem with the writing in my single read speaks for itself. I surf the Internet, so naturally I expect "teh u r teh hax lol." Or at the very least, a g instead of G. ;)

Oh, right, the short story. It was pretty good.

[Crodevillian Team]

I'm glad my punctuation marks made such an impression on you. Thank you, all, for your very kind remarks.

[phil_]

Croteam, there was a plot. When did you start using such frivolities? Didn't you learn anything from the story?

[Staizer]

At first while I was reading the story I was reminded strangely of Jessica Simpson, and Ashley Simpson, then it started talking about educations and stuff and that was the women's rights movement. Then it started talking politics, addressing how things are today (too focused on careers) and then finally offered a solution: moderation.

That was very insightful even if you didn't mean it to be. I was expecting something along the lines of the Rancher RP, but was surprised and delighted to see something that I and many others can truly learn from.

I bow to you in your strange and entertaining novel writing.