Jared Todd
05-21-2007, 12:12 AM
So I found a beginning book. It needs to be heavilly editted for more filler, it's too much events too quick, but it's actually quite good. The maker of the book is actually pretty good at writing, and the theme of the book is really dark. From what I can tell, the civilization they live in is one planet the size of a city, and the city is really dark and dank. Not only that, but there are spies, and killing and robbing and ball-breaking, it's cool. I don't know where it's going to go, they author only put up a few pages, but they're updating it semi-frequently, and it's quite good. Really dark, though. and it has furries, but that's nothing big, it has at least one human, but there aren't much characters introduced yet. Here's something from it.
"He thinks he's so powerful.." Vince's muffled and computerized voice said on the far left.
The door behind the dragon opened, and eyes were on him.
"So do we have the tape yet..? It wasn't on her body," the coarse and self-important voice wasn't hard to mistake.
"JT, you have to give me more time," he shook his head, "'Sides, how would you know it ain't on her body?"
The tiger smirked softly.
"Well, I got a chance to see up her skirt when I shot her the first three times.." he looked up at the ceiling slightly, "and... well, you saw her clothing. There'd be no other way to hide it."
"Jared.. don't you think you're maybe enjoying your job a little too much..?"
and here's the link. (http://4442424.proboards51.com/index.cgi?board=projet&action=display&thread=1178177532)
"He thinks he's so powerful.." Vince's muffled and computerized voice said on the far left.
The door behind the dragon opened, and eyes were on him.
"So do we have the tape yet..? It wasn't on her body," the coarse and self-important voice wasn't hard to mistake.
"JT, you have to give me more time," he shook his head, "'Sides, how would you know it ain't on her body?"
The tiger smirked softly.
"Well, I got a chance to see up her skirt when I shot her the first three times.." he looked up at the ceiling slightly, "and... well, you saw her clothing. There'd be no other way to hide it."
"Jared.. don't you think you're maybe enjoying your job a little too much..?"
and here's the link. (http://4442424.proboards51.com/index.cgi?board=projet&action=display&thread=1178177532)