[mauve]

Okay, assorted forumites: You know what to do. Tell me where I went wrong.

EDIT: I THINK I've got her skill points, HP/MP/level, EVA, and and Gil fixed. Lemmie know if anything else looks off.



Name: Elsa Veras Race/Job: Hume/ Dark Knight
Level:1

Confusing StuffAttribute Current Rating Maximum
STR 9 +2 25
DEX 3 +1 20
VIT 7 +2 25
INT 8 +2 20
CHA 4 +2 15

HP: 21/21 ACC:4 P.ARM: 7 HP/Level: +11
MP: 20/20 EVA:7 M.ARM: 2 MP/Level: +10


Attack Type Accuracy Damage Special Properties
Scythe. Tier 1 Massive, (STR x 1) +2d6 damage

0 Acrobatics – DEX______________________0 Axes – STR/DEX
0 Acting – CHA__________________________0 Bows - DEX
4 Awareness – INT_______________________0 Daggers – DEX
0 Climbing – STR/DEX____________________0 Brawl – STR/DEX
0 Disguise – CHA/INT____________________0 Guns – DEX
0 Escape – DEX__________________________0 Katanas – DEX
0 Healing – INT_________________________4 Massive – STR
0 Inquiry – INT/CHA_____________________0 Polearms – STR/DEX
1 Language – INT________________________0 Staves – DEX/INT
0 Lockpicking – DEX_____________________0 Swords – STR/DEX
0 Lore (Espers) – INT___________________0 Two Weapons – DEX
3 Navigation – INT______________________0 Weapon Systems - INT
0 Negotiation – CHA
0 Perform – CHA_________________________0 Light Armor – DEX/INT
0 Riding – DEX__________________________0 Medium Armor – DEX
0 Stealth – DEX_________________________3 Heavy Armor – STR/VIT
3 Survival – INT
0 Swimming - STR/VIT)
0 Synthesis (Alchemical) - INT
0 Synthesis (Armorsmithing) - INT
0 Synthesis (Cooking) - INT
0 Synthesis (Machines) - INT
0 Synthesis (Tailoring) - INT
0 Synthesis (Tinkering) - INT
4 Synthesis (Weaponsmithing) - INT
0 Systems – INT_________________________EXP: 0
0 Trade – CHA___________________________Gil: 100
0 Traps – INT / DEX_____________________Destiny: 0
0 Vehicles – DEX________________________Affiliation: Shadow, +3


Armor/Accessory:
Bone Vest (ARM 7, M.ARM 2, Effect: +1 VIT, Tier 1)


Job Abilities: Last Resort, Night Sword

Epic Ability: Soul Eater

Inventory:
Gil- 100
Potion (x2)


Traits: Free Spirit, Inhuman Might

Languages:
Common


Limit Breaks:
None

Magic List:
Lock (2 MP)

Other Stuff
Appearance: Blond hair, athletic build, and tall stature. She wears her hair in an elaborate braided bun and never leaves home without earrings, even though she wears a helmet. Impractical? Probably. But if you tell her this, you'll probably lose some teeth.

Background: Elsa lives for the thrill of battle. Almost obsessively so. Some say, in whispers, that this is because the years wielding the powers of shadow and dark magic have taken their toll on her mental state. This isn’t to say she’s the dark and brooding type, driven by inner torment: Quite the opposite, actually. She seems to be motivated by the single desire to cause as much damage as humanly possible just for the hell of it, and seems to enjoy this pastime immensely. This leads people (fellow Dark Knights included) to believe that she is somewhat insane. Some say this is the result of magical corruption; others blame the influence of her former teacher, a similarly mentally-unbalanced Dark Knight who ultimately met his end trying to fist-fight a dragon “because it looked at him funny.” If you ask Elsa, she’d probably call you unpleasant names.

Quote: "There's a whole wonderful world out there, full of things I haven't killed yet. I mean to change that."