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Token · 11-01-2010, 11:46 PM

Re-did it. Not in second person, because I'm lame, but this should be an improvement. Changed a couple of things around as well. If it's still bad, let me know.

Name: Tergum Capiti.
Gender: Male.
Age: 6 Solar Sweeps
Appearance: Grey skin, with darker gray marks in the shapes of upside-down question marks. His horns curve down from the side of his head, outlining his chin, almost like a pair of mandibles. His hair is cut short, and he�s somewhat lanky. Black T-shirt with a green pokeball outline.
Lusus: Giant praying mantis.
Trollian Handle: antipathicHopper Typing quirks include replacing L with |_, C with [, O with [], and M with ^^.
Blood: Green.
Hive: He lives in a Lawn Ring, a �neighborhood� with about twenty trolls. His own hive is rather tall, with cylindrical offshoots, and a couple of curved flags, almost like scythes. His Hive and his Strife Specibus were both modeled after his Lusus.
Strife Specibus: Penkind
Title: Reaper of Rage
Dreamself: Derse
Interests: Tergum fancies himself a writer, and easily gets distracted by plot bunnies. His neighbors have, in what may or may not be a subtle attempt at trolling, given him the idea that he is a master of comedy; much in the same way that people might tell Earl that he�s a good person. Because of his self-assumed creativity, he also believes he�s much more hilarious than he actually is, and tries as hard as he can to never repeat an insult. This tendency often comes in handy considering his:
Fetch Modus: Rage Modus. Tergum�s Rage Modus is, appropriately enough, fueled by anger. Because hey, if I�m going to be typecast, I�m gonna do it right. Items can only be called forth from the modus if the user truly despises them, and refers to them in a derogatory or insulting manner. However, it can only hold a maximum of six items at a time.
Additional notes: Tergum is sort of an utter asshole, and finds most other trolls annoying. He went through every troll in his hive when he was looking for a Kismesis, but eventually gave up when no one could match his utter disgust towards everyone and everything. Redrom isn�t really his style. He also has a pathological fear of rats.

11-01-2010, 11:46 PM	#94
Token Magikoopa Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 1,789	Re-did it. Not in second person, because I'm lame, but this should be an improvement. Changed a couple of things around as well. If it's still bad, let me know. Name: Tergum Capiti. Gender: Male. Age: 6 Solar Sweeps Appearance: Grey skin, with darker gray marks in the shapes of upside-down question marks. His horns curve down from the side of his head, outlining his chin, almost like a pair of mandibles. His hair is cut short, and he�s somewhat lanky. Black T-shirt with a green pokeball outline. Lusus: Giant praying mantis. Trollian Handle: antipathicHopper Typing quirks include replacing L with \|_, C with [, O with [], and M with ^^. Blood: Green. Hive: He lives in a Lawn Ring, a �neighborhood� with about twenty trolls. His own hive is rather tall, with cylindrical offshoots, and a couple of curved flags, almost like scythes. His Hive and his Strife Specibus were both modeled after his Lusus. Strife Specibus: Penkind Title: Reaper of Rage Dreamself: Derse Interests: Tergum fancies himself a writer, and easily gets distracted by plot bunnies. His neighbors have, in what may or may not be a subtle attempt at trolling, given him the idea that he is a master of comedy; much in the same way that people might tell Earl that he�s a good person. Because of his self-assumed creativity, he also believes he�s much more hilarious than he actually is, and tries as hard as he can to never repeat an insult. This tendency often comes in handy considering his: Fetch Modus: Rage Modus. Tergum�s Rage Modus is, appropriately enough, fueled by anger. Because hey, if I�m going to be typecast, I�m gonna do it right. Items can only be called forth from the modus if the user truly despises them, and refers to them in a derogatory or insulting manner. However, it can only hold a maximum of six items at a time. Additional notes: Tergum is sort of an utter asshole, and finds most other trolls annoying. He went through every troll in his hive when he was looking for a Kismesis, but eventually gave up when no one could match his utter disgust towards everyone and everything. Redrom isn�t really his style. He also has a pathological fear of rats. Last edited by Token; 12-21-2010 at 06:53 PM.