My Guest Commic

SpokAvriel · 08-30-2004, 05:38 PM

I'm a little Depressed about the lack of updates lately.

I know that is being said in other threads all over the boards but instead of bellyaching I am making this thread to post my own Guest commic page/s.

I made a 3 pager but I am only posting the first one now because we missed yet another Saturday.

I'm hosting them in my AOL Space.

I had hoped to wait to see if they chose my work but the complaints make me feel that any page is better than no page.

Feel Free to comment.

Meister · 08-30-2004, 07:13 PM

Not bad at all. Don't hesitate to post the rest of it.

The last three panels are pretty cramped though... other than that, it's built up rather nicely. One might say the panels need more separation, ifyacatchmydrift. Guess it's a preference thing.

Yeah... I'm kinda holding back judgement about the story itself until I see the rest.

SpokAvriel · 08-30-2004, 07:16 PM

Sad thing is.

Because of the ammount of talking in a Game show.

The following pages are no less cluttered but you will see when I post them.

I want to draw it out a little more and see the feedback on the pages as it goes.

BlackMageGirl! · 08-30-2004, 07:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SpokAvriel

Sad thing is.

Because of the ammount of talking in a Game show.

The following pages are no less cluttered but you will see when I post them.

I want to draw it out a little more and see the feedback on the pages as it goes.

I wouldn't know...but can't you draw black lines to seperate the panels a little? It's just an idea that I had...other than that I think it's pretty good so far.

ChaosMage · 08-30-2004, 07:28 PM

Thats as good as alot of Brian's stuff. I demand the see the rest, before I impale you on the four inches of the sword that are currently displayed! =)

SpokAvriel · 08-30-2004, 07:29 PM

Now you see why I revealed the swords hilts first not that dangerous to be impaled by the blunt end.

Meister · 08-30-2004, 07:32 PM

Would it not actually be easier to recognize a sword from the hilt than from the blade?

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BlackMageGirl! · 08-30-2004, 07:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Meister

Would it not actually be easier to recognize a sword from the hilt than from the blade?

[/nitpicky]

I think that's exactly why the blade is being shown first. If they showed the hilt first then it would be too easy to guess which sword it is.

SpokAvriel · 08-30-2004, 07:36 PM

I am showing it hilt first.

Otherwise the betting would leave you with a dozzen frames of them not being able to guess anything from seeing only blade.

Which can be reasonably universal between swords.

Technically all you could tell is something like broad sword, Rapier or Harcatch from the blade.

BlackMageGirl! · 08-30-2004, 07:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SpokAvriel

I am showing it hilt first.

Otherwise the betting would leave you with a dozzen frames of them not being able to guess anything from seeing only blade.

Which can be reasonably universal between swords.

Technically all you could tell is something like broad sword, Rapier or Harcatch from the blade.

*looks at comic again* You're right! DAH!!!!! *grabs nearby chair and spanks face with it*

Sorry about that, I should look before I post.

08-30-2004, 05:38 PM	#1
SpokAvriel TechTV Fan & Bot Designer Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Reno, NV When on Earth (frequently in my fantasies) Posts: 509	Name That Sword Page 1 I'm a little Depressed about the lack of updates lately. I know that is being said in other threads all over the boards but instead of bellyaching I am making this thread to post my own Guest commic page/s. I made a 3 pager but I am only posting the first one now because we missed yet another Saturday. I'm hosting them in my AOL Space. I had hoped to wait to see if they chose my work but the complaints make me feel that any page is better than no page. Feel Free to comment. __________________ :bmage: Febreeze is no match for the power of the Farce, Proof of that is in every banter between Sosa and Brian. Fellow TechTV Fans Miss the Web site look here and remember. http://www.nuklearforums.com/showpo...17&postcount=1 TechTV Images Archive Most of my images are either in my AOL space, I got with my account. Or hosted, thanks to ImageShack for Free Image Hosting Last edited by SpokAvriel; 08-31-2004 at 01:15 PM.

08-30-2004, 07:16 PM	#3
SpokAvriel TechTV Fan & Bot Designer Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Reno, NV When on Earth (frequently in my fantasies) Posts: 509	Sad thing is. Because of the ammount of talking in a Game show. The following pages are no less cluttered but you will see when I post them. I want to draw it out a little more and see the feedback on the pages as it goes. __________________ :bmage: Febreeze is no match for the power of the Farce, Proof of that is in every banter between Sosa and Brian. Fellow TechTV Fans Miss the Web site look here and remember. http://www.nuklearforums.com/showpo...17&postcount=1 TechTV Images Archive Most of my images are either in my AOL space, I got with my account. Or hosted, thanks to ImageShack for Free Image Hosting

08-30-2004, 07:29 PM	#6
SpokAvriel TechTV Fan & Bot Designer Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Reno, NV When on Earth (frequently in my fantasies) Posts: 509	Lol Now you see why I revealed the swords hilts first not that dangerous to be impaled by the blunt end. __________________ :bmage: Febreeze is no match for the power of the Farce, Proof of that is in every banter between Sosa and Brian. Fellow TechTV Fans Miss the Web site look here and remember. http://www.nuklearforums.com/showpo...17&postcount=1 TechTV Images Archive Most of my images are either in my AOL space, I got with my account. Or hosted, thanks to ImageShack for Free Image Hosting

08-30-2004, 07:36 PM	#9
SpokAvriel TechTV Fan & Bot Designer Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Reno, NV When on Earth (frequently in my fantasies) Posts: 509	Um MB Girl (uncomfortable) I am showing it hilt first. Otherwise the betting would leave you with a dozzen frames of them not being able to guess anything from seeing only blade. Which can be reasonably universal between swords. Technically all you could tell is something like broad sword, Rapier or Harcatch from the blade. __________________ :bmage: Febreeze is no match for the power of the Farce, Proof of that is in every banter between Sosa and Brian. Fellow TechTV Fans Miss the Web site look here and remember. http://www.nuklearforums.com/showpo...17&postcount=1 TechTV Images Archive Most of my images are either in my AOL space, I got with my account. Or hosted, thanks to ImageShack for Free Image Hosting

08-30-2004, 07:13 PM	#2
Meister Pure joy Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Germany Posts: 10,689	Not bad at all. Don't hesitate to post the rest of it. The last three panels are pretty cramped though... other than that, it's built up rather nicely. One might say the panels need more separation, ifyacatchmydrift. Guess it's a preference thing. Yeah... I'm kinda holding back judgement about the story itself until I see the rest.

08-30-2004, 07:28 PM	#5
ChaosMage Evil Makes Me Smile Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Where Spyware Comes to Die Posts: 904	Thats as good as alot of Brian's stuff. I demand the see the rest, before I impale you on the four inches of the sword that are currently displayed! =)

08-30-2004, 07:32 PM	#7
Meister Pure joy Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Germany Posts: 10,689	Would it not actually be easier to recognize a sword from the hilt than from the blade? [/nitpicky]