5 minute poetry - Page 31

Cloud Strife · 10-08-2004, 01:19 AM

Wow, BMG!, that's good. It also reminds me of what happened this week for me. Except I was the guy in your poem, not the one consoling. Just strikes me as odd that you osted this poem so quickly after it happened. It's a good poem, nonetheless.

Osterbaum · 10-08-2004, 05:19 AM

They are an elite group
They are the best
They are stuck on a loop
They will never get their rest

They post and post
All day long
It doesen't matter who's the host
They are always on a roll

They are swell
Or atleast they think so
Yesterday, as always, went well
So I give them a go

They are geeks
They are heroes
They are sweet
One most of all, but still all like cheetos

One plays chess
Another is a bard
Together they easilly make a mess
Being in this community is hard

One is antisocial
Atleast two are evil (BUAHAHAHAHAA!!!/MWAHAHAHA!!!)
They are all crucial
Thay are all afraid of the reaper (What teh facka?)

One mad with power
One is a big liar
They all dwell in hunger
In hunger to be more nuklear

It's a but...Well it's not so good, but it will do. Everyone who is not included, sorry I just made this up and wrote what came to mind.

Funka Genocide · 10-08-2004, 08:31 AM

dude, don't fear the reaper. *wails on air guitar*

I wonder why I am so antisocial. That was pretty cool Osterbaum!

and now, I'm going to write some random poetry, I don't even know what its about yet!

heavy handed, airy soul
drifting in between the shores
of anarchy, of peaceful rest
a fence divides, a burdened chest

so full and proud, so able
a deadly mind incapable
of using force to meet a goal
waiting for the world to grow

the ground thats walked upon is wilting life atop it,
tears that fall to its surface turn to bitter steam.
kneeling in this wretched world and facing tortures gaze
realize that pain is fleeting and all possibility but chance,
regain composure, gritting teeth, and in these moments last

dance

Sithdarth · 10-10-2004, 01:52 AM

There is something missing here
it's a feeling I have without knowing why
sometimes it even feels a bit like fear

What could this feeling be?
That has so much power without form
As time passes I start to see.

This feeling is one of longing
But how can that be true?
Can I miss something that was never there?

Day by day my hope fades away.
Can this void ever be filled for me?
Something inside knows but will not say.

The feeling returns with each new sight.
A pain I still have not defined
I fear I may lose this fight.

It seems that I must eventually fall.
For what the say is true,
It is worse to have never loved at all.

Man where are these coming from.

Edit:
What do you know another one:

Good times and great friends
They make for even better times
These things can make amends

A deep seeded hope is released
With it my purpose is found
Yet my wanderings have not ceased

Can it be I've doomed myself to this
A half existance selfimposed
Yet the truth I can not miss.

No can one stand alone
Of this fact I am most sure
A heart can never be totaly stone

One day my turn will come
This is something most sure
A confidence shared by some

Finally the path ahead lies clear
and I see through to a fate
where I too hold something dear

Osterbaum · 10-10-2004, 08:26 AM

Just another story...

It doesen't matter if you live a life of glory
It doesen't matter if you live a life of greater importance, or to whom you hail
In the end it all becomes just another story
You die, and what's left behind is your tale

Nothing more...
Nothing less...
It doesen't matter if it's a life of honor
Cause in the end, it's still just another big mess

***RaiRai*** · 10-10-2004, 10:21 AM

I love the way she's so hypocritical
so much ego, where does she put it all?
stuck up suck up
waiting for her to fuck up
just to laugh when she's falling
start looking, stop stalling.

Little queen upon her high horse
allow this game to continue, take course
and laugh when she fails
all I do prevails
as she sweeps up her petticoat
and cries at the words I wrote.

Boo hoo, little sister
(Can't believe the bullet missed her)
Attempt to regain
only to mess up again
I'll watch her win praises
when pushing up the daisies.

Loneyes · 10-10-2004, 02:44 PM

Okay, here is a poem i wrote awhile ago:

If you are the light, I'm the darkness
If you are the sun, I'm the moon
If you are the sky, I'm the ground
If you are the heat, I'm the cold
If you are my love, I'm your love

i got into an argument with my friend about it, she says it's good, i say it sucks, so if anyone could PM me with their opinions (don't want to spam the thread with them) i'd apperciate it.

***RaiRai*** · 10-10-2004, 03:59 PM

The vulture lands to pick apart its prey,
Crimson envy lurking as the feathers spray,
Vicious little creature whos eyes roll to black,
Claws rip into flesh as the whip begins to crack,
Crack, whip, crack and let the blood flow free,
Spiteful little vermin that cannot even see,
Cackles as the blood spatters on the ground,
Dry desert wanderer seeking to be found,
Now nothing but a corpse in a sea of sand,
Tried to find its way through the bitter hostile land,
But met with uncertain and possible doom
Waited as the thunder clouds overhead did loom
And the rains came crashing down, a thousand a time
Took to her wings, to find her home sublime
but burnt by the lightning, their perch now destroyed
Destined to fly forever, in this sandy void
No longer will the prey fall foul of your sweet game
You'll never feast upon their flesh, never ever again
And as you lay their dying, rain upon your beak
You'll wish you never touched them, as your end you meet.

BlackMageGirl! · 10-11-2004, 12:40 AM

She was here
Coming near
nothing more clear
Than the fear
Was her sneer

How she hated
Patience abated
Screams awaited
Felt tainted, tainted
Desires unsated

Crystal tears gleam
Feelings dull, not keen
For she has seen
What most have deem
Nothing but a dream

Funka Genocide · 10-11-2004, 10:21 AM

bored and lonely, and so it goes
it always does a when I propose
daydreamer, stargazer, stupid little boy

staring off, appearance idle
the minds eye recites a tale
thinking, feeling, waisting time

real world job and real world pain
a fiction to my childish brain
innocent, ignorant, destiny awaits

10-08-2004, 01:19 AM	#301
Cloud Strife Stranger in a strange land. Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Walla Walla, WA. Posts: 2,846	Wow, BMG!, that's good. It also reminds me of what happened this week for me. Except I was the guy in your poem, not the one consoling. Just strikes me as odd that you osted this poem so quickly after it happened. It's a good poem, nonetheless. __________________ You know, I'd put up something witty and clever right now, but eh. I'm lazy.

10-08-2004, 05:19 AM	#302
Osterbaum The revolution will be memed! Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: FIN Posts: 5,967	They are an elite group They are the best They are stuck on a loop They will never get their rest They post and post All day long It doesen't matter who's the host They are always on a roll They are swell Or atleast they think so Yesterday, as always, went well So I give them a go They are geeks They are heroes They are sweet One most of all, but still all like cheetos One plays chess Another is a bard Together they easilly make a mess Being in this community is hard One is antisocial Atleast two are evil (BUAHAHAHAHAA!!!/MWAHAHAHA!!!) They are all crucial Thay are all afraid of the reaper (What teh facka?) One mad with power One is a big liar They all dwell in hunger In hunger to be more nuklear It's a but...Well it's not so good, but it will do. Everyone who is not included, sorry I just made this up and wrote what came to mind. __________________ D is for Dirty Commie!

10-10-2004, 01:52 AM	#304
Sithdarth Friendly Neighborhood Quantum Hobo Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Outside the M-brane look'n in Posts: 5,403	There is something missing here it's a feeling I have without knowing why sometimes it even feels a bit like fear What could this feeling be? That has so much power without form As time passes I start to see. This feeling is one of longing But how can that be true? Can I miss something that was never there? Day by day my hope fades away. Can this void ever be filled for me? Something inside knows but will not say. The feeling returns with each new sight. A pain I still have not defined I fear I may lose this fight. It seems that I must eventually fall. For what the say is true, It is worse to have never loved at all. Man where are these coming from. Edit: What do you know another one: Good times and great friends They make for even better times These things can make amends A deep seeded hope is released With it my purpose is found Yet my wanderings have not ceased Can it be I've doomed myself to this A half existance selfimposed Yet the truth I can not miss. No can one stand alone Of this fact I am most sure A heart can never be totaly stone One day my turn will come This is something most sure A confidence shared by some Finally the path ahead lies clear and I see through to a fate where I too hold something dear Last edited by Sithdarth; 10-10-2004 at 02:30 AM.

10-10-2004, 08:26 AM	#305
Osterbaum The revolution will be memed! Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: FIN Posts: 5,967	Just another story... It doesen't matter if you live a life of glory It doesen't matter if you live a life of greater importance, or to whom you hail In the end it all becomes just another story You die, and what's left behind is your tale Nothing more... Nothing less... It doesen't matter if it's a life of honor Cause in the end, it's still just another big mess __________________ D is for Dirty Commie!

10-10-2004, 10:21 AM	#306
*RaiRai* Check mate. Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Down your pants. Posts: 2,210	I love the way she's so hypocritical so much ego, where does she put it all? stuck up suck up waiting for her to fuck up just to laugh when she's falling start looking, stop stalling. Little queen upon her high horse allow this game to continue, take course and laugh when she fails all I do prevails as she sweeps up her petticoat and cries at the words I wrote. Boo hoo, little sister (Can't believe the bullet missed her) Attempt to regain only to mess up again I'll watch her win praises when pushing up the daisies. __________________ I AM FURIOUS

10-08-2004, 08:31 AM	#303
Funka Genocide Sent to the cornfield Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 4,566	dude, don't fear the reaper. wails on air guitar I wonder why I am so antisocial. That was pretty cool Osterbaum! and now, I'm going to write some random poetry, I don't even know what its about yet! heavy handed, airy soul drifting in between the shores of anarchy, of peaceful rest a fence divides, a burdened chest so full and proud, so able a deadly mind incapable of using force to meet a goal waiting for the world to grow the ground thats walked upon is wilting life atop it, tears that fall to its surface turn to bitter steam. kneeling in this wretched world and facing tortures gaze realize that pain is fleeting and all possibility but chance, regain composure, gritting teeth, and in these moments last dance

10-10-2004, 02:44 PM	#307
Loneyes Troopa Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 90	Okay, here is a poem i wrote awhile ago: If you are the light, I'm the darkness If you are the sun, I'm the moon If you are the sky, I'm the ground If you are the heat, I'm the cold If you are my love, I'm your love i got into an argument with my friend about it, she says it's good, i say it sucks, so if anyone could PM me with their opinions (don't want to spam the thread with them) i'd apperciate it.

10-10-2004, 03:59 PM	#308
*RaiRai* Check mate. Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Down your pants. Posts: 2,210	The vulture lands to pick apart its prey, Crimson envy lurking as the feathers spray, Vicious little creature whos eyes roll to black, Claws rip into flesh as the whip begins to crack, Crack, whip, crack and let the blood flow free, Spiteful little vermin that cannot even see, Cackles as the blood spatters on the ground, Dry desert wanderer seeking to be found, Now nothing but a corpse in a sea of sand, Tried to find its way through the bitter hostile land, But met with uncertain and possible doom Waited as the thunder clouds overhead did loom And the rains came crashing down, a thousand a time Took to her wings, to find her home sublime but burnt by the lightning, their perch now destroyed Destined to fly forever, in this sandy void No longer will the prey fall foul of your sweet game You'll never feast upon their flesh, never ever again And as you lay their dying, rain upon your beak You'll wish you never touched them, as your end you meet. __________________ I AM FURIOUS

10-11-2004, 12:40 AM	#309
BlackMageGirl! Oh hi! :D Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Currently in reality! Posts: 2,688	She was here Coming near nothing more clear Than the fear Was her sneer How she hated Patience abated Screams awaited Felt tainted, tainted Desires unsated Crystal tears gleam Feelings dull, not keen For she has seen What most have deem Nothing but a dream

10-11-2004, 10:21 AM	#310
Funka Genocide Sent to the cornfield Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 4,566	bored and lonely, and so it goes it always does a when I propose daydreamer, stargazer, stupid little boy staring off, appearance idle the minds eye recites a tale thinking, feeling, waisting time real world job and real world pain a fiction to my childish brain innocent, ignorant, destiny awaits

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