The Real Final Fantasy - Page 2

Sin-Ran · 02-15-2011, 04:31 PM

By the way, this is in png format

Token · 02-15-2011, 04:43 PM

Well, I suppose at least there's a back ground now. And... tables that are bigger than the character. And. Y'know. Almost every problem that's already been mentioned.

Meister · 02-15-2011, 04:50 PM

Still shows up as a jpg to me, fuzziness and all. How exactly are you saving these - just to make sure no errors pop up during the process itself.

It's also still amazingly tiny and while not difficult to read, certainly very uncomfortable to read. Please make these larger. You'll need to use an external image hosting service but there's really no way around it.

There's text overlapping the boundaries of your speech bubbles, which looks really sloppy. Generally there should be some space between the text and the actual edge of the bubble, or it'll look cramped and be, again, hard to read. Another good reason for larger panels and larger images.

The background's an improvement, although the perspectives clash - FF sprites are more or less made for a side-view perspective, which isn't the background's perspective. Still, it's a start.

phil_ · 02-15-2011, 04:50 PM

Make it bigger.

Nikose Tyris · 02-15-2011, 04:54 PM

I love this comic so much. Please make more and use the advice posted.

Sin-Ran · 02-15-2011, 05:26 PM

I will fix the thing with the text bubbles
And i will eventually fix the size

Krylo · 02-15-2011, 05:29 PM

Your characters are 8 bit, your scenery should be 8 bit.

Sin-Ran · 02-15-2011, 05:37 PM

I will when the tavern scene is over

Token · 02-15-2011, 05:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sin-Ran

And i will eventually fix the size

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sin-Ran

eventually

Kim · 02-15-2011, 05:39 PM

Angles are wonky. That the scenery has shadows, but the character doesn't make this painfully clear.

Also, seriously, bigger panels. A single panel should be the size of your whole comic. Just find an image hosting thing.

If you plan on sticking to the four panel format, maybe try setting them horizontally.

Speech bubbles and speech font need fixing. What program are you using to make these? If you're using Paint Dot Net, I can recommend some stuff for doing proper speech balloons and a better font to use. If you're using Photoshop or something like that, I'm sure someone else here can set you straight. If you're using MS Paint, go download Paint Dot Net before I die inside.

EDIT: If you're going to use sprites, try to customize them to some degree.

02-15-2011, 04:31 PM	#11
Sin-Ran Goomba Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Mount Sword Posts: 21	By the way, this is in png format Attached Images

02-15-2011, 04:50 PM	#14
phil_ Just sleeping Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: At home, probably in bed. Posts: 6,482	Make it bigger. __________________ Be T-Rexcellent to each other, tako.

02-15-2011, 05:29 PM	#17
Krylo The Straightest Shota Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: It's a secret to everybody. Posts: 17,789	Or you could learn to draw--sprite comics are usually pretty meh. Your characters are 8 bit, your scenery should be 8 bit. __________________ I am very tired.

02-15-2011, 05:39 PM	#20
Kim adorable Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 12,950	Angles are wonky. That the scenery has shadows, but the character doesn't make this painfully clear. Also, seriously, bigger panels. A single panel should be the size of your whole comic. Just find an image hosting thing. If you plan on sticking to the four panel format, maybe try setting them horizontally. Speech bubbles and speech font need fixing. What program are you using to make these? If you're using Paint Dot Net, I can recommend some stuff for doing proper speech balloons and a better font to use. If you're using Photoshop or something like that, I'm sure someone else here can set you straight. If you're using MS Paint, go download Paint Dot Net before I die inside. EDIT: If you're going to use sprites, try to customize them to some degree. __________________ this post is about how to successfully H the Kimmy Last edited by Kim; 02-15-2011 at 05:55 PM.

02-15-2011, 04:43 PM	#12
Token Magikoopa Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 1,789	Well, I suppose at least there's a back ground now. And... tables that are bigger than the character. And. Y'know. Almost every problem that's already been mentioned.

02-15-2011, 04:50 PM	#13
Meister Pure joy Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Germany Posts: 10,689	Still shows up as a jpg to me, fuzziness and all. How exactly are you saving these - just to make sure no errors pop up during the process itself. It's also still amazingly tiny and while not difficult to read, certainly very uncomfortable to read. Please make these larger. You'll need to use an external image hosting service but there's really no way around it. There's text overlapping the boundaries of your speech bubbles, which looks really sloppy. Generally there should be some space between the text and the actual edge of the bubble, or it'll look cramped and be, again, hard to read. Another good reason for larger panels and larger images. The background's an improvement, although the perspectives clash - FF sprites are more or less made for a side-view perspective, which isn't the background's perspective. Still, it's a start.

02-15-2011, 05:26 PM	#16
Sin-Ran Goomba Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Mount Sword Posts: 21	I will fix the thing with the text bubbles And i will eventually fix the size

02-15-2011, 05:37 PM	#18
Sin-Ran Goomba Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Mount Sword Posts: 21	I will when the tavern scene is over