5 minute poetry - Page 10

Cat · 05-21-2004, 04:48 AM

Aww, cummon. It wasn't that good. Alot have people have done better...

Alright, I did a good job. No need to hide it. Thanks for you coments. ^.^

Osterbaum · 05-21-2004, 06:13 AM

I bet your poem is good Cat...but I'm just too lazy to read it right now, so I'l do it later...

MP37a · 05-22-2004, 09:14 PM

Every Rose has its thorns
Even the brightest day can be forlorn
It only takes a takes a moment for things to go down hill
But it�s only takes a moment to make you feel special or unreal
It�s these moments that I will always hold dear
It�s these moments that tell me there is nothing to fear
It�s these moments that make everything seem all right
It�s these moments that comfort me to sleep at night
It�s these moments that make me laugh
It�s these moments that can come and go so fast
It�s these moments that I have shared with you
There are so many not just a few
Give me a second to take you all in with another glance
This is another moment that we will share in our romance

Lycanthrope · 05-23-2004, 12:56 AM

And now for a lighter note
A note of joy
unfortunately sounded in hidious dischord
a dissonance, and stupidly played on bagpipes.
That takes what ought to have been a funny poem
and makes it a total waste of time.

Demon with a Glass Hand · 05-23-2004, 02:03 AM

Of the Round ...

He takes it all off
a peice at a time.
Not meticulously.
Not carefully.

He rips it off.
As fast as he can
and throws it all to the floor.

He doesn't need the weight
or the burden
of all that heavy armor.

He's finished with the games
with the lies he's told himself
just to get by.
Now there is nothing that
he can hide behind.

He's done with it all.
It was all a fucking lie anyways.
She wanted a Knight in Shining Armor, it's true.

She just didn't want him.

***RaiRai*** · 05-23-2004, 07:01 AM

I'm on a strange high
these cotton candy clouds
surround me as I fly
around the pinks and whites
and swirls of sweet blisses
a thousand sugar-filled kisses
that make me smile wide
and the shimmer in my eyes
glaized and cherry topped
spiral round the lolly-pop
and then I'll fall
crash right down
wear a fading candy crown
the addiction ends
and I fall within
I hate the craving
and the way it makes me bend.

Osterbaum · 05-23-2004, 08:44 AM

Sitting here
All by my self
I'm not sure where,
You went

I miss you
I really do
Please come back
You'l be happy too

Cause I don't know about you,
But I for one felt good
or am I just being a fool?
Sticking on to you...

Hmmm...I don't know, but thats what I came up with...I think I'm still having a blank moment...

Cat · 05-23-2004, 09:10 AM

When your thoughts are muttled,
And you feel completely fuddled,
Look to a friend for inspiration,
Look a a thing for one notation,
Look to the sky to see it's green,
Look at the grass to see it's blue,
Let your imagination run wild,
Let it soar to the stars,
Infinity and beyond.

Blank moments suxors.

MP37a · 05-23-2004, 10:15 AM

My attempt at writing a darker moodier poem to creep out my friends haha kind of lame but meh lol:

Whispers in the Dark

I hear whispers in the dark.
Whispers that taunt, haunt, and bring me to the brink of insanity
It must be Satan inside of me.
It is by his hand, which I am marked.

Ladie Ladie Da
Deedle Deedle De
Why won�t you come play with me?
I�ve lost my eyes but can plainly see,
What lies ahead in the future for thee.
Death, destruction and complete ruin
And the beasts will be a chewing
On your soul and icy black heart
Slowing tearing them apart
And all that you have sought
Will have died with you here as you rot.

Each day I struggle for control
And each day I lose a little more of my whole.
I�m becoming what I fear the most.
Merely a ghost held prisoner in flesh.
Waiting for my eternal rest.

Ladie Ladie Da
Deedle Deedle De
Why won�t you come play with me?
I�ve lost my eyes but can plainly see,
What lies ahead in the future for thee.
Death, destruction and complete ruin
And the beasts will be a chewing
On your soul and icy black heart
Slowing tearing them apart
And all that you have sought
Will have died with you here as you rot.

Hardie Hardie Har
Whittle Whittle Wuz
I smell your sin and just because
You think your not and that you�re pure
Just watch and wait for what is in store for
You shall pay a price indeed
Much harsher than the others we all agreed.
Do my work well
And you will be rewarded before you enter hell.
And if you do not you be punished in life and there after
For to him you do not really matter
What you can�t do he has a million others
Join me and we will unite to defeat him together.

I see my friends, relatives; people I don�t know and myself die
When I hold no grudges toward them. I just don�t understand why.
Urges to kill and destroy I daily restrain
I don�t know how long I can maintain this.
They come stronger now and still I must resist.
I�m really getting tired of this.
But as long as he persists I shall endure
For I have the power to I assure you.

Ladie Ladie Da
Deedle Deedle De
Why won�t you come play with me?
I�ve lost my eyes but can plainly see,
What lies ahead in the future for thee.
Death, destruction and complete ruin
And the beasts will be a chewing
On your soul and icy black heart
Slowing tearing them apart
And all that you have sought
Will have died with you here as you rot.

Doodle Doodle Dam
Jangle Jangle Jing
With triumphant voice I ring
You shall not break nor take from me.
You have no power here
So why don�t you just disappear.
All your cheats and lies weren�t even worth the try
So goodbye to you for forever
And better luck on your future endeavors

Osterbaum · 05-23-2004, 03:02 PM

Quote:

Blank moments suxors.

Got that right...

05-21-2004, 04:48 AM	#91
Cat Must stab you... Join Date: May 2004 Location: Behind you, with a knife. Posts: 316	Aww, cummon. It wasn't that good. Alot have people have done better... Alright, I did a good job. No need to hide it. Thanks for you coments. ^.^ __________________ I am not senDing sublimInal mEssages!

05-21-2004, 06:13 AM	#92
Osterbaum The revolution will be memed! Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: FIN Posts: 5,967	I bet your poem is good Cat...but I'm just too lazy to read it right now, so I'l do it later... __________________ D is for Dirty Commie!

05-22-2004, 09:14 PM	#93
MP37a Sacred Samurai Gunslinger Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Wellsville, Ohio Posts: 643	Every Rose has its thorns Even the brightest day can be forlorn It only takes a takes a moment for things to go down hill But it�s only takes a moment to make you feel special or unreal It�s these moments that I will always hold dear It�s these moments that tell me there is nothing to fear It�s these moments that make everything seem all right It�s these moments that comfort me to sleep at night It�s these moments that make me laugh It�s these moments that can come and go so fast It�s these moments that I have shared with you There are so many not just a few Give me a second to take you all in with another glance This is another moment that we will share in our romance __________________ "I'm going to wrap you in bacon, and throw you on the grill!!"

05-23-2004, 12:56 AM	#94
Lycanthrope Deus Lupus Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: The City of Angels Posts: 2,925	And now for a lighter note A note of joy unfortunately sounded in hidious dischord a dissonance, and stupidly played on bagpipes. That takes what ought to have been a funny poem and makes it a total waste of time. __________________ "With these seven easy steps, you, too, can be the authoritarian despot of your own principality. Machiavelli, your road to happiness" "I shoot Flying Monkies!" "Christmas had it coming its what it gets for taking over thanksgiving and threatening halloween with its weapons of mass consumerism" "Death to All Fanatics!" Official RP Action God Lycanthropic Poem "FOR YOU THE CAKE IS OVER. YOU HAVE REACHED THE END OF CAKE." -Death Krylo and BMG are apparently my bitches.

05-23-2004, 07:01 AM	#96
*RaiRai* Check mate. Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Down your pants. Posts: 2,210	I'm on a strange high these cotton candy clouds surround me as I fly around the pinks and whites and swirls of sweet blisses a thousand sugar-filled kisses that make me smile wide and the shimmer in my eyes glaized and cherry topped spiral round the lolly-pop and then I'll fall crash right down wear a fading candy crown the addiction ends and I fall within I hate the craving and the way it makes me bend. __________________ I AM FURIOUS

05-23-2004, 02:03 AM	#95
Demon with a Glass Hand Cyberpunk Detective Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,477	Of the Round ... He takes it all off a peice at a time. Not meticulously. Not carefully. He rips it off. As fast as he can and throws it all to the floor. He doesn't need the weight or the burden of all that heavy armor. He's finished with the games with the lies he's told himself just to get by. Now there is nothing that he can hide behind. He's done with it all. It was all a fucking lie anyways. She wanted a Knight in Shining Armor, it's true. She just didn't want him.

05-23-2004, 08:44 AM	#97
Osterbaum The revolution will be memed! Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: FIN Posts: 5,967	Sitting here All by my self I'm not sure where, You went I miss you I really do Please come back You'l be happy too Cause I don't know about you, But I for one felt good or am I just being a fool? Sticking on to you... Hmmm...I don't know, but thats what I came up with...I think I'm still having a blank moment... __________________ D is for Dirty Commie! Last edited by Osterbaum; 03-09-2005 at 04:39 AM.

05-23-2004, 09:10 AM	#98
Cat Must stab you... Join Date: May 2004 Location: Behind you, with a knife. Posts: 316	When your thoughts are muttled, And you feel completely fuddled, Look to a friend for inspiration, Look a a thing for one notation, Look to the sky to see it's green, Look at the grass to see it's blue, Let your imagination run wild, Let it soar to the stars, Infinity and beyond. Blank moments suxors. __________________ I am not senDing sublimInal mEssages!

05-23-2004, 10:15 AM	#99
MP37a Sacred Samurai Gunslinger Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Wellsville, Ohio Posts: 643	My attempt at writing a darker moodier poem to creep out my friends haha kind of lame but meh lol: Whispers in the Dark I hear whispers in the dark. Whispers that taunt, haunt, and bring me to the brink of insanity It must be Satan inside of me. It is by his hand, which I am marked. Ladie Ladie Da Deedle Deedle De Why won�t you come play with me? I�ve lost my eyes but can plainly see, What lies ahead in the future for thee. Death, destruction and complete ruin And the beasts will be a chewing On your soul and icy black heart Slowing tearing them apart And all that you have sought Will have died with you here as you rot. Each day I struggle for control And each day I lose a little more of my whole. I�m becoming what I fear the most. Merely a ghost held prisoner in flesh. Waiting for my eternal rest. Ladie Ladie Da Deedle Deedle De Why won�t you come play with me? I�ve lost my eyes but can plainly see, What lies ahead in the future for thee. Death, destruction and complete ruin And the beasts will be a chewing On your soul and icy black heart Slowing tearing them apart And all that you have sought Will have died with you here as you rot. Hardie Hardie Har Whittle Whittle Wuz I smell your sin and just because You think your not and that you�re pure Just watch and wait for what is in store for You shall pay a price indeed Much harsher than the others we all agreed. Do my work well And you will be rewarded before you enter hell. And if you do not you be punished in life and there after For to him you do not really matter What you can�t do he has a million others Join me and we will unite to defeat him together. I see my friends, relatives; people I don�t know and myself die When I hold no grudges toward them. I just don�t understand why. Urges to kill and destroy I daily restrain I don�t know how long I can maintain this. They come stronger now and still I must resist. I�m really getting tired of this. But as long as he persists I shall endure For I have the power to I assure you. Ladie Ladie Da Deedle Deedle De Why won�t you come play with me? I�ve lost my eyes but can plainly see, What lies ahead in the future for thee. Death, destruction and complete ruin And the beasts will be a chewing On your soul and icy black heart Slowing tearing them apart And all that you have sought Will have died with you here as you rot. Doodle Doodle Dam Jangle Jangle Jing With triumphant voice I ring You shall not break nor take from me. You have no power here So why don�t you just disappear. All your cheats and lies weren�t even worth the try So goodbye to you for forever And better luck on your future endeavors __________________ "I'm going to wrap you in bacon, and throw you on the grill!!"