5 minute poetry - Page 65

BlackMageGirl! · 12-19-2004, 05:23 PM

Closing her eyes, her life is played by a different tune
Another strand has been woven, another place opened
In her heart, the garden to her soul
So many flowers have been planted there
And yet..another rose has been placed by her own hands
Not yellow...not red...not even softest pink
A white rose, gentle as the spring breeze
It reaches for the sun, drinking it all in
And she watches it grow, pronounced when they close
And in her dreams she sees him, coming closer
He who knows all, he who knows what shall become
Another path not beaten back by others before her
Shall she once again take a step into the unknown?

Edit: *clicks post count on thread and blinks* When the heck did I get 82 posts? 0_o

icythaco · 12-19-2004, 08:09 PM

Nicely done there, BMG!...

FOOLHARDY:
I quest for something unattainable,
And the world will say that I am mad
To search for hopelessness...

But I ask them whether they have ever
Tried to find what cannot be found...
Although may mission my sound foolhardy,
At least I have a goal in mind...

Unlike most of us, it would seem...
Ah well, I cannot convert the un-convertable,
So I continue onward, In pursuit of the shadows
Out of the corner of one's eye...
I cannot do it, but still I try...

The impossible can never be in my grasp...
But still I try...
And that is better than nothing, non?

Edit: 82-posts? Wow, I guess yer pretty popular around here...

The Mirror Emperor · 12-20-2004, 09:36 PM

Inside of me is a bottle holding in
Anger, sadness, thoughts that I can't win
Despair, jealousy, reasons to hide
Each bad event adding to inside
Doing anything to get this out and be free
Never again will I let this build up in me
Throw bad memories out the door
Punch walls till I bleed and scream till I'm sore
Let all know that I'm tired of this
Feeling what I feel and not wanting to reminisce
Let all the antagonists know when I yell
that they need to change their ways and go fuck themselves
Coming out of seclusion with no reason to hide
Now there's a bottle in me with nothing inside.

DarkHunter · 12-21-2004, 12:45 PM

My mide closes
My heart shakes
Nothing can move me form this spot
All i have is this

Siting back looking up
There is nothing that can move me form this spot
All i have all i am
Is what

Nothing
Nothing but a thoungt
Nothing but a memory
What is it

Something
Something that sits there
Someone that looks just like me
Somebody who cant move form her spot.......

dr.sarcastic · 12-21-2004, 01:32 PM

I see you looking at me with unblinking eyes.
You seem to think my soul is a book for your reading pleasure.
How dare you!
Criticize, condemn, and ostracize me before you know me.
You want to own me, use me, and abuse me.
How dare you!
Nevermore! Nevermore will you use me for your sick pleasures, and in your maddening fantasies.
I see you looking at me with unblinking eyes.
How dare you!
Your sick desires stop here.
I will rebel, fight, kick, and scream as you pull me into the maddening abyss of life.
How dare you!
Some day I hope you�ll break free of material chains, forever enlightened.
Until then don�t pretend to know me!
How dare you!
Don�t stare at me with your unblinking eyes

Technocrack · 12-22-2004, 11:57 PM

Just picking up the slack while Cloud and BMG! are away. This latest piece of 4 AM poetry is titled 'Set Things Straight.' Enjoy!

I can't clear you from my mind
I can't leave my love behind
It's been too long since I last saw you.

Words are spoken, the truth said,
Although the answer, I dread,
Do you feel the same way for me, too?

Did I only make things worse?
Is my love for you a curse?
Someone, please tell me what I should do.

(Chorus)
What if things were different?
Did I come too late?
Can I change your mind,
Or is this my cursed fate?
I just hope this song will finally set things straight.

This is truly how I feel for you,
But I just don't know what to do.
I've lived my life giving others a hand,
But now, it's time to make my stand.

My soul feels so trapped inside,
For so long, I have denied,
But I know now there's no hope for us.

But I can't stop all these fears,
All these worries, all these tears,
Is this love, or is this just lust?

I know what I think of you,
I know now my love is true,
But my hopes have now faded to dust.

(Chorus)
What if things were different?
Did I come too late?
Can I change your mind,
Or is this my cursed fate?
I just hope this song will finally set things straight.

This is truly how I feel for you,
But I just don't know what to do.
I've lived my life giving others a hand,
But now, it's time to make my stand.

Please, don't worry about me,
I'll be fine, I guarantee,
I can make it on my own.

But my love for you still grows,
And only God above knows,
If I can face the agony of this defeat.

(Chorus)
What if things were different?
Did I come too late?
Can I change your mind,
Or is this my cursed fate?
I just hope this song will finally set things straight.

This is truly how I feel for you,
But I just don't know what to do.
I've lived my life giving others a hand,
But now, it's time to make my stand.

Lycanthrope · 12-23-2004, 01:10 AM

More a curse than blessing this
To wait and wonder where you are
to sit and ponder how to phrase
my evey word when we next speak

More a curse than blessing this
to question if my mind plays tricks
to question if your eyes hide love
and if as one we'll ever be

More a curse than blessing this
this thing called love, this cross I bear
But curse, from you I shall not turn
A curse, forever in my heart.

BlackMageGirl! · 12-23-2004, 10:14 PM

"Summers' Mirage"

Friends that we are, something is amiss
Something that we never knew
Growing ever closer, how could we not see it?
Did we cover out own eyes for others
Just to hold back the pain it would bring?
Slowly we realize that we are much more...

I love him and he loves me
And in that love it is forbidden
He has her and another has me
Our meeting is not allowed
It goes against every rule we have placed
But as they say, love conquers all

And now the choosing has begun
Are we to trade partners
In this sad little dance of ours?
For I, this one is best suited,
But this one was first
I have chosen against myself
And the thorns that come afterward
I willingly take into my own heart

And for him, a love triangle of affairs
Two best friends vie for the same girl
The time has come for her to choose
Will she take the keeper of my heart for her own?
She was first and he does feel for her
But for this forbidden affair
Shall I be the one that is left in the end?

And lo, the song that we the foolish sing
Regretting our choices and fates hand
For they have given us all but one thing
The time for us to meet, it was too late
We are chained by our feelings towards our loves
Thus like the teasing summers' mirage
Shall our love vanish so easily upon the wind?

The Mirror Emperor · 12-24-2004, 09:00 PM

Here is a dedication poem I promised someone I'd do. Merry Christmas. ^^

Take a look at the artistic happy girl
one that's alot better than the world
One that brings cheer and makes all fond
one that's as cute as she is blonde
One that's creative when she uses the paint stick
one that has over a thousand anime pics
A very nice girl with a very big heart
One that you'll like from the start
One that always gives it her best
doesn't always quit, never gives it any less
So cuddly and happy when you give her a hug
she's the friend all wants and that no one wants to bug
You'll never feel sad or annoyed when she's around
she's one of the bestest friends that I've found
Take a look at this lovable teen
isn't she one of the best you've ever seen?

Funka Genocide · 12-25-2004, 02:04 AM

merry christmas to me

to where do they go?
those happy, laughing crowds
I've seen them all before
just so far away

I don't know enough
equivocating madness
torn between two anythings
like conflict were my purpose

an empty bottle drops
its content not important
I'll argue that it fell
with words I have no care for

merry fucking christmas
and another empty year

heres another one, this one just about sums up my entire adult life, and rather neatly I might add.

Tattered soul like sheets in a gale
A shattered young man without
A legend or story, no tale
To explain his sorrow and doubt

Justify then, to me if you can
The one who lived it through
Tempestuous hands
And things I will not do

You can�t, you can�t
I�d rather you not
The seeds which I plant
Grow not what I sought

Grab and take hold
Its yours �til the end
These lies which I�ve told
Those meanings I bend

Are nothing today
Just empty air and silence
While time slips away
I�ll not speak my grievance

Falling to pieces
Just take it away
Painful increases
In slow lonely days

12-19-2004, 05:23 PM	#641
BlackMageGirl! Oh hi! :D Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Currently in reality! Posts: 2,688	Closing her eyes, her life is played by a different tune Another strand has been woven, another place opened In her heart, the garden to her soul So many flowers have been planted there And yet..another rose has been placed by her own hands Not yellow...not red...not even softest pink A white rose, gentle as the spring breeze It reaches for the sun, drinking it all in And she watches it grow, pronounced when they close And in her dreams she sees him, coming closer He who knows all, he who knows what shall become Another path not beaten back by others before her Shall she once again take a step into the unknown? Edit: clicks post count on thread and blinks When the heck did I get 82 posts? 0_o Last edited by BlackMageGirl!; 12-19-2004 at 07:54 PM.

12-19-2004, 08:09 PM	#642
icythaco Funcraft II: "Let's all get along!" Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: I erased my exact whereabouts from googleEarth Posts: 665	Nicely done there, BMG!... FOOLHARDY: I quest for something unattainable, And the world will say that I am mad To search for hopelessness... But I ask them whether they have ever Tried to find what cannot be found... Although may mission my sound foolhardy, At least I have a goal in mind... Unlike most of us, it would seem... Ah well, I cannot convert the un-convertable, So I continue onward, In pursuit of the shadows Out of the corner of one's eye... I cannot do it, but still I try... The impossible can never be in my grasp... But still I try... And that is better than nothing, non? Edit: 82-posts? Wow, I guess yer pretty popular around here... __________________ Due to several pending lawsuits, Blizzard's long anticipated next installment in the famed Starcraft series, Starcraft II, has been renamed "Funcraft II". In addition, according to a Blizzard spokesman, the game will no longer focus on interstellar battle but will instead be centered around the idea of nonviolent conflict resolution, with the game's ultimate goal being to bring about interstellar harmony. Last edited by icythaco; 12-19-2004 at 08:36 PM.

12-20-2004, 09:36 PM	#643
The Mirror Emperor Enigma Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: In the depths of your mind Posts: 706	Inside of me is a bottle holding in Anger, sadness, thoughts that I can't win Despair, jealousy, reasons to hide Each bad event adding to inside Doing anything to get this out and be free Never again will I let this build up in me Throw bad memories out the door Punch walls till I bleed and scream till I'm sore Let all know that I'm tired of this Feeling what I feel and not wanting to reminisce Let all the antagonists know when I yell that they need to change their ways and go fuck themselves Coming out of seclusion with no reason to hide Now there's a bottle in me with nothing inside. __________________ The Mirror Empire has a population of zero. Even I grow tired of myself.

12-21-2004, 12:45 PM	#644
DarkHunter As long as i may live.... Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: In Arizona Posts: 33	My mide closes My heart shakes Nothing can move me form this spot All i have is this Siting back looking up There is nothing that can move me form this spot All i have all i am Is what Nothing Nothing but a thoungt Nothing but a memory What is it Something Something that sits there Someone that looks just like me Somebody who cant move form her spot....... __________________ The fountains mingle with the river And the rivers with the ocean, The winds of heaven mix for ever With a sweet emotion; Nothing in the world is single, All things by a law divine In one another's being mingle— Why not I with thine? by Percy Bysshe Shelley

12-21-2004, 01:32 PM	#645
dr.sarcastic Dark lord..... Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: In the abyss of life Posts: 13	I see you looking at me with unblinking eyes. You seem to think my soul is a book for your reading pleasure. How dare you! Criticize, condemn, and ostracize me before you know me. You want to own me, use me, and abuse me. How dare you! Nevermore! Nevermore will you use me for your sick pleasures, and in your maddening fantasies. I see you looking at me with unblinking eyes. How dare you! Your sick desires stop here. I will rebel, fight, kick, and scream as you pull me into the maddening abyss of life. How dare you! Some day I hope you�ll break free of material chains, forever enlightened. Until then don�t pretend to know me! How dare you! Don�t stare at me with your unblinking eyes __________________ Rise once more brave warrior so you can continue to smite our foes-- Kartia false god You wanna see my emotional scars?--Me.

12-22-2004, 11:57 PM	#646
Technocrack I'm uncontainable Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Wherever fate takes me. Posts: 253	Just picking up the slack while Cloud and BMG! are away. This latest piece of 4 AM poetry is titled 'Set Things Straight.' Enjoy! I can't clear you from my mind I can't leave my love behind It's been too long since I last saw you. Words are spoken, the truth said, Although the answer, I dread, Do you feel the same way for me, too? Did I only make things worse? Is my love for you a curse? Someone, please tell me what I should do. (Chorus) What if things were different? Did I come too late? Can I change your mind, Or is this my cursed fate? I just hope this song will finally set things straight. This is truly how I feel for you, But I just don't know what to do. I've lived my life giving others a hand, But now, it's time to make my stand. My soul feels so trapped inside, For so long, I have denied, But I know now there's no hope for us. But I can't stop all these fears, All these worries, all these tears, Is this love, or is this just lust? I know what I think of you, I know now my love is true, But my hopes have now faded to dust. (Chorus) What if things were different? Did I come too late? Can I change your mind, Or is this my cursed fate? I just hope this song will finally set things straight. This is truly how I feel for you, But I just don't know what to do. I've lived my life giving others a hand, But now, it's time to make my stand. Please, don't worry about me, I'll be fine, I guarantee, I can make it on my own. But my love for you still grows, And only God above knows, If I can face the agony of this defeat. (Chorus) What if things were different? Did I come too late? Can I change your mind, Or is this my cursed fate? I just hope this song will finally set things straight. This is truly how I feel for you, But I just don't know what to do. I've lived my life giving others a hand, But now, it's time to make my stand. __________________ Roll, roll me away, Won't you roll me away tonight I too am lost, and I feel double-crossed And I'm sick of what's wrong and what's right. Bob Seger, Roll Me Away

12-23-2004, 01:10 AM	#647
Lycanthrope Deus Lupus Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: The City of Angels Posts: 2,925	More a curse than blessing this To wait and wonder where you are to sit and ponder how to phrase my evey word when we next speak More a curse than blessing this to question if my mind plays tricks to question if your eyes hide love and if as one we'll ever be More a curse than blessing this this thing called love, this cross I bear But curse, from you I shall not turn A curse, forever in my heart. __________________ "With these seven easy steps, you, too, can be the authoritarian despot of your own principality. Machiavelli, your road to happiness" "I shoot Flying Monkies!" "Christmas had it coming its what it gets for taking over thanksgiving and threatening halloween with its weapons of mass consumerism" "Death to All Fanatics!" Official RP Action God Lycanthropic Poem "FOR YOU THE CAKE IS OVER. YOU HAVE REACHED THE END OF CAKE." -Death Krylo and BMG are apparently my bitches.

12-23-2004, 10:14 PM	#648
BlackMageGirl! Oh hi! :D Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Currently in reality! Posts: 2,688	"Summers' Mirage" Friends that we are, something is amiss Something that we never knew Growing ever closer, how could we not see it? Did we cover out own eyes for others Just to hold back the pain it would bring? Slowly we realize that we are much more... I love him and he loves me And in that love it is forbidden He has her and another has me Our meeting is not allowed It goes against every rule we have placed But as they say, love conquers all And now the choosing has begun Are we to trade partners In this sad little dance of ours? For I, this one is best suited, But this one was first I have chosen against myself And the thorns that come afterward I willingly take into my own heart And for him, a love triangle of affairs Two best friends vie for the same girl The time has come for her to choose Will she take the keeper of my heart for her own? She was first and he does feel for her But for this forbidden affair Shall I be the one that is left in the end? And lo, the song that we the foolish sing Regretting our choices and fates hand For they have given us all but one thing The time for us to meet, it was too late We are chained by our feelings towards our loves Thus like the teasing summers' mirage Shall our love vanish so easily upon the wind?

12-24-2004, 09:00 PM	#649
The Mirror Emperor Enigma Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: In the depths of your mind Posts: 706	Here is a dedication poem I promised someone I'd do. Merry Christmas. ^^ Take a look at the artistic happy girl one that's alot better than the world One that brings cheer and makes all fond one that's as cute as she is blonde One that's creative when she uses the paint stick one that has over a thousand anime pics A very nice girl with a very big heart One that you'll like from the start One that always gives it her best doesn't always quit, never gives it any less So cuddly and happy when you give her a hug she's the friend all wants and that no one wants to bug You'll never feel sad or annoyed when she's around she's one of the bestest friends that I've found Take a look at this lovable teen isn't she one of the best you've ever seen? __________________ The Mirror Empire has a population of zero. Even I grow tired of myself. Last edited by The Mirror Emperor; 12-29-2004 at 01:16 AM.

12-25-2004, 02:04 AM	#650
Funka Genocide Sent to the cornfield Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 4,566	Merry Christmas and Falling to Pieces merry christmas to me to where do they go? those happy, laughing crowds I've seen them all before just so far away I don't know enough equivocating madness torn between two anythings like conflict were my purpose an empty bottle drops its content not important I'll argue that it fell with words I have no care for merry fucking christmas and another empty year heres another one, this one just about sums up my entire adult life, and rather neatly I might add. Tattered soul like sheets in a gale A shattered young man without A legend or story, no tale To explain his sorrow and doubt Justify then, to me if you can The one who lived it through Tempestuous hands And things I will not do You can�t, you can�t I�d rather you not The seeds which I plant Grow not what I sought Grab and take hold Its yours �til the end These lies which I�ve told Those meanings I bend Are nothing today Just empty air and silence While time slips away I�ll not speak my grievance Falling to pieces Just take it away Painful increases In slow lonely days Last edited by Funka Genocide; 12-25-2004 at 02:17 AM.