5 minute poetry - Page 95

RickZarber · 03-18-2005, 11:23 PM

I met a man out walking
on a road Once, far away
He wanted me to follow him
along his lonely way
We walked up many mountains
and along the silent seas
Until the day he stumbled and
fell down to his knees

He told me to go on alone
To leave him there behind
So I kept on walking
and now I'm lost for time

There was a girl I knew once
Best friends when we were kids
until the day she moved away
Never saw her again
See, a hole was left in my heart
and it filled with cynic thoughts
I kept my distance after that
Built a wall around my heart

No laughter really cured me
Nobody really cared
or knew It's hard to be a little kid
who's all alone and scared
These children walked a long time
they were far away from home
In endless fields of dandelions
and I walked all alone

You never know what you might find
if you walk head held high
I won't stop walking now
Until like my guide I die

Demon with a Glass Hand · 03-18-2005, 11:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Funka Genocide

Thats a good story...

I hate that story. I hate cats.

Nikose Tyris · 03-18-2005, 11:39 PM

your so negative, your so cold.
you hate the story? the story is old.
the hate of cats? empty tales.
the stupid post? empty sails.

The words you fling so carelessly,
slashing down someones dreams,
emptying the part of words
in which all meaning keeps.

(that was random. based it on the earlier post. yay me!)

BlackMageGirl! · 03-19-2005, 09:26 AM

Empty bottle in hand
She laughs at herself
So it has come down to this
Nothing, nothing to get back
Foolish dream of solitude
May not be so folly filled at all

She sleeps and dreams
Her heart pounds fast
Should I? Can I?
It will only hurt once
Before it all fades away
It wars inside herself
Tugging, pulling
This way, that way
Stuck in the middle again

She doesn't argue
She packs her bags
Knowing this would happen
Pushing it away from her heart
And all others including
Cluttering up, cleaning out
It's time for the journey
Back to her home

...knowing there is no place for her to go.

Funka Genocide · 03-19-2005, 09:56 AM

within her caustic heart
an errant breeze of love
through all her plastic parts
the man she stopped dreaming of

how many lives ago
was the selfish little girl?
how many men had known
the taste of her, those churls

and now when its too late
she finds this golden one
she does not hesitate
knowing what she's done

walks on by, won't look back
a tear she never cries
her human side attacks
a lifetime worth of lies

she loses to her sin
a foregone tragedy
a struggle from within
eternal apathy

.....................................

Nikose: hmm... why don't you write something about a vampire?
I just bought Vampire: The Requiem, and so am currently obsesed with them, if you write something cool, I'll give you a cookie!

You want the cookie don't you? DON"T YOU!!!??

S0VIET_BUNNY · 03-19-2005, 11:21 AM

Do You Have Money?
Does your son call you honey?

The government likes money
I am a squirrel

the all Holy EMPEROR PWNS ALL ()MG!
Soviet Russia .

SOYLENT GREEN IS PEOPLE!!! OMG!!!

RagnarofBurland · 03-19-2005, 05:30 PM

I hope and pray
that you see
that olive branch I lay
out for thee.

I hold on the strand
of hope
Perhaps one day you'll stand
and take the end of this rope.

Nikose Tyris · 03-19-2005, 08:26 PM

in response to my good friend Funka G.'s request:

The Vampire
she looks into my eyes
a dark gleam within
the taste of blood
runs wild inside

the darkness glows wild
showing her inner self
the time of her own
is the deepest night.

worship of shadow
love of the night
the touch of undeath
the time of your life

she touches my neck,
I feel the rush
she sinks in her teeth
and I know no more.

((any other Ideas? I I wrote that in 6 minutes.))

Now gimme my cookie,
you little prick,
before I show you
a new little trick.
((*draws Knife* LoL j/k))

***RaiRai*** · 03-20-2005, 05:35 AM

My Sun

Respectful as I am to the sun,
Graced me with a golden glow,
Touched me with a gentle heat,
His charity grew cold,
His amber eyes shone blue,
His flaming heart died down,
And within his warming arms,
I felt myself drown,
Deep into depression,
Sinking into sea,
And though the ships are waiting,
It�s too late to rescue me.

An old one, but it's one of my favourites. I can't remember if I've shared it before though. (God, I wish my writers block would just die already.) -_-

Demon with a Glass Hand · 03-20-2005, 05:41 AM

Pants of a different Color

Watch me in awe
Certainly!
Why the heck not?!
Ever seen this done before?
Never!
At least, not like this!
Shake it
Flaunt it
Love it
Want it
You wouldn't have thought
Not Me!
No way!
That a skinny white boy
could ever pull this off
Well, certainly,
for you see
These are sweat pants of a
Different color.

Lime Green Sweat Pants!

- Don't know what it is, but I really wants to get me a pair of lime green sweat pants. And rainbow-striped toe socks to go with them! Now that just screams 'sex appeal, doesn't it?

03-18-2005, 11:23 PM	#941
RickZarber Please Be Well Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Virginia Posts: 2,715	I met a man out walking on a road Once, far away He wanted me to follow him along his lonely way We walked up many mountains and along the silent seas Until the day he stumbled and fell down to his knees He told me to go on alone To leave him there behind So I kept on walking and now I'm lost for time There was a girl I knew once Best friends when we were kids until the day she moved away Never saw her again See, a hole was left in my heart and it filled with cynic thoughts I kept my distance after that Built a wall around my heart No laughter really cured me Nobody really cared or knew It's hard to be a little kid who's all alone and scared These children walked a long time they were far away from home In endless fields of dandelions and I walked all alone You never know what you might find if you walk head held high I won't stop walking now Until like my guide I die __________________ Twitter / Art Tumblr / Personal Tumblr

03-19-2005, 09:56 AM	#945
Funka Genocide Sent to the cornfield Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 4,566	Used Up within her caustic heart an errant breeze of love through all her plastic parts the man she stopped dreaming of how many lives ago was the selfish little girl? how many men had known the taste of her, those churls and now when its too late she finds this golden one she does not hesitate knowing what she's done walks on by, won't look back a tear she never cries her human side attacks a lifetime worth of lies she loses to her sin a foregone tragedy a struggle from within eternal apathy ..................................... Nikose: hmm... why don't you write something about a vampire? I just bought Vampire: The Requiem, and so am currently obsesed with them, if you write something cool, I'll give you a cookie! You want the cookie don't you? DON"T YOU!!!??

03-19-2005, 11:21 AM	#946
S0VIET_BUNNY Goomba Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 5	communism Do You Have Money? Does your son call you honey? The government likes money I am a squirrel the all Holy EMPEROR PWNS ALL ()MG! Soviet Russia . SOYLENT GREEN IS PEOPLE!!! OMG!!! __________________ Catch a man a fish, and you can sell it to him. Teach a man to fish, and you ruin a wonderful business opportunity.- Karl Marx

03-19-2005, 05:30 PM	#947
RagnarofBurland Soldier of Burland Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 192	I hope and pray that you see that olive branch I lay out for thee. I hold on the strand of hope Perhaps one day you'll stand and take the end of this rope. __________________ *Avatar by Sneak over at Giantitp.com*

03-20-2005, 05:35 AM	#949
*RaiRai* Check mate. Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Down your pants. Posts: 2,210	My Sun Respectful as I am to the sun, Graced me with a golden glow, Touched me with a gentle heat, His charity grew cold, His amber eyes shone blue, His flaming heart died down, And within his warming arms, I felt myself drown, Deep into depression, Sinking into sea, And though the ships are waiting, It�s too late to rescue me. An old one, but it's one of my favourites. I can't remember if I've shared it before though. (God, I wish my writers block would just die already.) -_- __________________ I AM FURIOUS

03-19-2005, 09:26 AM	#944
BlackMageGirl! Oh hi! :D Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Currently in reality! Posts: 2,688	Empty bottle in hand She laughs at herself So it has come down to this Nothing, nothing to get back Foolish dream of solitude May not be so folly filled at all She sleeps and dreams Her heart pounds fast Should I? Can I? It will only hurt once Before it all fades away It wars inside herself Tugging, pulling This way, that way Stuck in the middle again She doesn't argue She packs her bags Knowing this would happen Pushing it away from her heart And all others including Cluttering up, cleaning out It's time for the journey Back to her home ...knowing there is no place for her to go.

03-20-2005, 05:41 AM	#950
Demon with a Glass Hand Cyberpunk Detective Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,477	Pants of a different Color Watch me in awe Certainly! Why the heck not?! Ever seen this done before? Never! At least, not like this! Shake it Flaunt it Love it Want it You wouldn't have thought Not Me! No way! That a skinny white boy could ever pull this off Well, certainly, for you see These are sweat pants of a Different color. Lime Green Sweat Pants! - Don't know what it is, but I really wants to get me a pair of lime green sweat pants. And rainbow-striped toe socks to go with them! Now that just screams 'sex appeal, doesn't it? __________________ I'm surprised you haven't heard of me. I was kind of a big deal around here. Last edited by Demon with a Glass Hand; 03-20-2005 at 05:43 AM.