5 minute poetry - Page 97

Nikose Tyris · 03-21-2005, 11:08 AM

forsaken, broken,
bleeding on my shoes
my own blood leaks out
and stains the ground with clues.

never before have I
such a wound recieved
as on that day
you ripped out my heart.

i run away,
tears streaming down my face
i did everything for you.

I broke the rules of my faith,
I mastered the sword as your demand,
I lay aside you quietly.

you turned me out
you sent me off,
now leave me to silence.

the silence is too loud.

((just read Rai Rai's china doll... I feel sad now.))

***RaiRai*** · 03-21-2005, 03:19 PM

Aw, no need to feel sad. *Hands you an invisible tissue*

I'm up for a challenge, if someone wants to give me a topic to write about. Be gentle.

Demon with a Glass Hand · 03-21-2005, 05:09 PM

I will challenge you, Rai!

Write a sickeningly sweet bubblegum love poem. From a girl to a boy. Only the girl is a nearsighted bunny with comically oversized glasses. And the boy is a pineapple.

Have at thee!

ArchAngel · 03-21-2005, 05:45 PM

This is a little something I wrote earlier.

My knuckles are white, my skin is pale
And on the whole I look like I've been through hell
Can't sit still, can't get my mind straight
And it's impossible for me to concentrate

And that's from people, with me they toy
They torture me and make me paranoid

They hurt me all day long, won't let me live
They're parasites beneath my skin
They make me feel worse than sin
And make it hell for me to live

I'm tortured and I'm haunted
And I want to scream into the void
All these reasons and more make me paranoid

Nikose Tyris · 03-21-2005, 09:18 PM

Rai, your poems are beautiful.

therefore, I challenge you to this poem: please write a Love poem TO shiney, talking entirely about his ears. do not stray anywhere else: only his ears can be your focus point. We did this game a while ago with my friends just to see if we could. someone wrote a poem on my crazy eye. if i find it, i will post it.

StabbityMage · 03-21-2005, 11:53 PM

Today I was with a friend who has a band named "Blinded By Society", and he said they needed a new song. Sing to the tune of "I Fought the Law" by Green Day.

"I F*** Your Mom

I smoked too much weed with, my bong
I f*** your mom when, you're gone
I f*** your mom when, you're gone
I masturbated with, my cock!
I f*** your mom when, you're gone
I f*** your mom when, you're gone

I needed sex so, f***ing bad!
I guess my patience was gone
But your mom was the only one around!
I f*** your mom when, you're gone
I f*** your mom when...................

I'm squirting too f***ing, much cum!
I f*** your mom when, you're gone
I f*** your mom when, you're gone
I think this condom, just broke
I f*** your mom when, you're gone
I f*** your mom when, you're gone

Now I've got a baby and, no fun
I guess I'm my friend's dad
No more sitting on my fat ass!

I f*** your mom when, you're gone
I f*** your mom when.....................
.................................

I f*** your mom when, you're gone (x7)
I f*** your mom when...........(baby cries)(Shit.................)

Funka Genocide · 03-22-2005, 02:02 AM

on a joint
venture
a slight
apprehension
towards what might
be determined
to be a little
off the mark

Tuesday was the answer
to a question no one cared for
or had any belief in
the outcome
a detriment to its owner
a misbegotten boner
and something oh so stupid, in the end

why did you leave the muffins?
what did you think you'd gain
nothing by a puffin
and an older gentleman
muster all the people
whos restricted vocabulary
leads to awkward sentences
and over weight canaries

***RaiRai*** · 03-22-2005, 02:29 PM

Blue upon Blue

The shades of the sea and the sky,
Meld together,
An endless infusion of blue upon blue,
Another heart breaks on the edge,
Of forever,
Another dream of a distant, lonely you.

PyrosNine · 03-22-2005, 09:22 PM

I'm new here, but i've already posted a fan-fic , and as It happens I'm currently entering a Poetry contest at my school. I figure I'll just post one and see how it turns out. I love free form, cause I can't rhyme worth crap.

Silence is golden.
Please say no more than what you mean to say.
I hear you loud and clear despite what you think.
Perhaps I'm not the one who's deaf?
I do turn a deaf ear to your words of anger and fear,
Your insults, false accusations, and overreactions.
I've often wondered if you've ever cut your lip on that forked tongue of yours.
So please be quiet.
I'm trying to enjoy the silence of my room,
That nose you make fun of is trying to be in a book,
Those "Four-Eyes" are trying to read a webcomic,
The "claws" of my nails are trying to type my thoughts,
And the long curls of hair you despise so much are joining my head upon my pillow.
I'm trying my hardest to keep out of the way of your happiness,
But it's hard when you're disturbing mine.
So I sincerely ask that you be respectful, and please be quiet.
Silence is golden.

Cloud Strife · 03-23-2005, 12:31 AM

Fearing fates of feral creatures,
Avoiding more criminal features,
You dash into the darkness deep
to find the place where shadows creep.

Corruption exudes from within,
Lets them know, in light so dim,
Wherein you lie, now you must fly
Or else today will be the day you die.

Flee, flee! Run for your life,
Just one jump ahead of the knife
that is swiftly cutting through the air
Aiming for your neck without a care.

Can you survive this night unscathed?
Or in your blood, will the ground be bathed?

(EDIT: I just noticed, this is the 1000th post in this thread! Hooray for poetry!)

03-21-2005, 03:19 PM	#962
*RaiRai* Check mate. Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Down your pants. Posts: 2,210	Aw, no need to feel sad. Hands you an invisible tissue I'm up for a challenge, if someone wants to give me a topic to write about. Be gentle. __________________ I AM FURIOUS

03-21-2005, 05:09 PM	#963
Demon with a Glass Hand Cyberpunk Detective Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,477	I will challenge you, Rai! Write a sickeningly sweet bubblegum love poem. From a girl to a boy. Only the girl is a nearsighted bunny with comically oversized glasses. And the boy is a pineapple. Have at thee! __________________ I'm surprised you haven't heard of me. I was kind of a big deal around here.

03-21-2005, 05:45 PM	#964
ArchAngel Fighter angel! Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: On Earth Posts: 12	This is a little something I wrote earlier. My knuckles are white, my skin is pale And on the whole I look like I've been through hell Can't sit still, can't get my mind straight And it's impossible for me to concentrate And that's from people, with me they toy They torture me and make me paranoid They hurt me all day long, won't let me live They're parasites beneath my skin They make me feel worse than sin And make it hell for me to live I'm tortured and I'm haunted And I want to scream into the void All these reasons and more make me paranoid __________________ "Because I'm a freak"--my answer to a third grader asking why I was only wearing one sock. Last edited by ArchAngel; 03-21-2005 at 05:52 PM. Reason: Typs

03-21-2005, 11:53 PM	#966
StabbityMage Ex-Calvinballer Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: The state of Denial Posts: 137	Today I was with a friend who has a band named "Blinded By Society", and he said they needed a new song. Sing to the tune of "I Fought the Law" by Green Day. "I F* Your Mom I smoked too much weed with, my bong I f* your mom when, you're gone I f* your mom when, you're gone I masturbated with, my cock! I f* your mom when, you're gone I f* your mom when, you're gone I needed sex so, fing bad! I guess my patience was gone But your mom was the only one around! I f your mom when, you're gone I f* your mom when................... I'm squirting too f*ing, much cum! I f* your mom when, you're gone I f* your mom when, you're gone I think this condom, just broke I f* your mom when, you're gone I f* your mom when, you're gone Now I've got a baby and, no fun I guess I'm my friend's dad No more sitting on my fat ass! I f* your mom when, you're gone I f* your mom when..................... ................................. I f* your mom when, you're gone (x7) I f*** your mom when...........(baby cries)(Shit.................) __________________ GO CALVINBALL! Last edited by StabbityMage; 03-21-2005 at 11:56 PM.

03-22-2005, 02:02 AM	#967
Funka Genocide Sent to the cornfield Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 4,566	random words I threw together for fun on a joint venture a slight apprehension towards what might be determined to be a little off the mark Tuesday was the answer to a question no one cared for or had any belief in the outcome a detriment to its owner a misbegotten boner and something oh so stupid, in the end why did you leave the muffins? what did you think you'd gain nothing by a puffin and an older gentleman muster all the people whos restricted vocabulary leads to awkward sentences and over weight canaries

03-22-2005, 02:29 PM	#968
*RaiRai* Check mate. Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Down your pants. Posts: 2,210	Blue upon Blue The shades of the sea and the sky, Meld together, An endless infusion of blue upon blue, Another heart breaks on the edge, Of forever, Another dream of a distant, lonely you. __________________ I AM FURIOUS

03-22-2005, 09:22 PM	#969
PyrosNine Zettai Hero Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: A figment of my own imagination Posts: 6,103	I'm new here, but i've already posted a fan-fic , and as It happens I'm currently entering a Poetry contest at my school. I figure I'll just post one and see how it turns out. I love free form, cause I can't rhyme worth crap. Silence is golden. Please say no more than what you mean to say. I hear you loud and clear despite what you think. Perhaps I'm not the one who's deaf? I do turn a deaf ear to your words of anger and fear, Your insults, false accusations, and overreactions. I've often wondered if you've ever cut your lip on that forked tongue of yours. So please be quiet. I'm trying to enjoy the silence of my room, That nose you make fun of is trying to be in a book, Those "Four-Eyes" are trying to read a webcomic, The "claws" of my nails are trying to type my thoughts, And the long curls of hair you despise so much are joining my head upon my pillow. I'm trying my hardest to keep out of the way of your happiness, But it's hard when you're disturbing mine. So I sincerely ask that you be respectful, and please be quiet. Silence is golden. __________________ Pyrosnine.blogspot.com: An experimental blog of writing. Updated possibly daily. Possibly. A fair chance. Current Works for reading: War Between them, Karma Police. PyrosNine: Weirdo Magnet Extraordinaire!

03-23-2005, 12:31 AM	#970
Cloud Strife Stranger in a strange land. Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Walla Walla, WA. Posts: 2,846	Fearing fates of feral creatures, Avoiding more criminal features, You dash into the darkness deep to find the place where shadows creep. Corruption exudes from within, Lets them know, in light so dim, Wherein you lie, now you must fly Or else today will be the day you die. Flee, flee! Run for your life, Just one jump ahead of the knife that is swiftly cutting through the air Aiming for your neck without a care. Can you survive this night unscathed? Or in your blood, will the ground be bathed? (EDIT: I just noticed, this is the 1000th post in this thread! Hooray for poetry!) __________________ You know, I'd put up something witty and clever right now, but eh. I'm lazy.