5 minute poetry - Page 114

Kurosen · 05-25-2005, 05:09 PM

If we're prepared to believe the much more likely scenario that you're a plagiarist, then why should we believe that this Hannah was "right next to you."

Quote:

I am sorry you cannot see that sometimes freak conincidences happen

The thing about freak occurances is that they happen all the time. Read any of Charles Fort's books if you don't believe me. That's why I know you're lying about this. It doesn't happen, it has never happened, it will never happen. I'm willing to believe that you read the original poem and it stuck in your head and "influenced" your version even unto being it exactly. But to write it down word for word, comma for comma, line for line and expect us to believe it's wholly original? Give it up. You're embarassing yourself and we don't appreciate being lied to.

Lycanthrope · 05-25-2005, 05:17 PM

...*ahem* regardless:

Waking up is the hardest part of the day
To slip away from the world of dreams
See her smiling face fade
Fade to a thought
Fade to a memory
A memory quickly lost
and now I can't even remember how it looked
Just a smile
and the mouthed words:
"I love you"
To wake with the thrill of love
And then slowly escape the spell
and realize with sinking heart
That none of it was real
To sigh, and crawl out of bed
to face the lonely day
Face the truth
and not slip back into the kinder lie
of enfolding arms
carressing lips
and loving muttered nothings
But to let it slip to a memory
that fades away leaving but its ghost
which leaves nothing but to mourn this love
which never was.

Overcast · 05-25-2005, 07:04 PM

Fuggetubboutit capice (I can't spell it wahh!)

Personal places:

Hell has personall places for people like me
Not with others in thier grouped circles
But a place to suffer all on my own
Yes hell has those places for people like me

Yet heaven also has personall places for places like me
A place filled where my dreams come true
All my wishes are bunched together forever in one place
Heaven has personall places for people like me

Though my question is does earth have them
All the personall places I've had have been stolen or killed
I have never kept any of them forever unlike those in the realms
Someone tell me where is my personall place here

RickZarber · 05-26-2005, 12:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lycanthrope

...*ahem* regardless:

Heh, yeah.

Anyways, I wrote this after spending several hours going through pictures and yearbooks from highschool.

There�s a song in me; something familiar
And it hovers there just out of grasp
A story, a history in pictures
A memory of faces and thoughts

And every now and then I find
I think of all that is behind
Of things that aren�t quite gone
But we have all moved on

What I wouldn�t give
for just one more day
to see some things be again

We were all drifting through gently
We never understood
So eager to get far away
Not treasuring the time that we had

And every now and then I find
I have to put things out of mind
Not all things are gone
Most of us move on

And what I wouldn�t have given
for a future as clear
So busy with tomorrow
one could almost lose today
Then who will cry for yesterday?

RagnarofBurland · 05-27-2005, 12:43 PM

A new experience, an old experience.

All good stories soon must end but what about the bad?
I thought or two does tingle, mingle within imagined joyful land.
Yet, now, now it breeds corruption, disfunction and distaste.

They where once simple, joyous thoughts, now a faded pain.
Like an old habit, some of it refuses go away, this day.
A replacement has been founded, but reminders all around seek to cloud my way.
I take a deep breath, smile, realize it's passed and take the plunge again.

BlackMageGirl! · 06-03-2005, 05:03 PM

"Just something"

I had something inspirational
slipped through my fingers
All the glory wrung phrases
left me staring at my fingertips

I had something sensational
I mumbled instead of spoke
A firey speech driven to ground
As they fell, words broke

I had something conversational
But then again, alas
No poem can be wrought
Only these words, en masse

Overcast · 06-03-2005, 05:13 PM

This is an expiriment of me trying to write poetry without thinking of what I write about or rhyming. How does it look.

Don't Think feel:
With heaven hanging just above me I reach and I feel nice
And hell it sits just below me my feet reach down like roots
An odd earth surrounds me it depresses me but I don't think twice
The endless world's seem to pull me away from the reality
I'm feeling nice if you are so float away with me
I cannot rhyme all that well but it still feels nice to write
About all these cool little things inside my life
That cowardly little bastard in the darkness is me
The one who ran away from school after confessing his love on the last day.
Cool to understand just how wierd it sounds as I see.
Ha not enough to see her as others do I see her in my own way.
Man she's ugly how do I crush on her
I guess it's just my own wierdness
Dont stop me yet I'm coming out of my shell
Last day of school with nothing else to tell.

Fuzzydoom · 06-06-2005, 03:26 PM

My really short poem (improv poetry is fun)

With the loss of my blood
do I die or do I become
A man of war or a man of the dove
at the end, a white hot shadow of glistening love

Funka Genocide · 06-07-2005, 02:55 AM

fear that lacks teeth
a bite of playful pain
your mouth
and taken is the strain

everyday another cloud
to add upon my skies
your mouth
open, never lies

feeling, brash and impotent
a kiss for troubles gone
your mouth
silent all along

Overcast · 06-07-2005, 07:30 PM

I wrote this following Feel good Inc try and match up

Wierd love song:
So I'm seekin down to the end of time
Seekin through the rules just to learn to rhyme
So whilst they talk about you it's amusing to see
How they hold thier standards so much higher than me
We got a new objective just to leave em behind
Far off to a place they can never find
And all I want to do is to be with you
So I'm moving far away from these hindered fools yeah

To my dear love with a smile
Come along and stay a while
Don't care what the others say
I love you for you right now

We'll love forever they will see
Let's leave forever you and me
To my dear love with a smile
Just how do you feel?

Sightin up these sad rats lone cats
Lining themseleves so sad sad
Leaders jocks up at the frat
What could they possibly catch

So much bad just in this here
So sad how they try to stick here
Thinkin bout what others say
ha ha ha ha ha

We gon mow down this show down with our new found love ya see
You see the love you see the trust with our love we kill the freaks
To stop and to feel it
Until the end and then were
Laughin at the other fools
ha ha ha ha ha

To my dear love with a smile
Come along and stay a while
Don't care what the others say
I love you for you right now

We'll love forever they will see
Let's leave forever you and me
To my dear love with a smile
Just how do you feel?

To stop and to feel it
I can't begen to say
Laughing at the others sight
Ha ha ha ha

To stop and to feel it
Your beauty's not the best
But I still see more than them
ha ha ha ha ha

05-25-2005, 05:17 PM	#1132
Lycanthrope Deus Lupus Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: The City of Angels Posts: 2,925	...ahem regardless: Waking up is the hardest part of the day To slip away from the world of dreams See her smiling face fade Fade to a thought Fade to a memory A memory quickly lost and now I can't even remember how it looked Just a smile and the mouthed words: "I love you" To wake with the thrill of love And then slowly escape the spell and realize with sinking heart That none of it was real To sigh, and crawl out of bed to face the lonely day Face the truth and not slip back into the kinder lie of enfolding arms carressing lips and loving muttered nothings But to let it slip to a memory that fades away leaving but its ghost which leaves nothing but to mourn this love which never was. __________________ "With these seven easy steps, you, too, can be the authoritarian despot of your own principality. Machiavelli, your road to happiness" "I shoot Flying Monkies!" "Christmas had it coming its what it gets for taking over thanksgiving and threatening halloween with its weapons of mass consumerism" "Death to All Fanatics!" Official RP Action God Lycanthropic Poem "FOR YOU THE CAKE IS OVER. YOU HAVE REACHED THE END OF CAKE." -Death Krylo and BMG are apparently my bitches.

05-25-2005, 07:04 PM	#1133
Overcast Cinderella Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Trespassing in the graveyard Posts: 3,076	Fuggetubboutit capice (I can't spell it wahh!) Personal places: Hell has personall places for people like me Not with others in thier grouped circles But a place to suffer all on my own Yes hell has those places for people like me Yet heaven also has personall places for places like me A place filled where my dreams come true All my wishes are bunched together forever in one place Heaven has personall places for people like me Though my question is does earth have them All the personall places I've had have been stolen or killed I have never kept any of them forever unlike those in the realms Someone tell me where is my personall place here __________________ Time to bust out the glow sticks!

05-27-2005, 12:43 PM	#1135
RagnarofBurland Soldier of Burland Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 192	A new experience, an old experience. All good stories soon must end but what about the bad? I thought or two does tingle, mingle within imagined joyful land. Yet, now, now it breeds corruption, disfunction and distaste. They where once simple, joyous thoughts, now a faded pain. Like an old habit, some of it refuses go away, this day. A replacement has been founded, but reminders all around seek to cloud my way. I take a deep breath, smile, realize it's passed and take the plunge again. __________________ *Avatar by Sneak over at Giantitp.com*

06-03-2005, 05:13 PM	#1137
Overcast Cinderella Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Trespassing in the graveyard Posts: 3,076	This is an expiriment of me trying to write poetry without thinking of what I write about or rhyming. How does it look. Don't Think feel: With heaven hanging just above me I reach and I feel nice And hell it sits just below me my feet reach down like roots An odd earth surrounds me it depresses me but I don't think twice The endless world's seem to pull me away from the reality I'm feeling nice if you are so float away with me I cannot rhyme all that well but it still feels nice to write About all these cool little things inside my life That cowardly little bastard in the darkness is me The one who ran away from school after confessing his love on the last day. Cool to understand just how wierd it sounds as I see. Ha not enough to see her as others do I see her in my own way. Man she's ugly how do I crush on her I guess it's just my own wierdness Dont stop me yet I'm coming out of my shell Last day of school with nothing else to tell. __________________ Time to bust out the glow sticks!

06-06-2005, 03:26 PM	#1138
Fuzzydoom lvl 6 shmuck Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: far far away Posts: 619	My really short poem (improv poetry is fun) With the loss of my blood do I die or do I become A man of war or a man of the dove at the end, a white hot shadow of glistening love __________________ I think all the funny in my fingertips dried up a while ago. I leveled up!

06-03-2005, 05:03 PM	#1136
BlackMageGirl! Oh hi! :D Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Currently in reality! Posts: 2,688	"Just something" I had something inspirational slipped through my fingers All the glory wrung phrases left me staring at my fingertips I had something sensational I mumbled instead of spoke A firey speech driven to ground As they fell, words broke I had something conversational But then again, alas No poem can be wrought Only these words, en masse

06-07-2005, 02:55 AM	#1139
Funka Genocide Sent to the cornfield Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 4,566	fear that lacks teeth a bite of playful pain your mouth and taken is the strain everyday another cloud to add upon my skies your mouth open, never lies feeling, brash and impotent a kiss for troubles gone your mouth silent all along

06-07-2005, 07:30 PM	#1140
Overcast Cinderella Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Trespassing in the graveyard Posts: 3,076	Feelin Good I wrote this following Feel good Inc try and match up Wierd love song: So I'm seekin down to the end of time Seekin through the rules just to learn to rhyme So whilst they talk about you it's amusing to see How they hold thier standards so much higher than me We got a new objective just to leave em behind Far off to a place they can never find And all I want to do is to be with you So I'm moving far away from these hindered fools yeah To my dear love with a smile Come along and stay a while Don't care what the others say I love you for you right now We'll love forever they will see Let's leave forever you and me To my dear love with a smile Just how do you feel? Sightin up these sad rats lone cats Lining themseleves so sad sad Leaders jocks up at the frat What could they possibly catch So much bad just in this here So sad how they try to stick here Thinkin bout what others say ha ha ha ha ha We gon mow down this show down with our new found love ya see You see the love you see the trust with our love we kill the freaks To stop and to feel it Until the end and then were Laughin at the other fools ha ha ha ha ha To my dear love with a smile Come along and stay a while Don't care what the others say I love you for you right now We'll love forever they will see Let's leave forever you and me To my dear love with a smile Just how do you feel? To stop and to feel it I can't begen to say Laughing at the others sight Ha ha ha ha To stop and to feel it Your beauty's not the best But I still see more than them ha ha ha ha ha __________________ Time to bust out the glow sticks! Last edited by Overcast; 06-07-2005 at 07:42 PM.