Generic Quest

ElfLad · 08-21-2005, 07:10 PM

A little one-shot sprite comic I made. I feel like continuing it now, though.

08-21-2005, 07:18 PM

That's funny! So, everyone first goes to Quest High and study both magic and fighting yet everyone is assigned a class and a quest to graduate.

Nicely done.

gurusloth · 08-22-2005, 02:19 AM

Well, even I must admit that it wasn't horrible. Waiting to see the next few before a final verdict is rendered.

Meister · 08-22-2005, 04:02 AM

Very good! It's put together well, consistently funny, and I wouldn't mind seeing more.

Skyshot · 08-22-2005, 07:55 PM

I found it funny. My main recommendation, if you plan to continue it, is to update your sprites beyond basic recolors. Also, the two panels showing towards-facing views of the grads in the chairs kinda bug me. You probably would have done well to keep the view of the side-view panels.

Besides that, you might want to do three panels a row rather than two. I give you a before and after.

Favorite line: "Bartholomew fight good." And I look forward to team-related antics a la Naruto.

Also, do those two dwarves have Thief hair? The horror.

***Fenris*** · 08-22-2005, 08:03 PM

That should be continued. It is very humorous, and I think you set it up nicely for a sequel.

Somehow, even before I clicked the link, I KNEW my comic would be the example.

Thanks, Skyshot.

Jackass. =P

ElfLad · 08-27-2005, 11:53 AM

Thanks for the feedback, everybody.

gurusloth · 08-27-2005, 01:14 PM

Second episode = teh funny. Keep it up, this is actually good stuff!

08-27-2005, 04:20 PM

Worthy of 8-bit Theater!

Sky Warrior Bob · 08-28-2005, 08:32 AM

Didn't care much for the first comic, the second was however far better. You really could do with cleaning up your sprites. In addition, make sure you've got at least all of the regular FF3j poses for your main characters.

Feel free to check out this thread for good spriting examples:
http://www.nuklearforums.com/showthread.php?t=328

Of course, while this is a good comic & all, I am somewhat disappointed. When I jumped into this thread, I really was expecting a sprite comic that used sprites from the old Space Quest, Police Quest, and King's Quest games.

SWK

08-21-2005, 07:10 PM	#1
ElfLad She's buying the Stairway to Heaven Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 581	Generic Quest A little one-shot sprite comic I made. I feel like continuing it now, though. __________________ Legendary: A webcomic about RPGs.

08-22-2005, 02:19 AM	#3
gurusloth Master of muthafu�%in' invisibility Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 1,224	Well, even I must admit that it wasn't horrible. Waiting to see the next few before a final verdict is rendered. __________________ Mashirosen: I personally will not rest until I have turned NPF into ___________I"My Little Pony Collector's E-Snuggle Social Club - No Boys Allowed"

08-22-2005, 08:03 PM	#6
*Fenris* Administrator Join Date: May 2005 Location: East Coast Posts: 6,806	That should be continued. It is very humorous, and I think you set it up nicely for a sequel. Somehow, even before I clicked the link, I KNEW my comic would be the example. Thanks, Skyshot. Jackass. =P __________________ "FENRIS IS AN ASSHOLE" - shiney Last edited by Fenris; 08-22-2005 at 08:15 PM.

08-27-2005, 11:53 AM	#7
ElfLad She's buying the Stairway to Heaven Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 581	Thanks for the feedback, everybody. __________________ Legendary: A webcomic about RPGs.

08-27-2005, 01:14 PM	#8
gurusloth Master of muthafu�%in' invisibility Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 1,224	Second episode = teh funny. Keep it up, this is actually good stuff! __________________ Mashirosen: I personally will not rest until I have turned NPF into ___________I"My Little Pony Collector's E-Snuggle Social Club - No Boys Allowed"

08-21-2005, 07:18 PM	#2
Admiral_Kelly Guest Posts: n/a	That's funny! So, everyone first goes to Quest High and study both magic and fighting yet everyone is assigned a class and a quest to graduate. Nicely done.

08-22-2005, 04:02 AM	#4
Meister Pure joy Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Germany Posts: 10,689	Very good! It's put together well, consistently funny, and I wouldn't mind seeing more.

08-27-2005, 04:20 PM	#9
Admiral_Kelly Guest Posts: n/a	Worthy of 8-bit Theater!

08-28-2005, 08:32 AM	#10
Sky Warrior Bob bOB iZ brOkeN Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: It's a nice place to visit... Posts: 3,755	Didn't care much for the first comic, the second was however far better. You really could do with cleaning up your sprites. In addition, make sure you've got at least all of the regular FF3j poses for your main characters. Feel free to check out this thread for good spriting examples: http://www.nuklearforums.com/showthread.php?t=328 Of course, while this is a good comic & all, I am somewhat disappointed. When I jumped into this thread, I really was expecting a sprite comic that used sprites from the old Space Quest, Police Quest, and King's Quest games. SWK __________________ :bmage: Because breakdancing is evil, and so am I, you will click on this link: The power of evil compels you... You are in error. No one is screaming. Thank you for your cooperation. Yes I know the breakdancing BM link doesn't work, and I don't care.