BlackMage.exe - Page 3

Pip Boy · 04-10-2009, 08:22 PM

Oh thank god. I was afraid I was going to have to pretend I liked this so I didn't offend anyone. Looks like I thankfully won't have to do this.

Kirby, if you want to take this writing thing seriously, I have 2 big suggestions for you.

1) Read the works of well known authors and study their styles, sentence structures, use of hyperbole and so on to see how its done.

2) Write an original story. The only people who like fanfiction are the people who write fanfiction, and NPF is not one of those places for people who like fanfiction. We are much happier enjoying normal fiction.

EDIT: PH'NGLUI MGLW'NAFH C'THULHU R'LYEH WGAH'NAGL! PH'NGLUI MGLW--

Sorry, I tried to read more of it and I think it broke my mind for a moment.

EDIT AGAIN:

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Originally Posted by Kirby2000

I guess I better work on my detail better on episode one before posting episode two.

OHPLEASENOFORTHELOVEOFALLTHATISHOLY!

Loyal · 04-10-2009, 10:29 PM

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The only people who like fanfiction are the people who write fanfiction,

Well excuuuuuuse me, princess.

Kyanbu The Legend · 04-11-2009, 08:04 PM

Meh I�ve seen far worst pictures then what Meister just posted. Granted though it is still weird. Kirby, I suggest you work on your writing skills before proceeding to episode 2.

Pip Boy · 04-12-2009, 08:18 AM

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Originally Posted by Loyal

Well excuuuuuuse me, princess.

Fine, I'll take back my statement that all fanfiction is terrible.

Just most fanfiction.

Fifthfiend · 04-13-2009, 11:53 PM

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Originally Posted by Mike McC

that extra little bit under the apron

WHAT THE FUCK MEISTER

WHAT DID YOU DO

synkr0nized · 04-14-2009, 12:03 AM

He gave us an image that fit the description provided.

Mirai Gen · 04-14-2009, 12:22 AM

I like that Fifth didn't notice it until he went back and (re?)read Mike's post.

Kim · 04-14-2009, 12:28 AM

Part of me wants to use that pic, or at least part of it, as my avatar, but I'm not sure I hate you all enough.

Mirai Gen · 04-14-2009, 12:30 AM

You changed your avatar like five times this month, you should really put some sort of cap on that or something.

Although if you wanted to change it to the 'extra bit' center-of-frame I most definitely think that Fifth would go out of his way to abuse his power.

Kim · 04-14-2009, 01:49 AM

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Originally Posted by Mirai Gen

You changed your avatar like five times this month, you should really put some sort of cap on that or something.

04-11-2009, 08:04 PM	#23
Kyanbu The Legend Local Rookie Indie Dev Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: New Jersey Posts: 5,497	Meh I�ve seen far worst pictures then what Meister just posted. Granted though it is still weird. Kirby, I suggest you work on your writing skills before proceeding to episode 2. __________________

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synkr0nized synk-ism Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: throughout the Wired Posts: 6,857	at this point, I don't think we need more bandwagon hate He gave us an image that fit the description provided. __________________ Find love.

04-14-2009, 12:28 AM	#28
Kim adorable Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 12,950	Part of me wants to use that pic, or at least part of it, as my avatar, but I'm not sure I hate you all enough. __________________ this post is about how to successfully H the Kimmy

04-14-2009, 12:22 AM	#27
Mirai Gen We are Geth. Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 14,032	I like that Fifth didn't notice it until he went back and (re?)read Mike's post.

04-14-2009, 12:30 AM	#29
Mirai Gen We are Geth. Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 14,032	You changed your avatar like five times this month, you should really put some sort of cap on that or something. Although if you wanted to change it to the 'extra bit' center-of-frame I most definitely think that Fifth would go out of his way to abuse his power.