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Unread 12-06-2011, 12:19 AM   #11
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Google image search "Rock face" or something and get references. That is all the advice a non-artist such as I can offer.
This my same advice. References are always in-style.

Also rocks are a pain in the ass to draw realistically.

Other critique (if you want it):The perspective on the people looks off. That's not as easy of a fix, but just for future reference. With the angle of the "camera" so to speak, the people in the background look like they would come up to the foreground-man's thigh. Personally I would have gone with something more like this plus it's more compositionally-friendly thanks to the rule of thirds.
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