5 minute poetry

[Myst]

First post in this thread, it's a song I wrote today out of the blue, and I like it, though it's probably not very good, lemme know what you think.

Break the Chains

Holding me to this life, everything that’s come before,
Holding fast to my memories,
Can’t move forward til they’re put to rest.
(Chorus)
Constant circling, ever linking,
Life’s little ways to keep you from thinking,
Binding. Ensnaring.
Gotta break away from these chains of reason.

Gilded chains around my ankles, silver shackles on my wrist,
I want to break these eternal bindings,
Escape from my souls restraints.
(chorus)
Constant circling, ever linking,
Life’s little ways to keep you from thinking,
Binding. Ensnaring.
Gotta break away from these chains of reason.

Linking day to day, binding time this way,
Life’s linear punishment.
Fate laughing, time passing,
Breaking the chains life set over me
(chorus)
Constant circling, ever linking,
Life’s little ways to keep you from thinking
Binding. Ensnaring.
Gotta break away from these chains of reason.

Why can’t I just tear them off?
These doubts that trap me inside this shell.
Where is the light I was promised?
Or is it just a shaft into hell?
(chorus)
Constant circling, ever linking,
Life’s little ways to keep you from thinking,
Binding. Ensnaring.
Gotta break away from these chains of reason
Held fast, tied down,
A sacrifice to angels laughs,
Times chains, weighed down,
Growing heavier every breath drawn.
Gotta break away from these chains of reason.