I need advice from a girl

[nintendo-fanboy]

There is this girl. Her name is Kara. I've known her since early grade school and I have fallen in love with her. I tried going out with her but some things outside of my control messed things up and we broke up. I want to tell her how I feel and this is what I was planning. I was gonna go to her house and we were gonna walk over to the local park where going to walk for a little bit and talk. This i somewhat along the lines of what I am gonna say. I don't want it to be a speach. I want it to be from the heart.
I am gonna find a bench or something and cup her hands in mine. Then I am gonna say " Kara. We have knoen each other for a long time. And durring that time we have had a lot of fun. When we tried dating before, stuff happened that messed things up between us and it crushed me when we had to split up. WEll, all these years I've been waiting to tell you and it is that I love you. I know you may not feel the same way as I do but want you to know that I love you and nothing on earth can change that. All I want in life is for you to be happy; with or without me. I think you are the most beautiful girl in the world and I love everything about you.I really love you. This is from my heart. I just needed to tell you how I felt and hope that yu feel the same way.
Then I will ask her how she feels.
How does all that sound? Any special thing to wear or say differently?