Pokemon Umbral Discussion 24: I Can Has Pokemon?

Bard The 5th LW · 05-29-2010, 10:12 PM

And I finally finished Charlotte's legendary, which will be introduced at an indefinite time. I'm a bit unhappy with the 4 attack moveset I have panned out, so it is very likely that Ill make Charlotte a breeder by another name as to give Revenard (name pending) a wider array of attacks.

Name: Revenard
Type: Steel/Ghost
Ability: Rough Skin- inflicts damage equal to 1/8 of the opponents health upon contact.

Appearance
Height: 6 ft
Weight: 200 lbs.
Renard is an eerie and unsettling figure. It bears a resemblance towards a silver fox, although is much larger. Upon further inspection, its fur seems to be made of metal and and also stands out like spikes, and they can be cut upon very easily. On his forehead however, his hair forms a completely black crescent moon. Revenard's eyes take a steely blue color, and always seem alert. It also seems to be incapable of making sound, and has no verbal cry. Its breathing is peculiar to, as it shows no outward signs of taking in air.

Stats:
HP:130
Attack: 150
Defense: 120
SP. Attack: 70
SP. Defense: 110
Speed: 100
Total: 680

I'll admit, you guys are probably smarter than me about this sort of thing, so I'll take any criticisms and/or suggestions. I admittedly stole the base stat from Enmakki, but I'm not sure if that was the accepted Enmakki or not. Once agains, criticisms/suggestions.

05-29-2010, 10:12 PM	#11
Bard The 5th LW Feelin' Super! Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 4,191	And I finally finished Charlotte's legendary, which will be introduced at an indefinite time. I'm a bit unhappy with the 4 attack moveset I have panned out, so it is very likely that Ill make Charlotte a breeder by another name as to give Revenard (name pending) a wider array of attacks. Name: Revenard Type: Steel/Ghost Ability: Rough Skin- inflicts damage equal to 1/8 of the opponents health upon contact. Appearance Height: 6 ft Weight: 200 lbs. Renard is an eerie and unsettling figure. It bears a resemblance towards a silver fox, although is much larger. Upon further inspection, its fur seems to be made of metal and and also stands out like spikes, and they can be cut upon very easily. On his forehead however, his hair forms a completely black crescent moon. Revenard's eyes take a steely blue color, and always seem alert. It also seems to be incapable of making sound, and has no verbal cry. Its breathing is peculiar to, as it shows no outward signs of taking in air. Stats: HP:130 Attack: 150 Defense: 120 SP. Attack: 70 SP. Defense: 110 Speed: 100 Total: 680 I'll admit, you guys are probably smarter than me about this sort of thing, so I'll take any criticisms and/or suggestions. I admittedly stole the base stat from Enmakki, but I'm not sure if that was the accepted Enmakki or not. Once agains, criticisms/suggestions.