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Unread 07-29-2010, 03:57 PM   #11
Bard The 5th LW
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BardTheFif...I'm just calling you Bard. Yes, you can summon a motorcycle, but prolonged use will make you tired since it uses your energy, not fuel. However, you have the same problem that Overcast did; humans can't learn about their powers on their own. So, character rejected for that.

Might as well say a few things about your powers while I'm at it. Fire Magic would be limited to creating bursts of fire around his body, making it pretty much limited to melee use. A simple Fireball spell would probably work better. Given the current background, Flash Move wouldn't work either because teleporting is really hard to self-teach.

Don't get how his aura is dark red, by the way. It seems like it would be a pale blue, if anything. He seems to have it fairly well refined, and elemental control and motorcycles are things I typiclaly associate with the west. Since I've no idea how you arrived at that color though, I'm willing to listen to your reasons for it.

Also gonna add that I'm a little surprised that Nicholai has no relationships, you'd think there'd at least be someone out to get revenge on him. Not to mention someone watching to make sure he stays in line.
I would change my username, but I find the effect of the info-box much too fun.

I included that he was a parahuman, but I'll change it around. He'll probably be a nonhuman in that case.

Alright I'll revise the fire magic stuff.

I misinterepreted the aura thing. I figured Red just because he was more crazy with his powers. Blue probably would fit better.

I just hadn't included anything on relations. I was going to say something about fellow delinquent, but I simply was low on time.

I'm probably going to rewrite him Maybe make a new character. I have something in mind.

Edit: Would a half-demon character be acceptable?

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