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Unread 06-09-2004, 12:17 AM   #1
Sithdarth
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Default I need a little inspiration.

I'm working on this story, not actually at the writing phase yet, and I've already hit a block. Before I get into that I'll give you a little background. The story is about 4 heros that travel the country fighting evil and stuff. Now that my seem familar but trust me I'm taking this in a whole new direction. See these heros all have speacial powers but they all have some a quirk that negates that power. The party memebers are as follows:

1) Mathias Frye a half human half elf that can see into the future but he procrastinates until its to late to do anything.

2) Nathaniel Frye the aboves half brother and full human. He is a perfect fighter and can repilcate any fighting move after seeing it once. He can also fix anything after taking it apart. He is narcoleptic and tends to fall asleep at the worst possible times, he is non to bright either.

3) Ginnar Skirvir a dwarf that remembers everything that has ever happened to him. However, he cannot recall what ever he is trying too. For example, if you asked his name he could tell you anything else but that and if you asked him something else he could tell you his name in passing.

4) Finrod Lossehelin a high elf with the power of absolute reason. He can think his way out of any situation but he is extermely impulisve. He can rarely force him self to thnk before he acts and does something stupid. His logic can bend the rules of the universe but he has no ideal and hardly can ever concentrate that much except for the occasional accident for comedic effect.

Now this is all well and good but I'm kinda stuck on the main villain. I have no ideal what to do for a main villian. I was thinking of making him competent main character but somehow still lose to the heros. I don't know if the bad guy should be human or some sort evil being that was human but got transformed by evil magic. I just can't think of any comedic way to tie the two together. Perhasp on of you can inspire me in some small way.
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