Great Read.....

Nimbus · 11-26-2004, 12:02 PM

Awesome read thus far... I'm only around episode four or five...

But WOAH the typos! one instance with the Menace... where she's talking about her negaflux field she says she could change it from a ratio of 1:1 to ,000:1 (I assume it's meant to say 1,000) or from when she sets it for nuke 6,000... but alas no...

If you were having that kinda trouble you should have sent me the manuscript... I'm great at picking up all those little nuissance bugs because I read every word letter to letter... I have to hear it alloud in my head or I don't remember anything later.

So to sum up...

AWESOME BOOK,
Sucks that I'm in Canada... no Clevinger signages...

Next time I'm in Quebec maybe I'll look up Pierre for his Signature... YAY Pierre.

Alright more reading to do... happy writing Brian.
Maybe some day I'll make it down to see you,

Nimbus.

11-26-2004, 12:02 PM	#1
Nimbus Warrior Poet Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Canada Eh Posts: 33	Great Read..... Awesome read thus far... I'm only around episode four or five... But WOAH the typos! one instance with the Menace... where she's talking about her negaflux field she says she could change it from a ratio of 1:1 to ,000:1 (I assume it's meant to say 1,000) or from when she sets it for nuke 6,000... but alas no... If you were having that kinda trouble you should have sent me the manuscript... I'm great at picking up all those little nuissance bugs because I read every word letter to letter... I have to hear it alloud in my head or I don't remember anything later. So to sum up... AWESOME BOOK, Sucks that I'm in Canada... no Clevinger signages... Next time I'm in Quebec maybe I'll look up Pierre for his Signature... YAY Pierre. Alright more reading to do... happy writing Brian. Maybe some day I'll make it down to see you, Nimbus. __________________ In the darkness I found a rose, And it was my salvation. Torn from darkness lost that rose, Which now is my damnation.