5 minute poetry

MasterKazoom · 11-16-2005, 10:11 AM

I'm still not sure if poetry is all good for me, I mean, if I'm any good at poetry, that is. Here I go.

him
is there anyone with him?
no, there isn't
but where is he now?
right there, but you can't see him
why don't we talk to him?
he doesn't talk
why?
that's a good question
why, though?
he doesn't.
why don't we introduce ourselves?
he already knows us.
how's that?
he knows.
how so?
just so.

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I already edited it a bit, it sounded too religious... please give me your thoughts

11-16-2005, 10:11 AM	#10
MasterKazoom Plain Dumb Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: In your Heart Posts: 118	I'm still not sure if poetry is all good for me, I mean, if I'm any good at poetry, that is. Here I go. him is there anyone with him? no, there isn't but where is he now? right there, but you can't see him why don't we talk to him? he doesn't talk why? that's a good question why, though? he doesn't. why don't we introduce ourselves? he already knows us. how's that? he knows. how so? just so. -- I already edited it a bit, it sounded too religious... please give me your thoughts __________________ a wise man once said to me - always keep a handkerchief in your loincloth!