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MasterOfMagic · 06-10-2006, 02:59 AM

Zesty: (I'll have a little trouble reading their names. Bad eyes and its pretty dark in here. Bear with me.)
I really like the look of the bottom left one (Alex?), and the bottom middle (Chase?) is pretty daggone good too.

But yeah, Molly's head shapes all wonky. Her eyes are off too. Too far apart, and the one on the right is to high up, I think. Really, the major problem is the shape of the head. I'd redo that, definately.

The girl on the top right's (Nico?) eyes are too far apart as well. You need to move the one on the left back over to the front of her face.

The top left (Karolina?) has a bit of a cone neck. Seems to be too long. Maybe if you fix that, the rest of it would fix itself. And I think her face is a bit too simplistic. It just ends up looking sloppy.

In case you've never heard of it before, try looking at it in a mirror. Or, since you've got it on the compy already, just use an image editing program to flip it. You get used to seeing your drawing how it is, and it stops looking "wrong" when you mess up and such. Seeing it in reverse makes it like your looking at a completely different drawing, and...voila, you see the mistakes agian.

That's all I can see/think of right now.

06-10-2006, 02:59 AM	#9
MasterOfMagic ahahah Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 3,456	Zesty: (I'll have a little trouble reading their names. Bad eyes and its pretty dark in here. Bear with me.) I really like the look of the bottom left one (Alex?), and the bottom middle (Chase?) is pretty daggone good too. But yeah, Molly's head shapes all wonky. Her eyes are off too. Too far apart, and the one on the right is to high up, I think. Really, the major problem is the shape of the head. I'd redo that, definately. The girl on the top right's (Nico?) eyes are too far apart as well. You need to move the one on the left back over to the front of her face. The top left (Karolina?) has a bit of a cone neck. Seems to be too long. Maybe if you fix that, the rest of it would fix itself. And I think her face is a bit too simplistic. It just ends up looking sloppy. In case you've never heard of it before, try looking at it in a mirror. Or, since you've got it on the compy already, just use an image editing program to flip it. You get used to seeing your drawing how it is, and it stops looking "wrong" when you mess up and such. Seeing it in reverse makes it like your looking at a completely different drawing, and...voila, you see the mistakes agian. That's all I can see/think of right now. Last edited by MasterOfMagic; 06-10-2006 at 03:05 AM.