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Savage Thinking · 02-08-2008, 06:28 PM

CelesJessa:

I like the animation! Just the overall mood of it makes me smile. Although I think the second from the left's jacket bends kinda oddly...

Naqel:

For that first drawing, the first thing that comes to mind is "nice rack". Although the left boob looks a tad smaller than the right. Also, the wings refuse to make any sense. The top left wing looks good, but the others just.. Refuse, for the lack of a better word.

On the second one, again, "nice rack". The main thing that urks me is the tail. Judging by how she's holding that sword, then it shouldn't be too far away from her backside. Which would mean that if her tail sticks out like that, than it should be rather skinny. But, it seems to be rather thick (based on how it's drawn). Also, the end of the tail (that sticks out from the other side of the sword) should be a tad lower.

Grandmaster_Skweeb:

That reminds me of a more blatant interpretation of FLCL.

02-08-2008, 06:28 PM	#10
Savage Thinking Yeeeah, son. Join Date: May 2005 Location: Stranded in the middle of the ocean with no desire to be rescued. Posts: 755	CelesJessa: I like the animation! Just the overall mood of it makes me smile. Although I think the second from the left's jacket bends kinda oddly... Naqel: For that first drawing, the first thing that comes to mind is "nice rack". Although the left boob looks a tad smaller than the right. Also, the wings refuse to make any sense. The top left wing looks good, but the others just.. Refuse, for the lack of a better word. On the second one, again, "nice rack". The main thing that urks me is the tail. Judging by how she's holding that sword, then it shouldn't be too far away from her backside. Which would mean that if her tail sticks out like that, than it should be rather skinny. But, it seems to be rather thick (based on how it's drawn). Also, the end of the tail (that sticks out from the other side of the sword) should be a tad lower. Grandmaster_Skweeb: That reminds me of a more blatant interpretation of FLCL. __________________ The artist formerly known as 'ZutsuJin'. "It is not necessary for the public to know whether I am joking or whether I am serious, just as it is not necessary for me to know it myself"