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Unread 04-28-2008, 04:25 PM   #11
TDK
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Originally Posted by Savage Thinking
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Looks good (Now that I can see it better), although the eyes are what bother me. Not sure if it's intended or not, but the eyes seems way too close together. One thing you could take note, is that the distance between the eyes on the face is generally the same width of the eye. Like so:



Again, I'm not sure if this was intended or not but I think it was worth mentioning.
I knew the proportions would be weird because I started off drawing just an eye, and kind of drew in the face around it.

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EDIT: I'd also like to mention the hair. It looks like it was just on the front of the person's face. It's recommend make it look more flow-y and also, since you added that much detail to the front part of the hair, add just as much detail from what can be seen from behind the head.
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