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CelesJessa · 03-29-2009, 01:16 AM

I kind of like it with either getting rid of the fist or the rest of the jewels all-together. With both it just seems very busy and my eye can't seem to find the focal point easily.

I kind of like something like that instead. (perhaps also adjusted to make the scroll a little shorter to accommodate.

If you want the other ones on there too, Perhaps it would work to swap the red jewel with the blue one in the fist. As I look at it, my focus keeps being devided between the fist and that red jewel, the red just naturally draws the eye towards it, but at the same time, the larger fist does as well, which makes conflict visually. (Or maybe just switch it from red to some other less-loud color?) Not sure if that would fix the problem, but... *shrugs*

At least that's how I feel about it.

03-29-2009, 01:16 AM	#11
CelesJessa DA-DA-DA-DAA DAA DAA DA DA-DAAAAAA! Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Zanzibar Land Posts: 6,531	I kind of like it with either getting rid of the fist or the rest of the jewels all-together. With both it just seems very busy and my eye can't seem to find the focal point easily. I kind of like something like that instead. (perhaps also adjusted to make the scroll a little shorter to accommodate. If you want the other ones on there too, Perhaps it would work to swap the red jewel with the blue one in the fist. As I look at it, my focus keeps being devided between the fist and that red jewel, the red just naturally draws the eye towards it, but at the same time, the larger fist does as well, which makes conflict visually. (Or maybe just switch it from red to some other less-loud color?) Not sure if that would fix the problem, but... shrugs At least that's how I feel about it. __________________