BlackMage.exe

[Pip Boy]

Oh thank god. I was afraid I was going to have to pretend I liked this so I didn't offend anyone. Looks like I thankfully won't have to do this.

Kirby, if you want to take this writing thing seriously, I have 2 big suggestions for you.

1) Read the works of well known authors and study their styles, sentence structures, use of hyperbole and so on to see how its done.

2) Write an original story. The only people who like fanfiction are the people who write fanfiction, and NPF is not one of those places for people who like fanfiction. We are much happier enjoying normal fiction.

EDIT: PH'NGLUI MGLW'NAFH C'THULHU R'LYEH WGAH'NAGL! PH'NGLUI MGLW--

Sorry, I tried to read more of it and I think it broke my mind for a moment.

EDIT AGAIN:

Originally Posted by Kirby2000

I guess I better work on my detail better on episode one before posting episode two.

OHPLEASENOFORTHELOVEOFALLTHATISHOLY!