5 minute poetry

***RaiRai*** · 04-22-2004, 05:13 PM

I just thought I'd make this thread so that people can have a go at on the spot poetry. I'm feeling quite poetic right now, though I can't settle enough to write something specific. So playing it as it goes seems a good idea.

Carved,
wooden and yet made to bend
forced to yeild and comprehend
Unique patterns stain my torso
bare
All of the scars of the times I'd care
but no longer shall this tree grow
stop
dead center
No longer putting myself on show
giving up and in I cave
Resistance?
I'll just accept this early grave
Live as you see fit
a worthless tool of your benefit
Carved and severed
cut in two
belonged to me, now belong to you.

04-22-2004, 05:13 PM	#1
*RaiRai* Check mate. Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Down your pants. Posts: 2,210	5 minute poetry I just thought I'd make this thread so that people can have a go at on the spot poetry. I'm feeling quite poetic right now, though I can't settle enough to write something specific. So playing it as it goes seems a good idea. Carved, wooden and yet made to bend forced to yeild and comprehend Unique patterns stain my torso bare All of the scars of the times I'd care but no longer shall this tree grow stop dead center No longer putting myself on show giving up and in I cave Resistance? I'll just accept this early grave Live as you see fit a worthless tool of your benefit Carved and severed cut in two belonged to me, now belong to you. __________________ I AM FURIOUS