5 minute poetry

[RaiRai]

Originally Posted by rightwhatwasidoing?

RaiRai, I hate to ask this, but for english class i need to bring in a piece of poetry that I like and read it to the class. since your poetry is really excellent, can I use the second poem you placed up here? if you say no that's fine, just wanted to make sure it was okay for me to do.

Wow, well, uh...understand that these were written within a few minutes and hardly analysed and drafted. If you want to, then sure. Maybe just mention my name at the end, you know, gimme some cred.