5 minute poetry - Page 30

Osterbaum · 10-07-2004, 02:50 AM

Zoam...That was brilliant. And we do salute. (See the picture.) If you don't mind I'm gonna save that poem among my "Poems In English" folder. With your name on it offcourse.

And now something from me:

He's presence stops my breath
He is here
He is death
Now it's all become clear

He's going to take me
I am going to die
I will sieze(?) to be
So I say to you: Good bye...

Funka Genocide · 10-07-2004, 09:42 AM

thanks alot Osterbaum! I didn't mean any real disrespect to your nations armed forces, I was just having trouble coming up with funny rhymes. I'm glad you liked it.

those two love poems reminded me that I haven't written one is quite a while, and I don't think I will for some time. but here's something along the same lines.

She sits alone, inside her heart
that sacred home of loving trust
never will I know its embrace
for I am in her mind, erased

I am that spark of imagination
a moments fancy unrefined
I am not real, a fantasy
the same as she's for me

who can know anothers thoughts?
and how to pry the doors of love
once before with words, too tough
but words will never tell enough

alone and silent, passions cooled
I swore I'd never give it up
now this love, but the medium
routed towards such painful tedium

I'll let her go from in my head
I never held her elsewhere
in jagged verse I've bled it dry
so many tears I've left to cry

***RaiRai*** · 10-07-2004, 02:03 PM

Chained to the past, the bitter regret
times of my life I would rather forget
But they haunt me still, this long past gone
clouds now hang here where the sun once shone
Blackened and enraged, filled with doubt
things which had happened, I'd try to figure out
no peace in my head, no release in my heart
I've filled my duties, and I'll gladly take part
but allow me to remember, and then to move along
with a smile on my face and in my heart a song
I refuse to back down and give in to hate
but if I can't forget now, it will be too late
I'll shield off the rain, until comes the calm
Then plant new life seeds, from my renewed palm.

Lycanthrope · 10-07-2004, 02:14 PM

You see, this is why we all suck at this compared to RaiRai.

***RaiRai*** · 10-07-2004, 02:16 PM

It's all angst poetry based off of current situations. It sucks. =3

Sithdarth · 10-07-2004, 05:03 PM

Wasted Life

A wasted life of today
may yet be remade
if you act without delay
a wasted life may yet be saved

There is no blame to be placed
for that which has come to pass
The only course of action presented
most be followed enmass

Sorrows path must not be taken
for its leads into the darkest pit
Faith must be held unshaken
and one must never quit.

Funka Genocide · 10-07-2004, 05:20 PM

hey Sithdarth, let me ask you something. Poetry kind of grows on you, doesn't it?

and now I will try my hand at a dedication to Lycanthrope, because he's such a cool guy err, werebeast, or whatever.

half beast cultured and upright
a gentlemen yet not uptight
his form may shift or alter
his will it shall not falter

musician monk or swordy bard
un-effete, he's downright hard
wounds of flesh he'll just ignore
weakness, what a heart is for

intellect and savage force
and wit to match, but of course
in the rain hes kind of stinky
yet he remains, beloved puppy

Lycanthrope · 10-07-2004, 07:21 PM

Hahahahahahahahaha
This goes to my signature.

Sithdarth · 10-07-2004, 09:14 PM

Yep it does hence two in one day and this one is quite a departure from my other style as well as being a bit longer.

Crystal blue hangs overhead
with velvet green underneath
What was once to be said
has been lost to a silent thief

This silent thief called beauty
had wrought its greaterest wonder
Their is no greater duty
then tearing a cold hear asunder

The depthless void above
so perfect and so clean
it seems to define love
Such a sight has never been seen

If I was to fall right now
into that depthless enternity
With great power to endow
I am filled with absolute certainty

A sense of peace now found
a felling that I've always missed
My thoughts now wax profound
for into bliss I have slipped.

BlackMageGirl! · 10-07-2004, 11:55 PM

This one is called 'Helpless'

Words come and flow past my ears
I hear, I listen, and I nod
For what else can I do?

He talks faster now
As if desperately trying
To throw off this burden

The sounds hurt since
For once in my life
I cannot answer

Then the tears come
In droves, in storms
I hold him and sigh

He is hesitant now
Darker, quieter, subdued
The flame not out, but small

For I wonder
What can bring
The life back in his eyes?

It seems all I can do
Is hold him, listen to him
And I feel for him.

10-07-2004, 02:50 AM	#291
Osterbaum The revolution will be memed! Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: FIN Posts: 5,967	Zoam...That was brilliant. And we do salute. (See the picture.) If you don't mind I'm gonna save that poem among my "Poems In English" folder. With your name on it offcourse. And now something from me: He's presence stops my breath He is here He is death Now it's all become clear He's going to take me I am going to die I will sieze(?) to be So I say to you: Good bye... Attached Images __________________ D is for Dirty Commie!

10-07-2004, 09:42 AM	#292
Funka Genocide Sent to the cornfield Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 4,566	thanks alot Osterbaum! I didn't mean any real disrespect to your nations armed forces, I was just having trouble coming up with funny rhymes. I'm glad you liked it. those two love poems reminded me that I haven't written one is quite a while, and I don't think I will for some time. but here's something along the same lines. She sits alone, inside her heart that sacred home of loving trust never will I know its embrace for I am in her mind, erased I am that spark of imagination a moments fancy unrefined I am not real, a fantasy the same as she's for me who can know anothers thoughts? and how to pry the doors of love once before with words, too tough but words will never tell enough alone and silent, passions cooled I swore I'd never give it up now this love, but the medium routed towards such painful tedium I'll let her go from in my head I never held her elsewhere in jagged verse I've bled it dry so many tears I've left to cry Last edited by Zoamelgustar; 10-07-2004 at 09:50 AM.

10-07-2004, 02:03 PM	#293
*RaiRai* Check mate. Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Down your pants. Posts: 2,210	Chained to the past, the bitter regret times of my life I would rather forget But they haunt me still, this long past gone clouds now hang here where the sun once shone Blackened and enraged, filled with doubt things which had happened, I'd try to figure out no peace in my head, no release in my heart I've filled my duties, and I'll gladly take part but allow me to remember, and then to move along with a smile on my face and in my heart a song I refuse to back down and give in to hate but if I can't forget now, it will be too late I'll shield off the rain, until comes the calm Then plant new life seeds, from my renewed palm. __________________ I AM FURIOUS

10-07-2004, 02:14 PM	#294
Lycanthrope Deus Lupus Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: The City of Angels Posts: 2,925	You see, this is why we all suck at this compared to RaiRai. __________________ "With these seven easy steps, you, too, can be the authoritarian despot of your own principality. Machiavelli, your road to happiness" "I shoot Flying Monkies!" "Christmas had it coming its what it gets for taking over thanksgiving and threatening halloween with its weapons of mass consumerism" "Death to All Fanatics!" Official RP Action God Lycanthropic Poem "FOR YOU THE CAKE IS OVER. YOU HAVE REACHED THE END OF CAKE." -Death Krylo and BMG are apparently my bitches.

10-07-2004, 02:16 PM	#295
*RaiRai* Check mate. Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Down your pants. Posts: 2,210	It's all angst poetry based off of current situations. It sucks. =3 __________________ I AM FURIOUS

10-07-2004, 05:03 PM	#296
Sithdarth Friendly Neighborhood Quantum Hobo Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Outside the M-brane look'n in Posts: 5,403	Wasted Life A wasted life of today may yet be remade if you act without delay a wasted life may yet be saved There is no blame to be placed for that which has come to pass The only course of action presented most be followed enmass Sorrows path must not be taken for its leads into the darkest pit Faith must be held unshaken and one must never quit.

10-07-2004, 05:20 PM	#297
Funka Genocide Sent to the cornfield Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 4,566	hey Sithdarth, let me ask you something. Poetry kind of grows on you, doesn't it? and now I will try my hand at a dedication to Lycanthrope, because he's such a cool guy err, werebeast, or whatever. half beast cultured and upright a gentlemen yet not uptight his form may shift or alter his will it shall not falter musician monk or swordy bard un-effete, he's downright hard wounds of flesh he'll just ignore weakness, what a heart is for intellect and savage force and wit to match, but of course in the rain hes kind of stinky yet he remains, beloved puppy

10-07-2004, 07:21 PM	#298
Lycanthrope Deus Lupus Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: The City of Angels Posts: 2,925	Hahahahahahahahaha This goes to my signature. __________________ "With these seven easy steps, you, too, can be the authoritarian despot of your own principality. Machiavelli, your road to happiness" "I shoot Flying Monkies!" "Christmas had it coming its what it gets for taking over thanksgiving and threatening halloween with its weapons of mass consumerism" "Death to All Fanatics!" Official RP Action God Lycanthropic Poem "FOR YOU THE CAKE IS OVER. YOU HAVE REACHED THE END OF CAKE." -Death Krylo and BMG are apparently my bitches.

10-07-2004, 09:14 PM	#299
Sithdarth Friendly Neighborhood Quantum Hobo Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Outside the M-brane look'n in Posts: 5,403	Yep it does hence two in one day and this one is quite a departure from my other style as well as being a bit longer. Crystal blue hangs overhead with velvet green underneath What was once to be said has been lost to a silent thief This silent thief called beauty had wrought its greaterest wonder Their is no greater duty then tearing a cold hear asunder The depthless void above so perfect and so clean it seems to define love Such a sight has never been seen If I was to fall right now into that depthless enternity With great power to endow I am filled with absolute certainty A sense of peace now found a felling that I've always missed My thoughts now wax profound for into bliss I have slipped.

10-07-2004, 11:55 PM	#300
BlackMageGirl! Oh hi! :D Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Currently in reality! Posts: 2,688	This one is called 'Helpless' Words come and flow past my ears I hear, I listen, and I nod For what else can I do? He talks faster now As if desperately trying To throw off this burden The sounds hurt since For once in my life I cannot answer Then the tears come In droves, in storms I hold him and sigh He is hesitant now Darker, quieter, subdued The flame not out, but small For I wonder What can bring The life back in his eyes? It seems all I can do Is hold him, listen to him And I feel for him.

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