PhoenixFlame Presents: Eclipse Phase

[Krylo]

Overcast:

Only spent 348 CP on Active Skills, you have to spend at least 400. You also only spent 245 on Knowledge skills and need to spend at least 300.

Your native language (I'm assuming English) is 70 + INT for free. 81 for you. I edited that up to where it should have been.

You didn't add your morph bonus to your skills so I did so for you.

Mental Speed says it doesn't work with any other augmentations that give you extra actions. I'm guessing they mean extra actions per phase, not turn, but it's something you should probably clarify.

Speaking of speed, you have 3 speed as a constant and 4 if you activate kick. You had your speed on the sheet set to 2.

You messed up your math slightly on init giving yourself 4 more than you should have.

Annnnnd you have 213 unused CP 97 of which must be spent on skills.

EDIT: I will wait to do Ellen's until after your revisements so it only has to be looked over/fixed once.

[Dracorion]

Yep, that should be it. Knock yourself out, Krylo.

[Overcast]

Language was leftover from the old one so yeah that flaw is to be fixed.

Skill errors I think aren't working properly, let me check my math.

Knowledge Skills: Acedemic: Weapon Mechanics 60, Art Graffiti 60, Interest: Gambling 60, Lang Cantonese 60 Professsion Tactician 60. 60*5 = 300

Active Skills: Fray 50, Free Run 50, Free Fall 50, Intimidate 40, Kinetics 70, Network Sci 40, Network Fire 50, Perception 50 = 400

Other CP purchases. 5 Specs(25) 100000 Credits(100) Remade(60) Moxie+7(105) 100 Rep(10).

I'll once over the math for everything else but I think there is something missing...

[Krylo]

Originally Posted by Overcast

Language was leftover from the old one so yeah that flaw is to be fixed.

Skill errors I think aren't working properly, let me check my math.

Knowledge Skills: Acedemic: Weapon Mechanics 60, Art Graffiti 60, Interest: Gambling 60, Lang Cantonese 60 Professsion Tactician 60. 60*5 = 300

Active Skills: Fray 50, Free Run 50, Free Fall 50, Intimidate 40, Kinetics 70, Network Sci 40, Network Fire 50, Perception 50 = 400

Other CP purchases. 5 Specs(25) 100000 Credits(100) Remade(60) Moxie+7(105) 100 Rep(10).

I'll once over the math for everything else but I think there is something missing...

On skills: You start purchasing at the level of your aptitude not from 0. I think that's where the problem is. You only spent 34 on Fray/Free Run, for instance, because you have 16 REF, and 34 + 16 = 50

I DID forget the specs, though, and I think the Mesh cost, so that's 85 CP you spent I forgot about.

Gear math needs to be rechecked, I came to 79000 credits. I maybe forgot something, though.

[Overcast]

That pretty much changes everything, alright now I believe I have to build him from scratch again because of that assumption. Be back at some point.

EDIT: You didn't include the implants in your cost calculations.

[krogothwolf]

I'm going to be making changes from Beam to Kenetic cause beam seems useless the more I read on it.

[Krylo]

Krogo: Brinker gives +20 to a networking skill of your choice. You spent 5 on one networking skill and 15 on another. I ASSUMED you wanted to take them both for free, so I upped them each by five and made them that way.

You also had 5 more points in your native tongue than you should have: 70 + INT (15) = 85.

In addition you only spent 240 on knowledge skills. You have to spend at least 60 more points there.

And you spent 17 CP too many.

@ OC: I did, but you had like ten million 250s so I folded them all together and my calculations looked weird so I deleted them.

I should have left them I guess, but your gear (without implants) clearly doesn't add up to the 78650 I attributed your spent credits (including left overs) to.

Edit: Forgot to include the CP calculations for checking over on Krogo's sheet. Fixed.

[Dracorion]

Originally Posted by Krylo

On skills: You start purchasing at the level of your aptitude not from 0.

Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit.

Yeah, I fucked up my skills. Big time.

[Krylo]

Oh, OC, I assumed you (and Krogo) both had Neurachem 1 because you didn't say 1 or 2 on your sheet and had your speeds LOWER than it should be.

If you had bought 2, I think that would make up for the whole difference in credits plus some.

And I won't do Ellen until she's reposted again.

[krogothwolf]

Is that 17 extra inlcuding the 10 you removed?