| |
|
06-17-2004, 03:05 PM
|
#71 |
|
Magikoopa
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: chapel hill wo0t wo0t
Posts: 1,617
|
ok the first time I did this it looked better but here it is
Name: John Lang Age: 21 Gender:Male Appearance: blone hair, blue eyes, small build Equipment: (weapons, items, etc) he can use guns and sword sorta good and better with his hands Bio: John grew up in a rich family and got all the spoils of it; self defence lessons (he got as far as being phisicly stoic), great education everything. though after his parents died he got nothing in their will. he had to have two jobs to stay in the area in which he had become acustum to: a taxidriver and a liberian. though being stoic he is rash and short tempered.
__________________
Zei Zao looks helplessly as he runs out of road to follow! The army of Huang Yao Shi grinds to a halt as to avoid wading through grass. That's for "common" armies. Much like Gao Hu's, who's invasion force reaches the border and sits in ambush for any fleeing units of Huang Yao Shi. In the grass. Cao Zhen, however, continues to follow the road, as grass is too green for his liking this time of year. You ain't got no K-Mart! |
|
|
06-17-2004, 03:22 PM
|
#72 |
|
DA-DA-DA-DAA DAA DAA DA DA-DAAAAAA!
Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: Zanzibar Land
Posts: 6,531
|
Alright. If you want to get into the story have you character have accedentally seen the whole thing with the rambling hurt man, or accedentally walk by Reena's house when the police were there and get captured too. He has to get captured somehow.
And could you change your character around a little so that he's not wealthy enough to live in the nicest sector. (nobody was allowed to be rich)
__________________
 |
|
|
|
06-17-2004, 03:24 PM
|
#73 |
|
Sent to the cornfield
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: Crushing the weak beneath the iron jackboots of tyranny
Posts: 7,703
|
Oh, and Jess, as a pimpmasta Masta P was supposed to be rich... but now I intend to have him be completely amnesiac from a vicious knock on the head, and permanently stuck in gangsta mode. Is that all right?
|
|
|
|
06-17-2004, 03:26 PM
|
#74 |
|
Magikoopa
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: chapel hill wo0t wo0t
Posts: 1,617
|
he isn't rich every thing that he gets pays for the house
and he sorta gets the rest from his friends so he isn't rich he he just buys more than he has to spend
__________________
Zei Zao looks helplessly as he runs out of road to follow! The army of Huang Yao Shi grinds to a halt as to avoid wading through grass. That's for "common" armies. Much like Gao Hu's, who's invasion force reaches the border and sits in ambush for any fleeing units of Huang Yao Shi. In the grass. Cao Zhen, however, continues to follow the road, as grass is too green for his liking this time of year. You ain't got no K-Mart! |
|
|
|
06-17-2004, 03:28 PM
|
#75 |
|
Lakitu
Join Date: Nov 2003
Posts: 2,152
|
Hmmmm I wasn't saying I was literaly dropping out, just meant I probbably wont post for a week so my char is just kind of following the group.
Oh yeah does my guy still have his eye in his head? |
|
|
|
06-17-2004, 03:37 PM
|
#76 |
|
DA-DA-DA-DAA DAA DAA DA DA-DAAAAAA!
Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: Zanzibar Land
Posts: 6,531
|
Hax- The probably left the eye in his head, and yeah, we'll have your character just follow along.
Dante- that sounds find Pawn- as long as he isn't living in the nice sector, because if he is, I will have a hard time getting him into the story because people in the nicer sector wouldn't be captured like the people in the lower sector. Repost: Bombshell. I'm really confused as to what your character is talking about. And they aren't in the hospital anymore.
__________________
|
|
|
|
06-17-2004, 03:39 PM
|
#77 |
|
MSI Productions
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Wait... I know this one... can you give me a hint?
Posts: 541
|
Ok wait I'm confused now what? 'Cause... damn! Um... yeah I thought it was in the hospital ok gotta be more clear about what's happening 'cause I'm confused.
|
|
|
|
06-17-2004, 03:42 PM
|
#78 | |
|
Magikoopa
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: chapel hill wo0t wo0t
Posts: 1,617
|
Quote:
__________________
Zei Zao looks helplessly as he runs out of road to follow! The army of Huang Yao Shi grinds to a halt as to avoid wading through grass. That's for "common" armies. Much like Gao Hu's, who's invasion force reaches the border and sits in ambush for any fleeing units of Huang Yao Shi. In the grass. Cao Zhen, however, continues to follow the road, as grass is too green for his liking this time of year. You ain't got no K-Mart! |
|
|
|
|
06-17-2004, 03:43 PM
|
#79 |
|
DA-DA-DA-DAA DAA DAA DA DA-DAAAAAA!
Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: Zanzibar Land
Posts: 6,531
|
They are in an unknown room that looks like an office with bars on the window. The people who had been in the hospital were knocked out then brought to wherever they are now.
__________________
|
|
|
|
06-17-2004, 03:44 PM
|
#80 |
|
MSI Productions
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Wait... I know this one... can you give me a hint?
Posts: 541
|
Oh... ok.
|
|
|
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Linear Mode
