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Unread 01-13-2012, 11:34 PM   #81
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Just checking, but it has gotten weird now, right?
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Unread 01-13-2012, 11:53 PM   #82
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Unread 01-14-2012, 12:37 AM   #83
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Just checking, but it has gotten weird now, right?
Well, weird is a matter of opinion. So to some peeps this may be as weird as it gets. However, in my opinion: No, it has not gotten weird yet.
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Unread 01-14-2012, 04:16 AM   #84
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Wait til it puts on a ten gallon and spurs.
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Unread 01-17-2012, 11:39 AM   #85
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We interrupt your Creepy Spider Demon programming with...
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Unread 01-18-2012, 12:08 AM   #86
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On one hand, it's probably just a dream. On the other hand, considering the rest of the bunch I could totally see The Judge having creepy dream haunting powers.
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Unread 01-20-2012, 03:15 PM   #87
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NOW I think it is starting to get weird.
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Unread 01-20-2012, 04:45 PM   #88
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I dig Erin's conversation with herself, but I'm just gonna throw out my two cents:

Since you kinda lost her German mannerisms and diction, it's (only a bit) tedious to kind of have to read the whole panel, determine who is saying what, then reread it again in context.

Again, it only takes like an extra two seconds to guess who is saying what. Erin at this point seems to have been relegated to the role of clueless wanderer, and goth-fairy girl would be the one saying anything... well, Goth. The point I'm making is that without any form of sound and only having text to go on, we kind of have to read the whole thing and go "okay, Erin is saying that."

I think a good way to consider clarifying whom is speaking right off the bat would be to give each character their own respective speech bubble, kind of like Brian did for Garland, Vilbert, Black Mage when he was evil, etc. Some kind of distinction like that (even if it's only a subtle font change or outline of the bubble) would probably help.

Lettering is something I've done in the past, so I'm just trying to give you something to consider. Even if you keep things as is, it's still understandable.
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Unread 01-20-2012, 05:24 PM   #89
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Different letters for Ith is a pretty great idea actually. I don't know why I didn't think of that at first. I just need to find a good font for it.
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Unread 01-20-2012, 05:34 PM   #90
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I was about to suggest the same thing. Actually. While it's not much a problem it would at least safe us the time to figure out who's saying what.
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