FFVI-2 X-treme Beach Volleyball (lots of huge pictures warning)

CelesJessa · 06-13-2008, 03:24 PM

What have I done?!

(I can't draw people playing volleyball. Why am I making a volleyball comic?)

(like I said, I can't draw people playing volleyball. But I apparently can draw people doing the robot.)

Aaand that's all for now. I just got bored the other night and started drawing. Hope you guys like it.

And yes, I have the memory of a small rodent, so I wrote the same line on two pages and didn't realize it until now.

EDIT: Next update of actual comic pages:
http://www.nuklearforums.com/showth...d=1#post806454

Fifthfiend · 06-13-2008, 03:36 PM

You also posted in the books and comics forum instead of the arts and crafts forum which is basically my fault for renaming all the forums to confuse the fuck out of everyone don't worry I'll go ahead and move it for you.

EDIT: Intellectually I realize that Umaro is in fact wearing more clothes than usual yet this does not stop me from being totally skeeved out.

Well played.

EVILNess · 06-13-2008, 03:38 PM

Write "Like I said..." in the last panel of the next to last page to fix the double line, if it bothers you that much. Otherwise awesome stuff. Seriously you should transfer, ink, and possibly color those and post them for more than NPF to enjoy. They are really very good (And funny.) I almost died at the "Kupo." "Well said, Mog" joke.

CelesJessa · 06-13-2008, 04:02 PM

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Originally Posted by Fifthfiend

You also posted in the books and comics forum instead of the arts and crafts forum which is basically my fault for renaming all the forums to confuse the fuck out of everyone don't worry I'll go ahead and move it for you.

Actually, I couldn't decide where to put it, and decided on the comic subforum because it was a comic, but if it's better suited for the arts and crafts forum, that's alright too. Thanks for moving it for me.

Quote:

EDIT: Intellectually I realize that Umaro is in fact wearing more clothes than usual yet this does not stop me from being totally skeeved out.

In the panel before, I wanted to have one of those dramatic anime clothes-throwing scenes, but when I got to Umaro, I realized he didn't have anything to throw, much to my disappointment.

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Originally Posted by EVILNess

Write "Like I said..." in the last panel of the next to last page to fix the double line, if it bothers you that much.

Oh yeah, that would fix it. I'll write that on the original right now.

I'm a little concerned, until I come up with more, I have this notebook sitting out on my desk turned to a page with an old man and a sasquatch in speedos on it. I think my mom saw it. She didn't say anything but I can only imagine what's going on in her mind.

Funka Genocide · 06-13-2008, 04:04 PM

Wher's D-Bag?

I mean Gau.

I demand that this devolve into naked-morph form Terra Vs. Magitek riding Bikini Celes.

I demand gently

Regulus Tera · 06-13-2008, 04:07 PM

This is awesome and it's going to NUKLEARPEDIA for posterity!

pochercoaster · 06-13-2008, 04:09 PM

Maybe it's just cause I'm using an LCD monitor, but I find it a little difficult to read. Perhaps you should darken it or fiddle with the contrast or something? Or maybe I'm just blind.

Otherwise, that gave me a good laugh.

Daimo Mac, The Blue Light of Hope · 06-13-2008, 04:10 PM

That is made of win and awesome, aside from Strago

CelesJessa · 06-13-2008, 04:32 PM

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Originally Posted by Funka Genocide

I demand that this devolve into naked-morph form Terra Vs. Magitek riding Bikini Celes.

Hah. I don't know. We'll have to see.

Although, for the record, I'm open to suggestions about what should happen. Not saying that I'll do any of the suggestions, but just to get ideas going.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Regulus Tera

This is awesome and it's going to NUKLEARPEDIA for posterity!

Yaay! Thanks.

Quote:

Originally Posted by pocheros

Maybe it's just cause I'm using an LCD monitor, but I find it a little difficult to read. Perhaps you should darken it or fiddle with the contrast or something? Or maybe I'm just blind.

Ah yeah, I'm sorry. I might go back and do what EVILNess said, then it will be easy to read. I'll keep in mind to darken the contrast for future pages. If there's any dialogue you can't read, I can type it out.

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Originally Posted by Big Mac

That is made of win and awesome, aside from Strago

Just so you know. I didn't know how to draw practically naked old men, so I had to find reference pictures to help me.

I am scared for life.

Also, I have been informed that it is Cyan Garamonde and Setzer Gabbiani. Whoops.... Uh... they got married? I'll fix it later.

Savage Thinking · 06-13-2008, 04:39 PM

For me, the more words the speech bubbles had, the harder it got to read. Also, the smudge marks made some of the other things hard to read as well as some words being written too lightly. Adjusting the contrast would help greatly. Although my eyesight is so bad I might as well be considered blind...

It's friggin' hilarious none the less, and I thought the awkward volleyball poses actually adds to the funny.

I always figured Strago to be more pudgier for some reason...

06-13-2008, 03:24 PM	#1
CelesJessa DA-DA-DA-DAA DAA DAA DA DA-DAAAAAA! Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Zanzibar Land Posts: 6,531	FFVI-2 X-treme Beach Volleyball (lots of huge pictures warning) What have I done?! (I can't draw people playing volleyball. Why am I making a volleyball comic?) (like I said, I can't draw people playing volleyball. But I apparently can draw people doing the robot.) Aaand that's all for now. I just got bored the other night and started drawing. Hope you guys like it. And yes, I have the memory of a small rodent, so I wrote the same line on two pages and didn't realize it until now. EDIT: Next update of actual comic pages: http://www.nuklearforums.com/showth...d=1#post806454 __________________ Last edited by CelesJessa; 07-09-2008 at 11:56 PM.

06-13-2008, 03:36 PM	#2
Fifthfiend for all seasons Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 19,409	You also posted in the books and comics forum instead of the arts and crafts forum which is basically my fault for renaming all the forums to confuse the fuck out of everyone don't worry I'll go ahead and move it for you. EDIT: Intellectually I realize that Umaro is in fact wearing more clothes than usual yet this does not stop me from being totally skeeved out. Well played. __________________ check out my buttspresso

06-13-2008, 04:09 PM	#7
pochercoaster rollerpocher tycoon Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 1,808	Maybe it's just cause I'm using an LCD monitor, but I find it a little difficult to read. Perhaps you should darken it or fiddle with the contrast or something? Or maybe I'm just blind. Otherwise, that gave me a good laugh. Last edited by pochercoaster; 06-13-2008 at 04:16 PM.

06-13-2008, 04:10 PM	#8
Daimo Mac, The Blue Light of Hope Definitely NOT a samurai Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Location: Wherever the wind leads me Posts: 5,347	That is made of win and awesome, aside from Strago __________________ Lost in the Music ~ On Hiatus Tales of a Torn World ~ World Building

06-13-2008, 04:39 PM	#10
Savage Thinking Yeeeah, son. Join Date: May 2005 Location: Stranded in the middle of the ocean with no desire to be rescued. Posts: 755	For me, the more words the speech bubbles had, the harder it got to read. Also, the smudge marks made some of the other things hard to read as well as some words being written too lightly. Adjusting the contrast would help greatly. Although my eyesight is so bad I might as well be considered blind... It's friggin' hilarious none the less, and I thought the awkward volleyball poses actually adds to the funny. I always figured Strago to be more pudgier for some reason... __________________ The artist formerly known as 'ZutsuJin'. "It is not necessary for the public to know whether I am joking or whether I am serious, just as it is not necessary for me to know it myself"

06-13-2008, 04:04 PM	#5
Funka Genocide Sent to the cornfield Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 4,566	Wher's D-Bag? I mean Gau. I demand that this devolve into naked-morph form Terra Vs. Magitek riding Bikini Celes. I demand gently

06-13-2008, 04:07 PM	#6
Regulus Tera lol i dont even know Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 7,271	This is awesome and it's going to NUKLEARPEDIA for posterity!