Mideival RP (sign-up) (Idea for name would be greatly appreciated) - Page 11

Arhra · 09-16-2006, 08:28 AM

Forgive me if this comes across as too blunt, but I'd just like to say this and I'm sure I'm not the only one who thinks this.

Raiden, those last two post endings don't leave much room for doing anything. Bowing is something that, with a little creativity, you can add to, but this last one is basically:

King: "Welcome, my subjects. I'm sure you're all wondering why I have called you here today."
Us: "Yes. We are wondering why you have called us here today."

Astral Harmony · 09-16-2006, 09:04 AM

I concur. We just can't do anything with that post.

If it's being used to anger some of us, it's working...

Aishel: (talking through her teeth at Pinchette) "Does this idiot think he's building suspense or something?"
Pinchette: (whispering) "Just grin and bear it like the oversized sword-wielding moron that you are."

GARUD · 09-16-2006, 10:03 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Arhra

Forgive me if this comes across as too blunt, but I'd just like to say this and I'm sure I'm not the only one who thinks this.

Raiden, those last two post endings don't leave much room for doing anything.

Well well well. Maybe this RP is like Dragon Ball Z. There is a story and a purpose, but it just takes 50 episodes (threads) to change a lightbulb, and everyone in the room has to shout and yell like they are constapated.

Which gives me a thought. Raiden, MAKE AN OMAKE THREAD!

Mr.Bookworm · 09-16-2006, 02:45 PM

Name: Jan Rakshi (That's rock-shy)
Age: 27
Sex: Male
Race: Human

Appearance: He has black hair, and green eyes. He wears a simple robe with a calligraphed snake on it, and sandals. He has on a white vest and pants unde the robe. He has a tattoo on his right shoulder. The tattoo has an arch with a snake sliding up one side, and a dot in the middle.

Weapon:
Rakshi Blade- This blade has been handed down through the Rakshi family for generations. It's a three-foot long katana. The blade is pure black, except for the mark of Lin-Tala-Ranc-Shiki on the very bottom of the blade in red. It also has a small spell on it that ensures it never dulls.

Skills: He is a master of Lin-Tala-Ranc-Cryk-Shiki (The Red-Stained Path to Hell), an ancient sword art. The art focuses on using the body's energy in concert with the blade. There are six normal attacks in the art, three "Special" attacks, and one ultimate attack.

Hades Chain Blade- Using this technique, he seperates part of the blade from the sword, and makes a chain of energy connecting the blade to the hilt. This chain can extend up to twenty feet.

Medusa Whip- Using this art, he plunges the blade into the ground and forms a whip of flexible rock. Anything the whip touches forms a layer of rock over the surface of that object.

Inferno Wind Sword- Using this technique, he superheats the air a molecules width above his sword, then using his sword, flings the blast at his opponent.

100 Illusions of Hell- Using this technique, he rushes around his opponent at superfast speeds, and creates 99 illusions of his blade striking, and then makes one superfast strike with his blade at the same time. All of the fake blades look slightly misty.

Demon Whirlwind- Using this art, he whips a miniture tornado around his blade. He can also "throw" the tornado if he needs to. He uses his energy to keep the tornado from dissapearing.

Satanic Shockwave- Using this art, he slams his blade into the ground as hard as he can, and using his energy as a booster, sends out a shockwave with a fifteen-foot radius.

Three "Special" Techniques-

Gates of Hell- Using this art, he forms thirteen portals in a circle around his enemy (the portals are all interconnected). He then moves from one portal to another at near-sonic speeds, slashing at the enemy inside of the circle.

Beezlebub Windmill- He forms a few hundred tiny pellets of hard energy, and then twirls his sword like a windmill to send the pellets towards something at sonic speeds.

100 Blades of Hell- Exactly like the 100 Illusions of Hell technique-except he pours extra energy into the fake blades, making them real (they dissapear as soon as the technique is finished).

Ultimate Technique-

Snake of Lucifer- He summons black fire, and forms it into a snake shape, then throws it his enemies. The black fire can incinerate almost anything.

Equipment: A simple sleeping mat. Partial map of the world.

History: Ever since he was able to walk, he was trained by his father in Lin-Tala-Ranc-Cryk-Shiki. He lived in a small hut up in the mountain with his father. The only time he saw anyone other than his father were the three times they went down into the village a few miles away. By the time he was twenty, he had mastered his art. A year after that, his father died from disease. He buried his father by the hut, took his sleeping mat, and his father's map, and set out into the world he had seen very little of. He quickly made a name for himself as a mercenary. He only works for those who hire him to fight against something he sees as evil, or unjust. He stores whatever money he earns in several caches all over the world.

Personality: He is generally a nice enough guy, and is slow to anger. He sees being a mercenary as only a way to make a living.

Quirks: He loves cats, and frequently chases of dogs who chase cats. He likes cold tempertures. He's not a very good reader.

There. Revise if needed.

EDIT: Dammit. Forgot the history.

_raising_down_ · 09-30-2006, 03:46 PM

So is it still possible for people to sign into this, or is the RP in motion and finished recruiting?

Mesden · 09-30-2006, 04:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by _raising_down_

So is it still possible for people to sign into this, or is the RP in motion and finished recruiting?

Pass a PM by Raiden. Lord knows when he'll get back to you, though.

_raising_down_ · 09-30-2006, 10:28 PM

Yeah, from looking at previous posts that's what I kind of figured. I'll send a PM his way and perhaps I'll frequent the RP with you all after a while.

PyrosNine · 10-08-2006, 05:40 PM

Umm... Firstly the Raiden the GM-san has left the proverbial building, as seen HURR

Secondly, this thread is over the post limit, and it'd been better for you to post it in the current Discussion thread herre.

Also, you could've simply placed the character sheet within your previous post, instead of double posting (which is a no-no!)

Karenaide · 11-01-2006, 02:42 PM

Name: Bludd Streaks
Age: ???
Sex: Male
Race: Elf/Drow
Appearance: A shadowy,mysterious person with tanned skin and long, black-blonde swirled
hair.
Skills: Mime powers and a videographic memory, along with amazingly enhanced senses and energy enough to fuel New York for three hundred years. Not very strong, physically.
Weapons: Dragon sword, long daggers, Greatsword, Bladed bow, Soul Arrows, and two brass knuckle-braces.
Equipment: Red jacket, red pants, red robin hood hat, red cape, beige robe.
Quirks: A dark, almost sorrowful attitude that hints at a tormented past, he carries a particular dislike for Demons, but has not a whisp of hatred in him.

Inbred Chocobo · 11-01-2006, 02:45 PM

This has long since been dead man. Shoot the GM is even on Hiatus.

09-16-2006, 08:28 AM	#101
Arhra Ara ara! Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Neo Venezia Posts: 5,013	Forgive me if this comes across as too blunt, but I'd just like to say this and I'm sure I'm not the only one who thinks this. Raiden, those last two post endings don't leave much room for doing anything. Bowing is something that, with a little creativity, you can add to, but this last one is basically: King: "Welcome, my subjects. I'm sure you're all wondering why I have called you here today." Us: "Yes. We are wondering why you have called us here today." __________________ This post is a good source of Ara ara, ufufu.* *These statements have not been evaluated by the Food and Drug Administration. This post is not intended to diagnose, treat, cure or prevent any disease.

09-16-2006, 09:04 AM	#102
Astral Harmony Don't Hate Me 'Cause I'm Moe Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Harmonial Sanctum Posts: 6,798	I concur. We just can't do anything with that post. If it's being used to anger some of us, it's working... Aishel: (talking through her teeth at Pinchette) "Does this idiot think he's building suspense or something?" Pinchette: (whispering) "Just grin and bear it like the oversized sword-wielding moron that you are." Last edited by Astral Harmony; 09-16-2006 at 09:08 AM.

09-16-2006, 02:45 PM	#104
Mr.Bookworm YYYEEEEEAAAAAAHHH Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,034	Name: Jan Rakshi (That's rock-shy) Age: 27 Sex: Male Race: Human Appearance: He has black hair, and green eyes. He wears a simple robe with a calligraphed snake on it, and sandals. He has on a white vest and pants unde the robe. He has a tattoo on his right shoulder. The tattoo has an arch with a snake sliding up one side, and a dot in the middle. Weapon: Rakshi Blade- This blade has been handed down through the Rakshi family for generations. It's a three-foot long katana. The blade is pure black, except for the mark of Lin-Tala-Ranc-Shiki on the very bottom of the blade in red. It also has a small spell on it that ensures it never dulls. Skills: He is a master of Lin-Tala-Ranc-Cryk-Shiki (The Red-Stained Path to Hell), an ancient sword art. The art focuses on using the body's energy in concert with the blade. There are six normal attacks in the art, three "Special" attacks, and one ultimate attack. Hades Chain Blade- Using this technique, he seperates part of the blade from the sword, and makes a chain of energy connecting the blade to the hilt. This chain can extend up to twenty feet. Medusa Whip- Using this art, he plunges the blade into the ground and forms a whip of flexible rock. Anything the whip touches forms a layer of rock over the surface of that object. Inferno Wind Sword- Using this technique, he superheats the air a molecules width above his sword, then using his sword, flings the blast at his opponent. 100 Illusions of Hell- Using this technique, he rushes around his opponent at superfast speeds, and creates 99 illusions of his blade striking, and then makes one superfast strike with his blade at the same time. All of the fake blades look slightly misty. Demon Whirlwind- Using this art, he whips a miniture tornado around his blade. He can also "throw" the tornado if he needs to. He uses his energy to keep the tornado from dissapearing. Satanic Shockwave- Using this art, he slams his blade into the ground as hard as he can, and using his energy as a booster, sends out a shockwave with a fifteen-foot radius. Three "Special" Techniques- Gates of Hell- Using this art, he forms thirteen portals in a circle around his enemy (the portals are all interconnected). He then moves from one portal to another at near-sonic speeds, slashing at the enemy inside of the circle. Beezlebub Windmill- He forms a few hundred tiny pellets of hard energy, and then twirls his sword like a windmill to send the pellets towards something at sonic speeds. 100 Blades of Hell- Exactly like the 100 Illusions of Hell technique-except he pours extra energy into the fake blades, making them real (they dissapear as soon as the technique is finished). Ultimate Technique- Snake of Lucifer- He summons black fire, and forms it into a snake shape, then throws it his enemies. The black fire can incinerate almost anything. Equipment: A simple sleeping mat. Partial map of the world. History: Ever since he was able to walk, he was trained by his father in Lin-Tala-Ranc-Cryk-Shiki. He lived in a small hut up in the mountain with his father. The only time he saw anyone other than his father were the three times they went down into the village a few miles away. By the time he was twenty, he had mastered his art. A year after that, his father died from disease. He buried his father by the hut, took his sleeping mat, and his father's map, and set out into the world he had seen very little of. He quickly made a name for himself as a mercenary. He only works for those who hire him to fight against something he sees as evil, or unjust. He stores whatever money he earns in several caches all over the world. Personality: He is generally a nice enough guy, and is slow to anger. He sees being a mercenary as only a way to make a living. Quirks: He loves cats, and frequently chases of dogs who chase cats. He likes cold tempertures. He's not a very good reader. There. Revise if needed. EDIT: Dammit. Forgot the history. Last edited by Mr.Bookworm; 09-19-2006 at 10:21 AM.

10-08-2006, 05:40 PM	#108
PyrosNine Zettai Hero Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: A figment of my own imagination Posts: 6,103	Umm... Firstly the Raiden the GM-san has left the proverbial building, as seen HURR Secondly, this thread is over the post limit, and it'd been better for you to post it in the current Discussion thread herre. Also, you could've simply placed the character sheet within your previous post, instead of double posting (which is a no-no!) __________________ Pyrosnine.blogspot.com: An experimental blog of writing. Updated possibly daily. Possibly. A fair chance. Current Works for reading: War Between them, Karma Police. PyrosNine: Weirdo Magnet Extraordinaire!

11-01-2006, 02:42 PM	#109
Karenaide Fallen Reality Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Second Earth Posts: 210	Name: Bludd Streaks Age: ??? Sex: Male Race: Elf/Drow Appearance: A shadowy,mysterious person with tanned skin and long, black-blonde swirled hair. Skills: Mime powers and a videographic memory, along with amazingly enhanced senses and energy enough to fuel New York for three hundred years. Not very strong, physically. Weapons: Dragon sword, long daggers, Greatsword, Bladed bow, Soul Arrows, and two brass knuckle-braces. Equipment: Red jacket, red pants, red robin hood hat, red cape, beige robe. Quirks: A dark, almost sorrowful attitude that hints at a tormented past, he carries a particular dislike for Demons, but has not a whisp of hatred in him. __________________ Renegades are the people with their own philosophy. They change the course of history; everyday people like you and me. ~Renegades of Funk, Rage Against the Machine *** Welcome to my Life. Last edited by Karenaide; 11-19-2006 at 07:50 AM.

09-30-2006, 03:46 PM	#105
_raising_down_ Reap the whirlwind... Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Edinboro, PA Posts: 7	So is it still possible for people to sign into this, or is the RP in motion and finished recruiting?

09-30-2006, 10:28 PM	#107
_raising_down_ Reap the whirlwind... Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Edinboro, PA Posts: 7	Yeah, from looking at previous posts that's what I kind of figured. I'll send a PM his way and perhaps I'll frequent the RP with you all after a while.