The Dreadful -- Chapter 4 - Page 16

MSperoni · 02-10-2012, 04:33 PM

Page 99!

Dead Space reference!

Kim · 02-10-2012, 04:40 PM

Dr. Clark isn't even a real doctor.

Ryanderman · 02-10-2012, 05:10 PM

I just want to chime in to say that when this comic started, I was uncertain about it. It was nifty, but rambled a bit, in my opinion.

It's gotten good now. Quite good.

MSperoni · 02-10-2012, 05:18 PM

Good

I've been getting some advice from Brian and working hard to make it better. I think the comic is more focused now, and that helps. (probably why you say before it was "rambling").

There were a lot of good elements in the earlier stages of the comic, things I would keep. But if I had to redo it I would cut out a bit of it and tighten things up a lot.

Alanim · 02-11-2012, 05:54 PM

mmmm, gory scenes, I'd assume they're pretty tough to draw at first but I can only assume they become alot funner the more you draw them.

MSperoni · 02-14-2012, 01:29 PM

Page 100!

100 pages! Weee!

I guess being Genre Savvy only works if the Genre cooperates...

Arhra · 02-15-2012, 03:21 AM

So zombies can be killed by throatpunching?

Works for me!

BigDemonicBunny · 02-15-2012, 10:05 AM

Looks like fantasy monster hunters and alien hunters have something in common.

Colonial Marines guide to killing aliens:
"When up against an unknown alien species, you can not rely on any single shot or strike to neutralize your target. When in doubt, aim for anything that's pulsing, throbbing, fluttering or generally appearing like soft or distended tissue.
We have yet to encounter a multicellular alien lacking a circulatory system"

MSperoni · 02-15-2012, 07:34 PM

We'll see if Colonel Marine's Monster Killing Logic applies to Dreadful creatures.

epcharles · 02-17-2012, 12:46 AM

Minor note: I like the detail of the zipper-up back. Must be awkward to put on, but it works, and explains why the jacket can sit normally in the front.

02-10-2012, 04:33 PM	#151
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02-10-2012, 04:40 PM	#152
Kim adorable Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 12,950	Dr. Clark isn't even a real doctor. __________________ this post is about how to successfully H the Kimmy

02-10-2012, 05:10 PM	#153
Ryanderman Beard of Leadership Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 827	I just want to chime in to say that when this comic started, I was uncertain about it. It was nifty, but rambled a bit, in my opinion. It's gotten good now. Quite good. __________________ ~Your robot reminds me of you. You tell it to stop, it turns. You tell it to turn, it stops. You tell it to take out the trash, it watches reruns of Firefly.~

02-10-2012, 05:18 PM	#154
MSperoni Artist and Writer of Comics Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,666	Good I've been getting some advice from Brian and working hard to make it better. I think the comic is more focused now, and that helps. (probably why you say before it was "rambling"). There were a lot of good elements in the earlier stages of the comic, things I would keep. But if I had to redo it I would cut out a bit of it and tighten things up a lot. __________________ I do commissions! So Email me if you'd like anything and we'll work out the details! matts_1104@yahoo.com Follow me on Twitter for Dreadful news and random info! (though mostly it's just me babbling about nerd-stuff) http://twitter.com/#!/mSperoni Check out my Deviant Art page if you'd like to see other pictures I've made! http://exmile.deviantart.com/ Follow The Dreadful on Facebook!

02-14-2012, 01:29 PM	#156
MSperoni Artist and Writer of Comics Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,666	Page 100! 100 pages! Weee! I guess being Genre Savvy only works if the Genre cooperates... __________________ I do commissions! So Email me if you'd like anything and we'll work out the details! matts_1104@yahoo.com Follow me on Twitter for Dreadful news and random info! (though mostly it's just me babbling about nerd-stuff) http://twitter.com/#!/mSperoni Check out my Deviant Art page if you'd like to see other pictures I've made! http://exmile.deviantart.com/ Follow The Dreadful on Facebook!

02-11-2012, 05:54 PM	#155
Alanim Mouth Guy Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 34	mmmm, gory scenes, I'd assume they're pretty tough to draw at first but I can only assume they become alot funner the more you draw them.

02-15-2012, 03:21 AM	#157
Arhra Ara ara! Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Neo Venezia Posts: 5,013	So zombies can be killed by throatpunching? Works for me! __________________ This post is a good source of Ara ara, ufufu.* *These statements have not been evaluated by the Food and Drug Administration. This post is not intended to diagnose, treat, cure or prevent any disease.

02-15-2012, 10:05 AM	#158
BigDemonicBunny 75 kilos of Killer Rabbit Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 195	Looks like fantasy monster hunters and alien hunters have something in common. Colonial Marines guide to killing aliens: "When up against an unknown alien species, you can not rely on any single shot or strike to neutralize your target. When in doubt, aim for anything that's pulsing, throbbing, fluttering or generally appearing like soft or distended tissue. We have yet to encounter a multicellular alien lacking a circulatory system"

02-15-2012, 07:34 PM	#159
MSperoni Artist and Writer of Comics Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,666	We'll see if Colonel Marine's Monster Killing Logic applies to Dreadful creatures. __________________ I do commissions! So Email me if you'd like anything and we'll work out the details! matts_1104@yahoo.com Follow me on Twitter for Dreadful news and random info! (though mostly it's just me babbling about nerd-stuff) http://twitter.com/#!/mSperoni Check out my Deviant Art page if you'd like to see other pictures I've made! http://exmile.deviantart.com/ Follow The Dreadful on Facebook!

02-17-2012, 12:46 AM	#160
epcharles Eric Charles Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: Bethesda, MD Posts: 98	Minor note: I like the detail of the zipper-up back. Must be awkward to put on, but it works, and explains why the jacket can sit normally in the front. __________________ . . The smartest person you know (who lives in my house).