The NP member comic discussion thread! - Page 163

CHICAGO�lollie · 01-19-2005, 06:36 AM

A good first attempt, Dynamite. Although I was a little confused with reading it. The bubble of the character who is speaking first really should be on the left side of a panel, otherwise it's like... it's like...

Well, it's like reading the lines of a book from right to left: It doesn't make nearly as much sense.

Thaumaturge · 01-19-2005, 06:36 AM

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Originally Posted by Newb

meanwhile, in limbo,
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"aha! a table! now I have a surface to write the next part of my story on!"
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good work on all counts!

*laughing* Nicely done!

And now to the comics...

SAAM: Heh, excellent, as always!

I suppose that Qeeko finds a red-olence of red-letter events in always being red-dy to make things red!

(Alright, I admit, I pushed the logic a bit, but it was worth it!

)

Dynamite220: Heh, very good indeed! Qeeko vs. Dynamite... this could be fun to watch!

Raiden · 01-19-2005, 09:13 AM

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Originally Posted by CHICAGO¤lollie

A good first attempt, Dynamite. Although I was a little confused with reading it. The bubble of the character who is speaking first really should be on the left side of a panel, otherwise it's like... it's like...

Well, it's like reading the lines of a book from right to left: It doesn't make nearly as much sense.

Unless you were japanese. Then it'd make perfect sense.

That's how they read their books. I don't know if he's japanese or not, but...yeah.

Dynamite220 · 01-19-2005, 09:54 AM

Sorry for the confusion. I fixed the problem in my second comic, and I made it longer. Thanks for the support.

Also, I wasn't able to get the new URL to work in the old post, so I double posted the second comic. I'll avoid such problems in the future.

CHICAGO�lollie · 01-19-2005, 05:58 PM

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Originally Posted by Raiden

Unless you were japanese. Then it'd make perfect sense.

That's how they read their books.

Yeah, I've read a manga before. Heh, got me at first. Then I read the not-really-that-small-after-all print that said to read it from right to left. Eh heh.

Dynamite: Ah, better with the reading now.
#2 - Heheh, nice. I mean, y`know, the kicking, not nice, but comic. Yeah. Nice.
#3 - "I've hot--I mean, got two words for you. Magitec Armor."
Heheheh, nice wording. Good work.

Bailey · 01-19-2005, 08:50 PM

"Awww, there there, I remember you..."
looks at window open on laptop
"ThunderDragoon."

QueenQeeko · 01-20-2005, 04:57 AM

Nice comics, Dynamite, very nice.

Dynamite220 · 01-20-2005, 09:42 AM

Thanks. I'm working today, so I can't make as many but I promise at least one.

Astral Harmony · 01-20-2005, 08:11 PM

This sounds like an adventure to wear my chastity belt on. Good stuff, Dynamite!

Since I have so many other things I'd really like to do (anime, real movies, my Emblem Crusade story, keeping up with RPGs, hentai dating simulations, cleaning up my room, and planning my new series of sprites for AB), I've dumbed down my comic schedule to making updates to my current stories only two times a week. Monday and Thursday. This insures that I have at least three days to complete the updates if I can't muster the time, or the funny for that story. BRBD and CTS! will be done tomorrow definitely. (sighs sorrowfully) The final chapter of AB's date with CelesJessa. Hopefully I'll come up with an idea so I can use her again. I also intend to make a fourth comic after sending out some PMs. Thanks for your patience.

The Kneumatic Pnight · 01-20-2005, 10:02 PM

Yay Dynamite... love your comics! I was getting dissapointed that it might not show today... but you pulled through. Great job.

01-19-2005, 06:36 AM	#1621
CHICAGO�lollie From Another World~ Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Queensland Australia Posts: 1,287	A good first attempt, Dynamite. Although I was a little confused with reading it. The bubble of the character who is speaking first really should be on the left side of a panel, otherwise it's like... it's like... Well, it's like reading the lines of a book from right to left: It doesn't make nearly as much sense. __________________ http://birdsock.blogspot.com/

01-19-2005, 09:54 AM	#1624
Dynamite220 Covert op? Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Unionville, in the state of Union, in the Unionized States of America Posts: 676	Sorry for the confusion. I fixed the problem in my second comic, and I made it longer. Thanks for the support. Also, I wasn't able to get the new URL to work in the old post, so I double posted the second comic. I'll avoid such problems in the future. __________________ I've been left all alone in the gas station of love, and I have to use the self-service pumps! -Weird Al Yankovich

01-20-2005, 04:57 AM	#1627
QueenQeeko Sent to the cornfield Join Date: May 2004 Posts: 1,099	Although it needs more red. Nice comics, Dynamite, very nice. Last edited by QueenQeeko; 01-20-2005 at 05:11 AM.

01-20-2005, 09:42 AM	#1628
Dynamite220 Covert op? Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Unionville, in the state of Union, in the Unionized States of America Posts: 676	Thanks. I'm working today, so I can't make as many but I promise at least one. __________________ I've been left all alone in the gas station of love, and I have to use the self-service pumps! -Weird Al Yankovich

01-20-2005, 10:02 PM	#1630
The Kneumatic Pnight Everfree Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: The Mythical Frontier Posts: 906	Yay Dynamite... love your comics! I was getting dissapointed that it might not show today... but you pulled through. Great job. __________________ FAILURE IS LEARNING TO ACCEPT THOSE THINGS I CANNOT CHANGE

01-20-2005, 08:11 PM	#1629
Astral Harmony Don't Hate Me 'Cause I'm Moe Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Harmonial Sanctum Posts: 6,798	This sounds like an adventure to wear my chastity belt on. Good stuff, Dynamite! Since I have so many other things I'd really like to do (anime, real movies, my Emblem Crusade story, keeping up with RPGs, hentai dating simulations, cleaning up my room, and planning my new series of sprites for AB), I've dumbed down my comic schedule to making updates to my current stories only two times a week. Monday and Thursday. This insures that I have at least three days to complete the updates if I can't muster the time, or the funny for that story. BRBD and CTS! will be done tomorrow definitely. (sighs sorrowfully) The final chapter of AB's date with CelesJessa. Hopefully I'll come up with an idea so I can use her again. I also intend to make a fourth comic after sending out some PMs. Thanks for your patience.