PhoenixFlame Presents: Eclipse Phase

[PhoenixFlame]

Originally Posted by krogothwolf

I'm going to be making changes from Beam to Kenetic cause beam seems useless the more I read on it.

Seems.

[Aerozord]

Originally Posted by Krylo

I'm going through Char Sheets and doing maths and making sure they are right, 'cause I figured if I made a mistake anyone can.

Just finished Aero's:

Notable issues--

No skill can be raised to over 80 at creation unless you buy the Expert Trait (which must be bought for each skill you get at over 80). Except for with Morph bonuses. This means that you can't have over 80 interfacing just because infolife gives you +30.

You didn't assign any of your morph bonuses to your stats. It filled them into the sheet for you, but you still need to figure out another +5 to throw into the morph bonus column somewhere.

You need to spend at LEAST 300 CP on knowledge sills. You spent only 170. You also have no native language (which you get 70 points of for free).

You also spent 259 more CP than you have.

And you need a muse. As OC said, they are free.

I also made notes on the sheet, in case I forgot to mention anything.

I'll go through everyone else's as well.

Edit: Once I go through them I'll compile them into a single post for you as well.

ok, looking over your evaluations there are a few things, most probably being my fault but a few I think were missunderstandings. Like, I did add in my +5, it went into COG, which I am expecting is why you had me down for 50CP there. I completely screwed up with aptitudes. so just, yea no CP spent there.

Traits and gear, I thought we were supposed to buy that with money not CP. Also, while it hurts me, you misscalculated, I spent 105 on moxie.

only other thing I gotta ask before I make corrections is, did you factor in the computer skills were half? Thats why I invested so high in programming, research, and infosec

edit, oh and the double cost when over 60, so you start with aptitude modifier?

[Krylo]

@Krogo: It is. And APPARENTLY I saved the wrong Notepad, 'cause I don't have your exact calculations anymore. Blah.

Edit @ Aero:

Originally Posted by Aerozord

ok, looking over your evaluations there are a few things, most probably being my fault but a few I think were missunderstandings. Like, I did add in my +5, it went into COG, which I am expecting is why you had me down for 50CP there. I completely screwed up with aptitudes. so just, yea no CP spent there.

Alrighty.

Traits and gear, I thought we were supposed to buy that with money not CP. Also, while it hurts me, you misscalculated, I spent 105 on moxie.

You get your first point free. So 7 - 1 = 6 moxie that were actually bought. 6 x 15 = 90.

only other thing I gotta ask before I make corrections is, did you factor in the computer skills were half? Thats why I invested so high in programming, research, and infosec

I did. I also factored in that your networking skills are considered social, though (as per skill list), and thus cost double.

However, your skill costs are going to be different if that's a morph bonus and not an ego stat. Increased by 5 for all cog skills.

[Overcast]

Okay now I think I got everything straightened out. You were right Krylo there was a significant credit error in there somewhere. I guess one of the highs got an extra zero or something. Here it is. Note the quantity invested in Credits is 95000.

Also while I am here I have Neurachem 1. Though like kick I believe that it is something I have to apply as a quick action or reflexively, not something constantly pumping.

[Krylo]

Rapter:

Eelware stacks on top of your cyber claws, so you'd have the shock effect while using them as well. Also, your DB is 1, so your eelware, sans cyberclaws only do 1d10+1. Your poison gland ALSO works with all your unarmed attacks, so...

Both should also work with your beak.

You also forgot to include the paralyzing effects of BTX in your weapons notes, or just didn't care to. Either way I stuck it in there.

You also forgot to add the morph bonus from aptitudes to your skills.

Other than that the only problem was that you spent more CP than you had (1185, so 185 too much). Most of which is in your skills.

Here's your sheet.

[Dracorion]

Okay, that should do it. Fo' realz this time (I hope).

[Krylo]

OC: I THINK you started from aptitude + morph bonus, instead of just aptitude when doing skills?

I'm not sure because it wasn't all the skills with morph bonuses, but a few were off by 5 or so for some reason, assuming those were your CP costs that you put to the right by each skill.

Also, on Spec. Vision, is that another specialty or are you referring to your enhanced vision augmentation? I assumed specialty.

Anyway, you ended up 70 CP over. I'd suggest dropping gambling/graffiti to 60 which would bring you down to 10 over, and then just drop 10000 off your starting credits to make it break even.

On the bright side we both got the same calculation for the creds this time.

[Overcast]

Could you tell me specifically what I was off in with my skills? I think I can make the corrections perfect if we can figure out the error there.

In the meantime you added an extra thirty due to my moxie. I am Re-initiated so I start with an additional 2.

Yeah comparing the sheets my issue seems to lie entirely in small errors of what I was putting in.

[Geminex]

Ok, I'm almost done with my character. One more quick question, does aiming (complex aiming) count as a mental action?

[Overcast]

Alright, reduced everything with a five down to a zero even. I pulled my unarmed down to 50 and took 1000 credits away. Should be valid now.

And Intimidate drops another 10 to make up for the overcharge.