Something the Epilogue showed me...

[Amake]

I just realized your WM has a lot in common with Krillin from Dragonball. He also has that formation of six freckles, except they're forehead tattoos and stood on end. And they don't have noses.

It really threw me for about four seconds when I first saw the comic, but then I forgot all about it.

[MSperoni]

Krillan IS my favorite character in Dragonball...


But I wasn't really thinking of him for White Mage, I just thought she would be cute with freckles, they made her look more down to earth to me.

Also the reason I liked the lower right one is because it made her look more slick and kinda cut n' dry, like she has risen to the top of the White Mage Whatever Church and so she's all business-like and stuff. Though the shaggy do' is pretty cute too, so I'm okay with what Brian picked.

I'm not really all that into anime or jRPGs, and I'm kind of an old man like Brian, so I guess I'm still old-fashioned when it comes to what is "girl hair" and what is "boy hair" so the top left one just seems like girl hair to me, I would think if I saw it on a guy I would think "that's kinda girly"

Don't worry Neni, just keep practicing. What's important is that you have fun doing it. That seems cliche but that's true

[ThatPoorMessenger]

Also the reason I liked the lower right one is because it made her look more slick and kinda cut n' dry, like she has risen to the top of the White Mage Whatever Church and so she's all business-like and stuff. Though the shaggy do' is pretty cute too, so I'm okay with what Brian picked.

Good point.
Edit: Although I didn't think she was a leader by the epilogue, or before it. : /

[Krylo]

Originally Posted by ThatPoorMessenger

Although the top left is something I associate with male FF characters so...ehh, couldn't have imagined that one.
Although I cannot get my mind off those freckles...

Are you sure you don't mean top right? The pony tail, with the hair dick thing?

'Cause that's pretty masculine.

[Neni]

Originally Posted by MSperoni

Don't worry Neni, just keep practicing. What's important is that you have fun doing it. That seems cliche but that's true

Thank you. ^^ I know that you're right... I did get a lot better in the past years (looking at my dA Gallery, I now crinche at my first pics...) But I still totally fail at perspectives, most poses and, to some extend, proportions.

But, I guess, as long as I have fun I should just keep going. ^^;

That's a sketch, I recently made:

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/2559/emiuq.jpg

(And, yes, the character is supposed to look like a Fangirl who got her Mary Sue dreams granted, just in case you're wondering what I was on when I designed this. XD)


Uhm... yeah... any critique, so I know what to do better and how? Because I really, really want to get better. ^^;

[MSperoni]

Originally Posted by Krylo

Are you sure you don't mean top right? The pony tail, with the hair dick thing?

'Cause that's pretty masculine.

I'd agree with that one.


ED: I see below that's the one ya meant

[ThatPoorMessenger]

Originally Posted by Krylo

Are you sure you don't mean top right? The pony tail, with the hair dick thing?

'Cause that's pretty masculine.

I do.

[Krylo]

Originally Posted by MSperoni

I'd agree with that one.

It even has its own dick.


Though my hair, until recently, somewhat resembled a longer version of the top left (when I bothered combing).

...So.

[MSperoni]

Way to wear your hair like a girl, girl hair wearer!

[Krylo]

Don't hate me because I'm beautiful.