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xravi · 03-21-2007, 01:51 PM

It looks like the girl is doing something to the other girl.

CelesJessa · 03-21-2007, 01:53 PM

How so? =\ I can't see it. A guy in my class said it looked like they were kissing and I am totally missing that.

(Just shows to me how unintelligeble to others eyes my sketches are.)

Melfice · 03-21-2007, 02:23 PM

Well, to me it looks like the "real" girl is grabbing game girl's butt.

CelesJessa · 03-21-2007, 02:44 PM

Ah, I shall blame it on my non-drawing-hands, but her hand in question is pointed the wrong way to be grabbing any butt. I still don't see it, but I'll take your word for it. I hope it will stop looking like that once I refine it and color it.

Squishy Cheeks · 03-21-2007, 02:50 PM

looks more like a back handed ass slap to me than a grab.

Melfice · 03-21-2007, 03:58 PM

Well... that too.
Wasn't really focusing on the hands, more on the expression of the game-girl.

Which says "What the FUCK you think you're doing!?"

minnerthecat · 03-21-2007, 04:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CelesJessa

How so? =\ I can't see it. A guy in my class said it looked like they were kissing and I am totally missing that.

(Just shows to me how unintelligeble to others eyes my sketches are.)

To tell the truth, I actually don't see anything "going on" either.

Fire-song · 03-21-2007, 04:07 PM

I really like this idea. The real world girl's hair is cute. Good job.

I don't see the grabby hand. Sure the hand looks a little weird, but not like she's grabbing or touching the other girls butt. It's her reflection so it's supposed to overlap some.

DefianceLegion · 03-21-2007, 06:51 PM

Yeah maybe when the black sketchy pencil around the hand is nice n clean it will look a bit better. At a glance it looks like its a slap, but not when you stare at it a bit. Yes, hands continue to persist as the most difficult damn thing for me to draw... The one that is closer to the window is more of a claw than a hand.... though I s'pose you already knew that. Other than that I can't really say much, being it a sketch. Nice job on the background, is that a dragon of some sort?

CelesJessa · 03-21-2007, 07:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DefianceLegion

The one that is closer to the window is more of a claw than a hand.... though I s'pose you already knew that.

yeah, I know. The hand wasn't coming right, so I just did a basic sketch of where the hand would be. It won't be a claw when I finish it. (hopefully ^^ )

Quote:

Other than that I can't really say much, being it a sketch. Nice job on the background, is that a dragon of some sort?

yeah, a sketch of one, mostly everything in the back is just a sketch to give me a general idea of what I was thinking when I was drawing.

Despite all of the ass-grabs and slap comments thanks for all of the critique everyone =P heheh

03-21-2007, 01:53 PM	#2972
CelesJessa DA-DA-DA-DAA DAA DAA DA DA-DAAAAAA! Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Zanzibar Land Posts: 6,531	How so? =\ I can't see it. A guy in my class said it looked like they were kissing and I am totally missing that. (Just shows to me how unintelligeble to others eyes my sketches are.) __________________

03-21-2007, 02:44 PM	#2974
CelesJessa DA-DA-DA-DAA DAA DAA DA DA-DAAAAAA! Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Zanzibar Land Posts: 6,531	Ah, I shall blame it on my non-drawing-hands, but her hand in question is pointed the wrong way to be grabbing any butt. I still don't see it, but I'll take your word for it. I hope it will stop looking like that once I refine it and color it. __________________

03-21-2007, 06:51 PM	#2979
DefianceLegion Hai! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: In your brain.... or whatever is in here... Posts: 20	Yeah maybe when the black sketchy pencil around the hand is nice n clean it will look a bit better. At a glance it looks like its a slap, but not when you stare at it a bit. Yes, hands continue to persist as the most difficult damn thing for me to draw... The one that is closer to the window is more of a claw than a hand.... though I s'pose you already knew that. Other than that I can't really say much, being it a sketch. Nice job on the background, is that a dragon of some sort? __________________ I can't help but feel someone's reading this, but yet at the same time I feel that I just don't care...

03-21-2007, 01:51 PM	#2971
xravi Sent to the cornfield Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: California Posts: 568	It looks like the girl is doing something to the other girl.

03-21-2007, 04:07 PM	#2978
Fire-song =D Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Planet Earth Posts: 3	I really like this idea. The real world girl's hair is cute. Good job. I don't see the grabby hand. Sure the hand looks a little weird, but not like she's grabbing or touching the other girls butt. It's her reflection so it's supposed to overlap some.