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Unread 10-13-2007, 11:37 AM   #21
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Here's mine. It's U.

Ignore the top name, I changed my mind on his name. It's the one on the sheet, not the one I gave it on top.

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Unread 10-13-2007, 09:21 PM   #22
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Already told you.

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594 years ago, your ancestors crash landed on the water-planet of Sulis, named for the Celtic god of spring water. Whatever caused the crash is unknown, though many have tried to figure it out. Sulis is about 99% water, 2% of that frozen at the polar ice caps. The 1% of land is made up of scattered islands all over the world. Part of the colony ship Epona stayed in space, and eventually fell into a stable orbit around the planet. About 70% of the ship broke away and plunged into the sea. Eventually, the colonists, around 17,000 of the original 20,000 in cold sleep woke up. The first few years were complete anarchy, as several factions battled for control of the precious resources of the ship. Eventually, one of the many factions gained control of the ship, and founded the City in, on, and around the floating wreck of the colony ship. Around 9,000 stayed in the City, while the other 8,000 spread out over the world, exploring, and establishing new communites.

Now, 594, years later, you have gotten royally screwed. You commited a Class-C, or Class-B crime in the City. And that means you can either go up before the chopping block (no need to waste bullets on you), or you can join the Scouts for a year or two, and become part of the military, OR you can spend the rest of your life, or near it, in a labor gang.

You idiot.

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I want an explanation of what exactly you did. For refrence, here's the crime categories of the city, with equivalents to modern day crime, and penalties in the City:

Class-F: Jaywalking- Fine
Class-E: Speeding- Short term in labor gang
Class-D: Petty-theft- Time in labor gang
Class-C: Minor arson, Minor assault- Scouts, execution, long term in labor gang
Class-B: Arson, Assault- Scouts, execution, life in labor gang
Class-A: Manslaughter, Aggravated battery- Execution, near-life in labor gang
Class-S: Murder- Execution
Class-O: Mass murder- Immediate execution, general kill-on-sight order.

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I'll have more detailed information up tommorow about the world.

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Unread 10-13-2007, 10:05 PM   #23
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Ok, hopefully this is all good. I double checked, but it is the first time I've done this so, ya know.

Also, and this may be a retarded question, but does taking a level in Martial Artist require you to take a few levels in Strong Hero and Fast Hero? The 'feats required' thing says you need both Combat and Defensive Martial Arts before you're capable of advancing, but you can only get Combat through the Strong path and Defensive through Fast, and yet the Martial Artist is listed under the 'Strong Path', hence my confusion.

And should we put the reason our character got arrested in this thread or is there another sign-up thread forthcoming?

EDIT: Hur hur internets, you know I'm nervous enough already, let's make everyone think I'm computer illiterate while we're at it...hopefully fixed.
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Unread 10-13-2007, 10:09 PM   #24
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Can't you get the feat not as a class skill, but as one of the skills you start out with? Only the bonus feats you get as that class need to be class feats. The others can be anything.

Also, you'll need to exit yaplet before linking. The yaplet messes with the url, so we only see the frontpage.
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Unread 10-13-2007, 10:16 PM   #25
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Ah, I finally noticed the "In addition to the two feats you're allowed to get at start" thing.

Link seems to be working now (cue impish laughing as the Web arches its fingers and cackles maniacally ALREADY DONE HAHAHAHA).
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Unread 10-13-2007, 10:21 PM   #26
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I think I still see a few problems with the sheet. If you could come on Yaplet, or something, I could point them out to you. Unless there's a problem, that seems easier than doing it here.
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Unread 10-16-2007, 09:03 PM   #27
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Here's some basic information about the City.

The thread-thread will be up tommorow.

Signups are closed, for now.

Sulis

Sulis is slightly smaller Earth, with .99% of normal Earth gravity. So slight that it'd be hard to notice it. Sulis has two moons: Belenus and Belisama. The world contains about two million people, living in anything from what we would consider barbarism to highly-advanced cultures. There are no native sentinent species on Sulis, but there are three species of note. Otherwise, assume that there are equivalents to the squirrel and such.

Sidhe: These creatures are beautiful humanoids. They stand about 7 feet tall, and are thin, with blue skin, and long, flowing hair. They also have small claws and gills. Unfortunatly, they're vicious monsters, comparable to wolves of Earth. The erupt out of the water, ripping men to shreds, before dissapearing into the water.

Birogs: Gryffin-like creatures.

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Places Of Interest

The City

The Savants

Finnbhennach

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Orginizations Of Note

Technology

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All of this stuff will be updated tommorow, and will probably be complete on Wednesday.

The game will start on Thursday at the latest. So get yer' stuff together people.

PM/post with any questions, complaints, etc.

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Unread 10-17-2007, 08:21 PM   #28
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Since the Yaplet doesn't work too well for me and I haven't been able to get in touch otherwise, anybody else mind double checking my sheet correctness and listing what's still wrong?
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Unread 10-21-2007, 01:13 PM   #29
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Hello to all of you who joined.

I apoligize, sincerely, for taking so long. I've had two Science projects I've had to redo in the past two weeks, that are due on Monday. In fact, I really should be completing one of them as I type this.

Since my schedule will be clear tommorow, I will try my hardest to finish up everything tommorow, and release the RP.

In other news, Azisien will be playing the villian(s).
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Unread 10-21-2007, 02:22 PM   #30
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Yo. Just checking in again.

Had some free time so I looked over the character sheets.

Lumenskir

-Defense is missing your Class Defense Bonus, which is +2, that gives you 14 Defense (10 BASE + 2 CDB + 2 DEX)
-You're entitled to another Strong Hero Talent at 3rd level, I only see Melee Smash. Did you mean Melee Smash II? Also, there's a box for Talents lower on the sheet, to separate them from Feats.

IC

-HP should be 35? (13 (max) + 11 + 11 (d10 taken as 8, +3))

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-Never heard of the Rifleman before? Not a standard Advanced Class as far as I know.
-Defense lacks CDB. Not sure what it would be with the Rifleman in there, but at least another +1 or +2.
-How do you have 10 ranks in Spot? Maximum is 6 at 3rd level, and you don't have any miscellaneous modifiers for it as far as I see...
-Not sure about HP, since I've never heard of Rifleman...

Loki

-HP 13, not 11?
-Charismatic hero...Nice.
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