5 minute poetry - Page 4

semysane · 04-25-2004, 05:08 PM

Man. This thread has made for some kickass poetry.

Haiku is not hard
You only need syllables
To fit the pattern

MP37a · 04-25-2004, 05:15 PM

Is this real or is this fake?
If I am dreaming why can�t I wake.
Too long I�ve slept and been ignored.
Now is my time to be restored.
I have but one wish that do I implore
And it�s to bring back what should have been
Before I meet my untimely end.
The pain of life burns through my skin
I�m coming undone from within.

I�ve served my time; I�ve paid my dues.
Haven�t I suffered enough under this ruse?
I know my sins and I know them well.
Inside my dark soul is where they dwell.
Was I wrong or am I right?
The answer is only in your sight.
Mortal souls full of hate and sin bring gloom.
Please say there�s more for me or am I already doomed.

I walk through a world complicated with simplicity.
Can�t they realize that what they do is biased to the rest of society?
They follow along not knowing where they are going.
It�s so easy to become different but next to impossible to be the difference.
We no longer think what our life means to us.
Stuck in this cycle I must endure,
I feel dazed and try not to become part of that life which I can stand no more.
But now I see my only choice is to embrace
This new life and live it to its fullest grace.

Demon with a Glass Hand · 04-25-2004, 08:09 PM

Cheer up, Sourpuss!

Sitting
Just sitting
I'm in one of my moods
again
And here I am
Sitting
Just sitting
Do nothing
Feeling nothing
Just ...
being ... in one of my moods
again
So I'm sitting
Just sitting
And here you are
You're here next to me
While I'm sitting
Just sitting
Doing nothing
Feeling nothing
Just being
in one of my moods

And be damned if you won't stop poking me!

Lycanthrope · 04-25-2004, 08:28 PM

Poke poke poke
pokity poke poke poke
pokity poke poke poke
pokity poke.....

DarthZeth · 04-26-2004, 02:32 AM

*bites Lycanthrope's finger and wont let go*

sorry. i just had to

TheBlackMageOfTHeRez · 04-26-2004, 06:38 PM

Well hello all and RaiRai, i think all you guys work was great. I try to write poems but my word come out all wrong just because im a # person. Well i cant put one of my pomes up right now because my love for another was just washed away and cut up into little bits. :bmage: SAD

O well life is that way, just cuts you up and spits you back out. Sorry im just mad, angrey, and very sad. Your poetry RaiRai made me kind of sad in a good way. So I will come back with a poem tomarrow so just wait. Well till next time bye.

T_T :bmage: Very Sad

:bmage: + :wmage: why cant it be

rightwhatwasidoing? · 04-26-2004, 07:17 PM

RaiRai, I hate to ask this, but for english class i need to bring in a piece of poetry that I like and read it to the class. since your poetry is really excellent, can I use the second poem you placed up here? if you say no that's fine, just wanted to make sure it was okay for me to do.

MP37a · 04-26-2004, 08:49 PM

Hehe I found an old song I wrote a long long time ago when I was angry once lol my writing is so much happier now a lot of ppl did like this one though especially when i sang it i was surprised because i don't like it at all lol

Poisoned

Who do you think you are?
You always had to be a star
And now if you are near or if you�re far
I can�t wear the time we had like a scar.

It hurts me to
Think of you
I can�t get you out of my brain
It�s driving me insane
I tried to hate you
Is it fate that I met you?
It only made me love you more
I don�t want to see you anymore, whore.

You�ve poisoned me with your lies
You�re killing me with your disguise
You made me want you
And I don�t want too
I just want to be free without you
But you poisoned my mind.

The thoughts of you are quick and bright
The pain becomes much worse at night
I thought it would be over
But you were a four-leaf clover
A rare find indeed
And for you I would bleed
The life from my heart
To give you a new start

You�ve poisoned me with your lies
You�re killing me with your disguise
You made me want you
And I don�t want too
I just want to be free without you
But you poisoned my mind.

It flows through my veins
I wear the terrible stains
That you gave me on that day
The words you said turned my world gray
I couldn�t stay with you any longer
It would only make me fonder
I didn�t even realize when I went without
You I saw what my feelings were really about

You�ve poisoned me with your lies
You�re killing me with your disguise
You made me want you
And I don�t want too
I just want to be free without you
But you poisoned my mind.

Ok I guess it was my fault
But you made the wound
I just poured the salt
You really were the joy of my life
Though I�m glad you�ll never be my wife
Most of this I was just kidding
Though I really am saying good ridding
I hope you�re happy and doing well
Shit what am I saying, I�ll see you in hell

So long, so long, you know you�re one of those few
And I miss you. Oh I�ll miss you.

Demon with a Glass Hand · 04-26-2004, 09:17 PM

Blocked

It's the words

not falling the

way they should
Spill

all

the

way

down the page. It's the words not flowing correctly and getting jumbled together without the proper breaks
It's the words
too close

too far

inproperly spaced

and seplt wrong
It's the words
(those damn words!)

gettign stuk in my head and not

f

a

l

l

i

n

g
where I want them to
It's the words getting
(worse than stuck)
Blocked!

Refusing to be any use to anyone
Especailyl me.

Those damn words.

videogamerz2000 · 04-27-2004, 09:55 AM

Thoughts,
words,
emotions,
Why don't they make sense?

Friends,
abandoning,
Family,
leaving,
Hobbies,
failing.

Left alone in a cold world,
the words and changing,
they are all that's there,
ideas are running out,
running,
like me.

All the words.....
a light shines,
grabbing,
hording,
yet taken away,
replaces with a flask of oil,
cold,
still cold.

Why?
What did I do?
Why was I puniished?
and the world,
fades to black.

04-25-2004, 05:15 PM	#32
MP37a Sacred Samurai Gunslinger Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Wellsville, Ohio Posts: 643	Is this real or is this fake? If I am dreaming why can�t I wake. Too long I�ve slept and been ignored. Now is my time to be restored. I have but one wish that do I implore And it�s to bring back what should have been Before I meet my untimely end. The pain of life burns through my skin I�m coming undone from within. I�ve served my time; I�ve paid my dues. Haven�t I suffered enough under this ruse? I know my sins and I know them well. Inside my dark soul is where they dwell. Was I wrong or am I right? The answer is only in your sight. Mortal souls full of hate and sin bring gloom. Please say there�s more for me or am I already doomed. I walk through a world complicated with simplicity. Can�t they realize that what they do is biased to the rest of society? They follow along not knowing where they are going. It�s so easy to become different but next to impossible to be the difference. We no longer think what our life means to us. Stuck in this cycle I must endure, I feel dazed and try not to become part of that life which I can stand no more. But now I see my only choice is to embrace This new life and live it to its fullest grace. __________________ "I'm going to wrap you in bacon, and throw you on the grill!!"

04-25-2004, 08:28 PM	#34
Lycanthrope Deus Lupus Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: The City of Angels Posts: 2,925	Poke poke poke pokity poke poke poke pokity poke poke poke pokity poke..... __________________ "With these seven easy steps, you, too, can be the authoritarian despot of your own principality. Machiavelli, your road to happiness" "I shoot Flying Monkies!" "Christmas had it coming its what it gets for taking over thanksgiving and threatening halloween with its weapons of mass consumerism" "Death to All Fanatics!" Official RP Action God Lycanthropic Poem "FOR YOU THE CAKE IS OVER. YOU HAVE REACHED THE END OF CAKE." -Death Krylo and BMG are apparently my bitches.

04-26-2004, 06:38 PM	#36
TheBlackMageOfTHeRez I will be King of Earth Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: ON THE REZ Posts: 24	Hey my love for another Well hello all and RaiRai, i think all you guys work was great. I try to write poems but my word come out all wrong just because im a # person. Well i cant put one of my pomes up right now because my love for another was just washed away and cut up into little bits. :bmage: SAD O well life is that way, just cuts you up and spits you back out. Sorry im just mad, angrey, and very sad. Your poetry RaiRai made me kind of sad in a good way. So I will come back with a poem tomarrow so just wait. Well till next time bye. T_T :bmage: Very Sad :bmage: + :wmage: why cant it be

04-26-2004, 08:49 PM	#38
MP37a Sacred Samurai Gunslinger Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Wellsville, Ohio Posts: 643	Hehe I found an old song I wrote a long long time ago when I was angry once lol my writing is so much happier now a lot of ppl did like this one though especially when i sang it i was surprised because i don't like it at all lol Poisoned Who do you think you are? You always had to be a star And now if you are near or if you�re far I can�t wear the time we had like a scar. It hurts me to Think of you I can�t get you out of my brain It�s driving me insane I tried to hate you Is it fate that I met you? It only made me love you more I don�t want to see you anymore, whore. You�ve poisoned me with your lies You�re killing me with your disguise You made me want you And I don�t want too I just want to be free without you But you poisoned my mind. The thoughts of you are quick and bright The pain becomes much worse at night I thought it would be over But you were a four-leaf clover A rare find indeed And for you I would bleed The life from my heart To give you a new start You�ve poisoned me with your lies You�re killing me with your disguise You made me want you And I don�t want too I just want to be free without you But you poisoned my mind. It flows through my veins I wear the terrible stains That you gave me on that day The words you said turned my world gray I couldn�t stay with you any longer It would only make me fonder I didn�t even realize when I went without You I saw what my feelings were really about You�ve poisoned me with your lies You�re killing me with your disguise You made me want you And I don�t want too I just want to be free without you But you poisoned my mind. Ok I guess it was my fault But you made the wound I just poured the salt You really were the joy of my life Though I�m glad you�ll never be my wife Most of this I was just kidding Though I really am saying good ridding I hope you�re happy and doing well Shit what am I saying, I�ll see you in hell So long, so long, you know you�re one of those few And I miss you. Oh I�ll miss you. __________________ "I'm going to wrap you in bacon, and throw you on the grill!!"

04-26-2004, 09:17 PM	#39
Demon with a Glass Hand Cyberpunk Detective Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,477	Blocked It's the words not falling the way they should Spill all the way down the page. It's the words not flowing correctly and getting jumbled together without the proper breaks It's the words too close too far inproperly spaced and seplt wrong It's the words (those damn words!) gettign stuk in my head and not f a l l i n g where I want them to It's the words getting (worse than stuck) Blocked! Refusing to be any use to anyone Especailyl me. Those damn words.

04-25-2004, 05:08 PM	#31
semysane Honourable death! Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Canadia Posts: 99	Man. This thread has made for some kickass poetry. Haiku is not hard You only need syllables To fit the pattern

04-25-2004, 08:09 PM	#33
Demon with a Glass Hand Cyberpunk Detective Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,477	Cheer up, Sourpuss! Sitting Just sitting I'm in one of my moods again And here I am Sitting Just sitting Do nothing Feeling nothing Just ... being ... in one of my moods again So I'm sitting Just sitting And here you are You're here next to me While I'm sitting Just sitting Doing nothing Feeling nothing Just being in one of my moods And be damned if you won't stop poking me!

04-26-2004, 07:17 PM	#37
rightwhatwasidoing? ah...who are you again? Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: I live in my own world, i call it shmooglim. Posts: 227	RaiRai, I hate to ask this, but for english class i need to bring in a piece of poetry that I like and read it to the class. since your poetry is really excellent, can I use the second poem you placed up here? if you say no that's fine, just wanted to make sure it was okay for me to do.

04-27-2004, 09:55 AM	#40
videogamerz2000 The Thunder Dragoon Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Next door Posts: 1,253	Thoughts, words, emotions, Why don't they make sense? Friends, abandoning, Family, leaving, Hobbies, failing. Left alone in a cold world, the words and changing, they are all that's there, ideas are running out, running, like me. All the words..... a light shines, grabbing, hording, yet taken away, replaces with a flask of oil, cold, still cold. Why? What did I do? Why was I puniished? and the world, fades to black. __________________ Thunder Dragoon _______________________________ If I had a nickel for everytime I got drunk with, I would have a very effective nickel sock. To beat people with.