The Dreadful -- Chapter 6 - Page 4

BigDemonicBunny · 07-20-2012, 05:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CABAL49

Seeing now that they share the same bed, I can understand why she wouldn't want Poe sleeping with people. Strange dude funk gets into the sheets.

Worse. Strange Human funk.

MSperoni · 07-21-2012, 10:26 AM

When I was first composing this scene I had that as a possible joke. Like Poe waited till Kit got all settled and then implied that the guy blew his wad all over her side of the bed (and mostly hitting her pillow). Kit was then going to freak out and be like "BURN THE SHEETS! BURN THEM FOREVER!" but I decided not to do that.

I also had a joke where Kit came back into the house and Poe was naked and refused to put her clothes back on. Poe knew it bothered Kit, and she was like "I was going to spend my evening naked so I'm gonna stay naked." and Kit was like "Put your clothes on." and Poe was like "Make me." It was Kinda like an immature sibling power struggle. But I dropped that also.

I'm pretty satisfied with how the scene ended up. Sometimes ideas seem funny initially, or they're good to come up with to help free your mind to think of the good ideas. Like a warm up. Or they serve as examples of what not to do so you can figure out what to do. I'm also not all that big on sex-based or titty jokes. So they have to be incredibly funny and work extremely well with the scene for me to use one.

Yet...I laugh at violence...so maybe my moral priorities aren't all that straight :P

Michael Morris · 07-22-2012, 09:41 AM

As I drifted off to sleep last night this occurred to me

Poe ... Kit

Poe .. Kit

Poe . Kit

Poe Kit

PoeKit

PoKeit

Poke It....

Anagram or double entree? You decide.

MSperoni · 07-22-2012, 12:45 PM

The Dreadful is indeed laced with symbolism.

SaltyKracka · 07-22-2012, 02:49 PM

liiiiiiiipppssss

MSperoni · 07-22-2012, 09:23 PM

Total symbolism.

(edit: to any possible TVtropes or Wiki Peeps out there, I'm just joking

)

MSperoni · 07-24-2012, 10:22 AM

Page 136!

Wait...so he's here and not there? Poor Kit.

MSperoni · 07-27-2012, 10:25 AM

Page 137!

Lucas tells a story. possibly exaggerating some of the details.

greed · 07-27-2012, 10:32 AM

Oh hello, that's an interesting expression she's got there.

MSperoni · 07-27-2012, 10:43 AM

Which panel?

(e: I figured you meant the last one, but I wasn't sure)

07-21-2012, 10:26 AM	#32
MSperoni Artist and Writer of Comics Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,666	When I was first composing this scene I had that as a possible joke. Like Poe waited till Kit got all settled and then implied that the guy blew his wad all over her side of the bed (and mostly hitting her pillow). Kit was then going to freak out and be like "BURN THE SHEETS! BURN THEM FOREVER!" but I decided not to do that. I also had a joke where Kit came back into the house and Poe was naked and refused to put her clothes back on. Poe knew it bothered Kit, and she was like "I was going to spend my evening naked so I'm gonna stay naked." and Kit was like "Put your clothes on." and Poe was like "Make me." It was Kinda like an immature sibling power struggle. But I dropped that also. I'm pretty satisfied with how the scene ended up. Sometimes ideas seem funny initially, or they're good to come up with to help free your mind to think of the good ideas. Like a warm up. Or they serve as examples of what not to do so you can figure out what to do. I'm also not all that big on sex-based or titty jokes. So they have to be incredibly funny and work extremely well with the scene for me to use one. Yet...I laugh at violence...so maybe my moral priorities aren't all that straight :P __________________ I do commissions! So Email me if you'd like anything and we'll work out the details! matts_1104@yahoo.com Follow me on Twitter for Dreadful news and random info! (though mostly it's just me babbling about nerd-stuff) http://twitter.com/#!/mSperoni Check out my Deviant Art page if you'd like to see other pictures I've made! http://exmile.deviantart.com/ Follow The Dreadful on Facebook!

07-22-2012, 12:45 PM	#34
MSperoni Artist and Writer of Comics Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,666	The Dreadful is indeed laced with symbolism. __________________ I do commissions! So Email me if you'd like anything and we'll work out the details! matts_1104@yahoo.com Follow me on Twitter for Dreadful news and random info! (though mostly it's just me babbling about nerd-stuff) http://twitter.com/#!/mSperoni Check out my Deviant Art page if you'd like to see other pictures I've made! http://exmile.deviantart.com/ Follow The Dreadful on Facebook!

07-22-2012, 09:23 PM	#36
MSperoni Artist and Writer of Comics Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,666	Total symbolism. (edit: to any possible TVtropes or Wiki Peeps out there, I'm just joking ) __________________ I do commissions! So Email me if you'd like anything and we'll work out the details! matts_1104@yahoo.com Follow me on Twitter for Dreadful news and random info! (though mostly it's just me babbling about nerd-stuff) http://twitter.com/#!/mSperoni Check out my Deviant Art page if you'd like to see other pictures I've made! http://exmile.deviantart.com/ Follow The Dreadful on Facebook!

07-24-2012, 10:22 AM	#37
MSperoni Artist and Writer of Comics Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,666	Page 136! Wait...so he's here and not there? Poor Kit. __________________ I do commissions! So Email me if you'd like anything and we'll work out the details! matts_1104@yahoo.com Follow me on Twitter for Dreadful news and random info! (though mostly it's just me babbling about nerd-stuff) http://twitter.com/#!/mSperoni Check out my Deviant Art page if you'd like to see other pictures I've made! http://exmile.deviantart.com/ Follow The Dreadful on Facebook!

07-27-2012, 10:25 AM	#38
MSperoni Artist and Writer of Comics Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,666	Page 137! Lucas tells a story. possibly exaggerating some of the details. __________________ I do commissions! So Email me if you'd like anything and we'll work out the details! matts_1104@yahoo.com Follow me on Twitter for Dreadful news and random info! (though mostly it's just me babbling about nerd-stuff) http://twitter.com/#!/mSperoni Check out my Deviant Art page if you'd like to see other pictures I've made! http://exmile.deviantart.com/ Follow The Dreadful on Facebook!

07-22-2012, 09:41 AM	#33
Michael Morris Usually Lurking Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Knoxville TN Posts: 153	As I drifted off to sleep last night this occurred to me Poe ... Kit Poe .. Kit Poe . Kit Poe Kit PoeKit PoKeit Poke It.... Anagram or double entree? You decide.

07-22-2012, 02:49 PM	#35
SaltyKracka Impossibly White Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: My own little dream world Posts: 135	liiiiiiiipppssss

07-27-2012, 10:43 AM	#40
MSperoni Artist and Writer of Comics Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,666	Which panel? (e: I figured you meant the last one, but I wasn't sure) __________________ I do commissions! So Email me if you'd like anything and we'll work out the details! matts_1104@yahoo.com Follow me on Twitter for Dreadful news and random info! (though mostly it's just me babbling about nerd-stuff) http://twitter.com/#!/mSperoni Check out my Deviant Art page if you'd like to see other pictures I've made! http://exmile.deviantart.com/ Follow The Dreadful on Facebook!