5 minute poetry - Page 49

Terex4 · 11-18-2004, 10:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Icythaco
Rebuttle in Noir:

I offer this rebuttle

Ode to Logic

Some say there are worse things in life than to have it all end,
But there are finer things as well, but for some your mind must bend.
We say things must be explained and be shown on pen and paper,
Sadly some have taken lady art, and they have cruelly raped her.
Some see the need to take the time to analyze all the parts,
To that I say “analyze this” you’ll never take my art.
Woe and behold I say! The power of the abstract mind,
I have the power to create, you have only what you find.

Krylo · 11-18-2004, 11:20 PM

Icy: Don't be a fucking ass. Seriously. If you don't like the poetry just say so, you don't have to make a whole poem about how much it sucks.

Demon: Also don't be an ass, even if he's being an ass first.

Same goes for you Druid.

...I find that being a mod is kind of like babysitting a bunch of two year olds. Is it so much to ask that you all act maturely and NOT insult each other like this?

Next insult poem earns a probation.

shiney · 11-19-2004, 03:35 AM

icy...shut the fuck up.

I've had it with trying to not go over the top when people act like shitbags. You can go to hell and take your goddamn attitude with you. Little mister argument. I'm so tired of seeing your name all over the place, and so often when trouble is involved.

So for the next week I highly doubt I will be seeing your name anywhere at all.

FOR REFERENCE TO ALL CONCERNING POETRY: poetry is made for the poet. It is expression of feeling. It is not rhymed words or lack thereof, it is not desperate emotion or lack thereof, it is not structure or lack thereof. It is not any one single thing. Poetry is what the poet wants it to be. Poetry is poetry. It can't be defined in any single way any more than you can describe love. So quit trying to fucking compartmentalize things.

Dante · 11-19-2004, 04:35 PM

Lost as if in a dream
I seek the shadow
Of one who has swirled away...
Abandoning friends,
Abandoning humanity.
What awaits us all
Is the path to emptiness.
Knowing my heart
The flowers weep,
And the wild birds cry.

***RaiRai*** · 11-19-2004, 04:50 PM

As if in a dream
life floats just out of our reach
I dare to take it.

BlackMageGirl! · 11-19-2004, 05:02 PM

"Yuudou"

He returned some time ago
Relieved, finally free
Then I met him, a new friend

He brought along
A bright presence
Never darkened his time with us

Though, seeming to some
He was insensitive
Just trying to be a funny guy

I know though, it wasn't true
That he does indeed
Care about things, and about others

And now, once again
He has to leave,
He will be missed by all...

Dona Maria · 11-19-2004, 08:02 PM

another pile of brain vomit, this time as a song:

Remember When
Remember when
we would lay on the floor
and wonder what life had in store.

Remember when
I didn't have to hide
the feelings I kept inside?

Do you remember?

Chorus:
But now we've reached the end
and crossed the line from lover to friend.
But I'll still remember
I'll still remember when...

we cried with eachother on the beach
with happiness just within our reach.

Remember when
the night you kissed away my tears
and with your love banished all my fears.

Chorus:
But now we've reached the end
and I've crossed the line from a lover to a friend.
But I'll still remember..
I still remember when...

Funka Genocide · 11-19-2004, 11:37 PM

white outlines amidst a backdrop
so black and ill defined
such flowing motion, never stops
it really blows my mind!

this is a tribute to Dona Maria's Avatar, as I have previously stated (multiple times I think) everytime I see it it steals away at least three minutes from my life

back and forth... its mesmerizing!

Osterbaum · 11-20-2004, 07:45 AM

I need it

The day starts as any other
A "normal" friday, just another day
I wake up, I have work to get to
But really, why bother?

I don't want to live like I do
I want to experience life
I want to be able to live
Live life fully and have things to go on for

To have a destination to get to and stay there not too long
To have no ultimate goal
To have someone in my life
To have a meaning and to be always on the move so I don't really have to belong

I want to travel and be my self I guess you could say
But I mean not anything that simple
I want more, and I know I can achieve it
I do not want to do it in an allready planned way

I will achieve it
With or without your help
No matter which way
But I will try forever

If everything could only rhyme...

I live not for tomorrow
And not for today
I live for a life time
I try to make everything rhyme

Cause that way everything will be in harmony
Nothing to make us hate eachother
Just to leave ateas(?)
Everyone together, in peace

Dante · 11-20-2004, 08:44 AM

Thank you.
Thank you for seven years of friendship
For the long hours we spoke
For keeping me company in the silent hours,
Thank you.

Thank you.
Thank you for staying to talk to me.
For being so animeishly friendly.
For giving me something to look forward to,
Thank you.

But...

Thank you.
Thank you for introducing him to me.
For giving me someone who likes what I like
For letting me meet a new partner,
Thank you.

And now...

Thank you.
Thank you for breaking my heart
For making me feel like worthless scum
For making me hate myself,
Fuck you.

11-18-2004, 11:20 PM	#482
Krylo The Straightest Shota Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: It's a secret to everybody. Posts: 17,789	Icy: Don't be a fucking ass. Seriously. If you don't like the poetry just say so, you don't have to make a whole poem about how much it sucks. Demon: Also don't be an ass, even if he's being an ass first. Same goes for you Druid. ...I find that being a mod is kind of like babysitting a bunch of two year olds. Is it so much to ask that you all act maturely and NOT insult each other like this? Next insult poem earns a probation. __________________ I am very tired.

11-19-2004, 03:35 AM	#483
shiney Derrrrrrrrrrrrrp. Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: The land of fartz and buttz Posts: 8,266	icy...shut the fuck up. I've had it with trying to not go over the top when people act like shitbags. You can go to hell and take your goddamn attitude with you. Little mister argument. I'm so tired of seeing your name all over the place, and so often when trouble is involved. So for the next week I highly doubt I will be seeing your name anywhere at all. FOR REFERENCE TO ALL CONCERNING POETRY: poetry is made for the poet. It is expression of feeling. It is not rhymed words or lack thereof, it is not desperate emotion or lack thereof, it is not structure or lack thereof. It is not any one single thing. Poetry is what the poet wants it to be. Poetry is poetry. It can't be defined in any single way any more than you can describe love. So quit trying to fucking compartmentalize things. __________________ boop

11-19-2004, 04:50 PM	#485
*RaiRai* Check mate. Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Down your pants. Posts: 2,210	As if in a dream life floats just out of our reach I dare to take it. __________________ I AM FURIOUS

11-19-2004, 05:02 PM	#486
BlackMageGirl! Oh hi! :D Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Currently in reality! Posts: 2,688	"Yuudou" He returned some time ago Relieved, finally free Then I met him, a new friend He brought along A bright presence Never darkened his time with us Though, seeming to some He was insensitive Just trying to be a funny guy I know though, it wasn't true That he does indeed Care about things, and about others And now, once again He has to leave, He will be missed by all... Last edited by BlackMageGirl!; 12-16-2004 at 06:26 PM.

11-19-2004, 08:02 PM	#487
Dona Maria tastes like burning Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: somewhere orange Posts: 436	another pile of brain vomit, this time as a song: Remember When Remember when we would lay on the floor and wonder what life had in store. Remember when I didn't have to hide the feelings I kept inside? Do you remember? Chorus: But now we've reached the end and crossed the line from lover to friend. But I'll still remember I'll still remember when... we cried with eachother on the beach with happiness just within our reach. Remember when the night you kissed away my tears and with your love banished all my fears. Chorus: But now we've reached the end and I've crossed the line from a lover to a friend. But I'll still remember.. I still remember when... __________________ Between Christopher Marlow and William Shakespeare: Will: I wrote you another sonnet. Chris: No! How many times have I told you: No more sonnets! How many is that anyway? Will: About a hundred

11-19-2004, 04:35 PM	#484
Dante Sent to the cornfield Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Crushing the weak beneath the iron jackboots of tyranny Posts: 7,703	Lost as if in a dream I seek the shadow Of one who has swirled away... Abandoning friends, Abandoning humanity. What awaits us all Is the path to emptiness. Knowing my heart The flowers weep, And the wild birds cry.

11-19-2004, 11:37 PM	#488
Funka Genocide Sent to the cornfield Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 4,566	white outlines amidst a backdrop so black and ill defined such flowing motion, never stops it really blows my mind! this is a tribute to Dona Maria's Avatar, as I have previously stated (multiple times I think) everytime I see it it steals away at least three minutes from my life back and forth... its mesmerizing!

11-20-2004, 07:45 AM	#489
Osterbaum The revolution will be memed! Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: FIN Posts: 5,967	I need it The day starts as any other A "normal" friday, just another day I wake up, I have work to get to But really, why bother? I don't want to live like I do I want to experience life I want to be able to live Live life fully and have things to go on for To have a destination to get to and stay there not too long To have no ultimate goal To have someone in my life To have a meaning and to be always on the move so I don't really have to belong I want to travel and be my self I guess you could say But I mean not anything that simple I want more, and I know I can achieve it I do not want to do it in an allready planned way I will achieve it With or without your help No matter which way But I will try forever If everything could only rhyme... I live not for tomorrow And not for today I live for a life time I try to make everything rhyme Cause that way everything will be in harmony Nothing to make us hate eachother Just to leave ateas(?) Everyone together, in peace __________________ D is for Dirty Commie! Last edited by Osterbaum; 02-20-2005 at 03:40 PM.

11-20-2004, 08:44 AM	#490
Dante Sent to the cornfield Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Crushing the weak beneath the iron jackboots of tyranny Posts: 7,703	Thank you. Thank you for seven years of friendship For the long hours we spoke For keeping me company in the silent hours, Thank you. Thank you. Thank you for staying to talk to me. For being so animeishly friendly. For giving me something to look forward to, Thank you. But... Thank you. Thank you for introducing him to me. For giving me someone who likes what I like For letting me meet a new partner, Thank you. And now... Thank you. Thank you for breaking my heart For making me feel like worthless scum For making me hate myself, Fuck you.