Post your sketches here! - Page 61

MasterOfMagic · 08-03-2004, 03:05 PM

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Originally Posted by Steve L.

I know you didn't ask for it, but drawings look much better when they are on plain paper. Just a tip. But it's good, I'm not very good at drawing women...

I know, I know, but I like keeping all my drawings in a notebook (you now like a scetchbook), and I haven't gotten around to buying one specifically for scetching. i.e. one that has plain paper. Until I stop being so lazy, you'll just have to bear with me.

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Originally Posted by madhatter

Nice work everyone. Another tip is that with women, the hips should be slightly wider than the shoulders (and vice versa with men).

Thanks for the tip, I'll try it next time. Love the fairy, btw.

chickens_rock · 08-03-2004, 03:24 PM

female novice character from ragnarok lol its one of my good pictures ^^

dragonglove · 08-03-2004, 04:56 PM

The armor is very detailed. I don't know about the hairstyle though, but then again, I don't know about Ragnarok online much either. I do like the quote on the side.

MasterOfMagic · 08-03-2004, 05:02 PM

Hairstyle is fine. Legs, and a few other things are a little bit wavy, but I like it.

EDIT: Here's one of mine. I was working mainly on shading. How did I do?

darkrank1 · 08-04-2004, 05:01 PM

I don't think it is That good, could use quite a bit of work. The hand holding the nice sword needs some work,(it's to small) but it can be a very nice drawing. I think it has potential.

Chickens Chick's hair style looks like that of Marche's of Final Fantasy Tactics Advanced, but just a little bit too edgy for it. It could also use some work, especially in the legs and foot department.

If someone considers this Flaming, Fine, I haven't shown up too much here lately anyways, and only Celes gave me feedback on my sketches, So...
BITE THIS SORRY LITTLE :bmage: !!!

MasterOfMagic · 08-04-2004, 05:11 PM

Hey, hey, hey. No need to be an ass. If you want some feedback on your sketches, just ask nicely, and someone will. Quite frankly, I thought Celes said all there was to say, which is why I didn't add to it.

And your first two paragraphs were fine. Its the third one that makes it seem like a flame.

I'll work on the hand, any thing else wrong with it?

CelesJessa · 08-04-2004, 05:20 PM

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Originally Posted by darkrank1

Fine, I haven't shown up too much here lately anyways, and only Celes gave me feedback on my sketches, So...
BITE THIS SORRY LITTLE :bmage: !!!

No need to be angry because you didn't get any feedback. Lots of people probably don't get feedback all of the time. (especially on oekaki boards)

Also, MasterofMagic, I think it's very nice. Great shading. The only shading thing I would suggest it maybe a little more defined shadow from the sword. I don't think the hand holding the sword is too small, I think it's the head that needs to be a little smaller (which makes other things seem too small) Typically, sholders are the same length as the height of the head. (from chin to the top of the head.) So remembering that keeps heads in proportion.

Other than that, it's great! Great job with the cape.

Demon with a Glass Hand · 08-04-2004, 05:38 PM

I concur, Master of Magic. The size of the head is not in proportion to the rest of the body.

And while the hand is also out of proportion, the sword is very well done.

As for the shading, I can't give any constructive criticism. I have trouble with shading, too. (but that's about to change!)

Steve L. · 08-05-2004, 01:19 PM

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Originally Posted by CelesJessa

No need to be angry because you didn't get any feedback. Lots of people probably don't get feedback all of the time. (especially on oekaki boards)

Also, MasterofMagic, I think it's very nice. Great shading. The only shading thing I would suggest it maybe a little more defined shadow from the sword. I don't think the hand holding the sword is too small, I think it's the head that needs to be a little smaller (which makes other things seem too small) Typically, sholders are the same length as the height of the head. (from chin to the top of the head.) So remembering that keeps heads in proportion.

Other than that, it's great! Great job with the cape.

Wow, I never knew that. Is there a site that says which body parts should match, be half the size of, etc.? Or, did you read this in a book, or did you find these things out yourself?

On another note: Currently drawing Naruto, I'll post it up when I'm finished.

darkrank1 · 08-05-2004, 03:06 PM

New Scetch

I am sorry to have been so mean to the little black mage smilie. I am also sorry about what all I said last time, but I have a new drawing up and all, ready for veiwing and hoping that I can get some feedback.

08-03-2004, 03:24 PM	#602
chickens_rock ...then there was a spork Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 40	female novice character from ragnarok lol its one of my good pictures ^^ __________________ My Site :fighter: :Run for the hills! your swords as shiney as they may be, are powerless against the spider's wrath! The invisible spider god will smite us all! noone is safe! all is doomed! the black apocalyptic skies rain with spidery death! WHY HATH YE GODS FORSAKEN US? WHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYY?

08-03-2004, 04:56 PM	#603
dragonglove Knight of El Dingo Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 642	The armor is very detailed. I don't know about the hairstyle though, but then again, I don't know about Ragnarok online much either. I do like the quote on the side. __________________ Dg's back, maybe. I swear "Forum Days" will return someday. War is no reason to end a friendship. Metal Gear Solid

08-03-2004, 05:02 PM	#604
MasterOfMagic ahahah Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 3,456	Hairstyle is fine. Legs, and a few other things are a little bit wavy, but I like it. EDIT: Here's one of mine. I was working mainly on shading. How did I do? Last edited by MasterOfMagic; 08-04-2004 at 01:54 PM.

08-04-2004, 05:01 PM	#605
darkrank1 Warlord2222 Join Date: May 2004 Location: Abilene, TX Posts: 28	I don't think it is That good, could use quite a bit of work. The hand holding the nice sword needs some work,(it's to small) but it can be a very nice drawing. I think it has potential. Chickens Chick's hair style looks like that of Marche's of Final Fantasy Tactics Advanced, but just a little bit too edgy for it. It could also use some work, especially in the legs and foot department. If someone considers this Flaming, Fine, I haven't shown up too much here lately anyways, and only Celes gave me feedback on my sketches, So... BITE THIS SORRY LITTLE :bmage: !!! __________________ "A master of darkness, he is the epitimy of the demon lords. He is the Warlord of all he commands, And a leader of the clan: Dark Rank..." --Me "Darkness rules a school in the heart of town. The rituals there are of the darkest in the world. In the midst of the heresy, 1 truth is still to be found. That is to show that even in the dweariest places that light can still shine." -- Me Last edited by darkrank1; 08-04-2004 at 05:05 PM. Reason: Need to finish

08-05-2004, 03:06 PM	#610
darkrank1 Warlord2222 Join Date: May 2004 Location: Abilene, TX Posts: 28	New Scetch I am sorry to have been so mean to the little black mage smilie. I am also sorry about what all I said last time, but I have a new drawing up and all, ready for veiwing and hoping that I can get some feedback. __________________ "A master of darkness, he is the epitimy of the demon lords. He is the Warlord of all he commands, And a leader of the clan: Dark Rank..." --Me "Darkness rules a school in the heart of town. The rituals there are of the darkest in the world. In the midst of the heresy, 1 truth is still to be found. That is to show that even in the dweariest places that light can still shine." -- Me

08-04-2004, 05:11 PM	#606
MasterOfMagic ahahah Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 3,456	Hey, hey, hey. No need to be an ass. If you want some feedback on your sketches, just ask nicely, and someone will. Quite frankly, I thought Celes said all there was to say, which is why I didn't add to it. And your first two paragraphs were fine. Its the third one that makes it seem like a flame. I'll work on the hand, any thing else wrong with it?

08-04-2004, 05:38 PM	#608
Demon with a Glass Hand Cyberpunk Detective Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,477	I concur, Master of Magic. The size of the head is not in proportion to the rest of the body. And while the hand is also out of proportion, the sword is very well done. As for the shading, I can't give any constructive criticism. I have trouble with shading, too. (but that's about to change!)