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Unread 01-12-2010, 01:16 PM   #61
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I'm away from my home computer, but I think I have a few things to comment on your bio. (Other than the fact that you're the first person with a duplicate class. =P)

1: Isn't your total hitpoints supposed to be 10 + Vit Score + Job class HP modifier? I think you forgot to add your VIT score.

2: Some of your skills are too high. Example would be your 3 negotiation and your 3 tinkering synthesis, which requires a rating of 3 for Cha and Int respectively.

3: I think you might have a few skill points leftover? You got Skillful Hero, which means your total skill points would add up to 20 + Int Score (not rating) + 10 (Skillful Hero).

There might be a few other things to check, but I don't have the rulebook in front of me. Sorry.
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Unread 01-12-2010, 01:24 PM   #62
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My job class gives +3 hp a level and my vit is 4 for +7 a level I believe?
I thought under skills it's rating +1 for maximum?
I'll recheck the skill point usage now though
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Unread 01-12-2010, 01:26 PM   #63
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Ah, right. ^^; Sorry about that. Like I said, I don't have the rules book in front of me. I was reading your "HP per level thing" and it said 7, so I automatically took that as your thief hp modifier.

Mind you, if you want to save the skill points for later, there is that option too.
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Unread 01-12-2010, 01:33 PM   #64
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Yep I think I will from what I can see I have a single spare skill point at the moment

My skill formula should be 18 (thief class) +7 (int) + 10 (job ability)

I'll post up my Bio in a bit I've one already approved for posting but I want to fluff it out a little more than I have already

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Unread 01-12-2010, 09:23 PM   #65
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Just to push things ahead, I'm going to make a post, and run on the assumption that Ralts heard what happened.
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Unread 01-14-2010, 08:28 PM   #66
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Bleh hopefully the people who are in my group post up their char sheets soon ^^
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Unread 01-15-2010, 03:09 AM   #67
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I'll probably post tomorrow (AKA later today). Sorry for the holdup.
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Unread 01-15-2010, 04:51 AM   #68
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Dammit Ecurt, just when I think I understand this system you go and change the signups on me!! XD

Anyway, I'm pretty sure I messed something up here, but I have no idea what. Lemmie know if something looks wrong.

Name: Irving Tellar
Race/Job: Hume/ Red Mage
Level:1 (LOLOLOL IRVING SUCKS)

Boring StuffAttribute Current Rating Maximum
STR 7 +2 20
DEX 6 +2 20
VIT 3 +1 15
INT 7 +2 25
CHA 7 +2 25

HP: 16/16 ACC:4 P.ARM: 4 HP/Level: +6
MP: 20/20 EVA:9 M.ARM: 4 MP/Level: +10


Attack Type Accuracy Damage Special Properties
Short Sword. Tier 1, (STR x 1) +1d6 damage

0 Acrobatics – DEX______________________0 Axes – STR/DEX
3 Acting – CHA__________________________0 Bows - DEX
2 Awareness – INT_______________________0 Daggers – DEX
0 Climbing – STR/DEX____________________0 Brawl – STR/DEX
0 Disguise – CHA/INT____________________0 Guns – DEX
0 Escape – DEX__________________________0 Katanas – DEX
3 Healing – INT_________________________0 Massive – STR
3 Inquiry – INT/CHA_____________________0 Polearms – STR/DEX
2 Language – INT________________________0 Staves – DEX/INT
0 Lockpicking – DEX_____________________3 Swords – STR/DEX
0 Lore (Espers) – INT___________________0 Two Weapons – DEX
0 Navigation – INT______________________0 Weapon Systems - INT
3 Negotiation – CHA
0 Perform – CHA_________________________0 Light Armor – DEX/INT
0 Riding – DEX__________________________1 Medium Armor – DEX
0 Stealth – DEX_________________________0 Heavy Armor – STR/VIT
0 Survival – INT
0 Swimming - STR/VIT)
0 Synthesis (Alchemical) - INT
0 Synthesis (Armorsmithing) - INT
0 Synthesis (Cooking) - INT
0 Synthesis (Machines) - INT
0 Synthesis (Tailoring) - INT
0 Synthesis (Tinkering) - INT
0 Synthesis (Weaponsmithing) - INT
0 Systems – INT_________________________EXP: 0
2 Trade – CHA___________________________Gil: 150
0 Traps – INT / DEX_____________________Destiny: 1
0 Vehicles – DEX________________________Affiliation: 0


Armor/Accessory:
Nomad’s Outfit (Tier 1, ARM: 4, M.ARM:4, +1 EVA)


Job Abilities: Crimson Seal, Runic

Epic Ability: Doublecast

Inventory:
Gil- 150
Potion (x2)
Ether (x1)

Traits: Charming, Pretender

Languages:
Common, Ancient


Limit Breaks:
None

Magic List:
Cure I (5 MP)


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Appearance: Irving stands just shy of 6ft, has blue eyes and a light complexion, and is a bit on the scrawny side. In a mystery that has stumped the wisest of men, he somehow manages to be incredibly charming and persuasive despite having a name like “Irving” and the fashion sense of a visually-impaired 3-year-old. His clothes are usually red in color in homage to his chosen profession, but generally seem to be comprised of bits and pieces of various outfits matched together for no apparent reason. His hair is shoulder-length and brown, usually in a low ponytail and, more often than not, covered by a large red hat. He thinks the hat makes him look dashing. He’s probably wrong.

Background: Irving was born into a family of merchants. Their successful shop in Rios had been passed down from generation to generation, and unfortunately Irving was next in line to inherit. Possessing a desire for knowledge and adventure, a low tolerance level for mundane tasks, and a reputation for being flighty and overconfident, Irving probably would have been the worst businessman in the history of modern civilization. Luckily, he developed some skill in the magical arts and, on a whim, decided to pursue a career in red magic and adventuring. His parents were secretly relieved. Still, they never expected this to become a permanent occupation: Most people figured he’d take off on some adventure, lose interest or finances, and then show up on his family’s doorstep again within a month. He has thus far proven the naysayers wrong, and has somehow managed to keep himself from getting killed. No one's sure how.

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Unread 01-15-2010, 12:12 PM   #69
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Group 3 already has a Red Mage and a Thief? They are following in the footsteps of greatness for sure.

I also find funny that Irving was a name I briefly considered for Ralts as a last name, but then I decided that something with an R and an M was better. I later remembered that Ralts was also the name of a pokemon.

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Unread 01-15-2010, 01:43 PM   #70
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Things that are wrong: Your HP should be 16, not 19; and your MP should be 20. The formulas for these stats at level one are 10+VIT(3)+Job Modifier(3) for HP and 10+INT(7)+Job Modifier(3) for MP. Also, if you want to get the +1 EVA from the Nomad's Outfit, you need one point in the Medium Armor skill. Oh, and your EVA is on point too high, since DEX Rating 2+Job bonus 6+1 from the armor is 9. I might've missed something though, don't take my word for all this.

Wait, one last thing, you have Gil listed as zero in the skill block (which is a weird place for Gil and Exp to be) and 500 in the inventory block. I don't know if Ecurt started you guys with more money, so I can't say what it should be.

Crud, also you get +6 HP/level and +10 MP/level.

Maybe I should go over Sifright's sheet, too...
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