07-27-2004, 01:36 PM | #1 |
Check mate.
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Run on poetry.
Okay. I thought a different approach to poetry could be fun for some of us. This particular thread is dealing with run on poetry. Basically, one user starts off with something poetic and the next user continues on. So in the end you have a thread filled with one long poem. It can change in style, context, content and use whatever metaphors and formats you like. The only thing I would ask this time around is that the poem RHYMES. So have fun!
--- Within the blink of an eye the day changes again from sunshine and happiness to saddness and rain
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I AM FURIOUS
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07-27-2004, 02:00 PM | #2 |
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Perhaps this will change the way we see things
but that all depends on what next year brings For the rain eventually will stop and the saddness as well however if not we will spiral into a hell For rivers will flood and change their own course and drepression will run wild like a mad horse |
07-27-2004, 02:03 PM | #3 |
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But I know that some day
the sun will break through the clouds will give way and I will find you
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07-27-2004, 02:05 PM | #4 |
Check mate.
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through hills and valleys, green and blue
tempted by beauty, hope gleaming through the greys of the clouds that lurk overhead wishing for rainbows and sunsets of red wild stallions that run through fields not wanting to falter, never to yeild these emotions are chaos within one so weak dare to open my eyes, yet alone lips to speak
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07-27-2004, 02:11 PM | #5 |
Derrrrrrrrrrrrrp.
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a shimmer of hope from far up ahead
to climb up the slope escaping from dread to look down below and see what you've done proceed with a glow, a feeling you've won now you surge on forth to seek out your heart east west south and north, just finding the start to build up a life complete in yourself leave always the strife behind on the shelf
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07-27-2004, 07:19 PM | #6 |
Sacred Samurai Gunslinger
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But take with you your hopes and dreams
They will give you comfort from life's morbid scream Trust in what you all ready know is true Listen to experience old and new No matter how rocky the road is don't give into despair Gain faith from family, friends or say a silent prayer
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07-28-2004, 02:15 AM | #7 |
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when the sun goes down remember the day
the time when the sun brightens your day bring with you that memory through times of woe and it will lead you on down the road and dont faulter when loved ones die dont forget them and try to lie just remember the times you had and you know that would've made them glad
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07-28-2004, 04:03 AM | #8 |
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When night falls upon you darkling,
Don't falter your step or fear, For free for all taking, Your hope lies so near, Power greater than darkness' mire, Yet softer than light, Warmer than fire, Love returns sight,
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07-28-2004, 04:57 AM | #9 |
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for even such grief is a portion of life
it is joy which lends purpose to strife if all that were known were happier things gone are these passionate, melancholy strings a song born from sorrow, fathered by loss release felt when angered,whenever grown cross do not hate sadness, for it is the canvas upon which is drawn by a masters hand this delicate portrait of beauty and wonder |
07-28-2004, 09:56 AM | #10 |
Sacred Samurai Gunslinger
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The Midnight sky is lit before you
Filled with wonder and amazement all for view It is your cloak, hood and vale Laced with diamonds and shown in detail Giving you concealment from what the daylight brings But still providing a guiding light with moon silver wings This is life that can be so pure It is the anesthetic, a temporary cure Even wounds that run very deep Can be healed with night's blissful sleep
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